04/01/08 - New to the Game!!

p-money123 · 04-02-2008, 12:41 AM

my rap lyrics i have no fuckin clue how to fuckin write bars but ill try im at a very young age so please bare with me thank you

if someone could please help me learn how to write bars its well appreciated

I'm gettin sick of dis bitch she a dumb ass snitch

i hates rats thats why we packin in dese gats

the whole world gunna
know you's a hoe so stop tryin to play me before i blow..

il pop one in yuh..... pop two in yuh ...3......and 4. You aint
nuttin to me ...cant cha see.. you aint my mom and you aint family..

da day i met you you ruined my life now its pay
back its either my gun or my knife

il stab you il shoot you il murder you il chew you up you dumb ass dike ..now turn up the mic
yea!! this is p-money and i aint gunna stop till its da end of my lyfe..

Grandmaster G · 04-02-2008, 02:05 AM

dont rap man......uve posted here before i remmber u....it aint cuttin for u....and it will never work for u

thats my suggestion!!!!! stay in school!!

p-money123 · 04-02-2008, 02:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grandmaster G

dont rap man......uve posted here before i remmber u....it aint cuttin for u....and it will never work for u

thats my suggestion!!!!! stay in school!!

yo homie i dont know what your talkin bout everyone said they like how i raped but i just need to write it in bars form so dont try to hold me down

Deep South Kid · 04-02-2008, 02:17 AM

Watch the judges advice at the end of the clip, and take it as yours. Good luck.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=uqzF3YL8laM

Grandmaster G · 04-02-2008, 03:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by p-money123

yo homie i dont know what your talkin bout everyone said they like how i raped but i just need to write it in bars form so dont try to hold me down

im not tryin to hold you down......every teenager will say that!!! the reason why is that they are just amazed and amused that one of their fellow classmates is rhymin....its simple as that.........they are just in the moment and cheerin u on

and yeah they like how u rape

Just_Blaze · 04-02-2008, 02:07 PM

Man, your shit is fiyaahhhh!!!!

Go to new york man.. hop on the mixtape scene... You'll make it man foreal!

Baller · 04-02-2008, 03:12 PM

c/s just blaze

Ghosfienz · 04-09-2008, 10:48 PM

fuckin fag----

Baller · 04-09-2008, 11:22 PM

why bump this thread?.....take an L and move along queer

KING BHOB · 04-10-2008, 12:28 AM

cryyyyyyyyyyiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin @ ''everyone said they like how i raped but''

Just_Blaze · 04-10-2008, 12:42 AM

fuck bhob.

r1rydr · 04-18-2008, 12:14 PM

Dont rap bout gats and stabbin ppl and all this shit.. rap bout somthing that u done.. or learned bout, that doesnt sound ignorant and stupid.. and dont try to copy what u hear on MainStream rappers say all the time cuz 90% of them dont do that shit either... they watch movies and "GangLand" on tv and write notes to know what to rap bout.. and its not "Raped" (LMAO) soo ya.. go to school...

Grandmaster G · 04-18-2008, 07:25 PM

uhhhh,....u didnt have to bump this............

04-02-2008, 12:41 AM	#1
p-money123 Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 102 Repped: 0 Repped 31 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	04/01/08 - New to the Game!! 04/01/08 - New to the Game!! my rap lyrics i have no fuckin clue how to fuckin write bars but ill try im at a very young age so please bare with me thank you if someone could please help me learn how to write bars its well appreciated I'm gettin sick of dis bitch she a dumb ass snitch i hates rats thats why we packin in dese gats the whole world gunna know you's a hoe so stop tryin to play me before i blow.. il pop one in yuh..... pop two in yuh ...3......and 4. You aint nuttin to me ...cant cha see.. you aint my mom and you aint family.. da day i met you you ruined my life now its pay back its either my gun or my knife il stab you il shoot you il murder you il chew you up you dumb ass dike ..now turn up the mic yea!! this is p-money and i aint gunna stop till its da end of my lyfe..

04-02-2008, 02:17 AM	#4
Deep South Kid UnderGround UnderPressure Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Mexico City Posts: 6,176 Repped: 17 Repped 446 Times in 138 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Watch the judges advice at the end of the clip, and take it as yours. Good luck. http://youtube.com/watch?v=uqzF3YL8laM __________________ guess whos back up in the building, mind on a million...

04-02-2008, 02:07 PM	#6
Just_Blaze Thread Jacker Numero Uno! Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Nu Jers.. It's that on top muzik! Posts: 3,641 Repped: 131 Repped 146 Times in 103 Posts Neg Reps: 11 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Man, your shit is fiyaahhhh!!!! Go to new york man.. hop on the mixtape scene... You'll make it man foreal! __________________ "tell blaze to stop it wit the embarassing posts.....he's making everything die" - Grandmaster G

04-02-2008, 03:12 PM	#7
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,097 Repped: 111 Repped 255 Times in 149 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	c/s just blaze __________________

04-09-2008, 10:48 PM	#8
Ghosfienz Vancity Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: 604 Canada BC Posts: 1,013 Repped: 517 Repped 27 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 15 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 3 Posts	fuckin fag---- __________________

04-02-2008, 02:05 AM	#2
Grandmaster G Veteran Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: . Posts: 8,274 Repped: 1 Repped 105 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 7 Posts	dont rap man......uve posted here before i remmber u....it aint cuttin for u....and it will never work for u thats my suggestion!!!!! stay in school!!

04-09-2008, 11:22 PM	#9
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,097 Repped: 111 Repped 255 Times in 149 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	why bump this thread?.....take an L and move along queer __________________

04-10-2008, 12:28 AM	#10
KING BHOB P.O.L.O/Attention:Deficit Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: East Side Pennsylvania Posts: 2,189 Repped: 0 Repped 590 Times in 201 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 20 Posts	cryyyyyyyyyyiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin @ ''everyone said they like how i raped but'' __________________ >\|>\|>\|> http://twitter.com/KingBhob <\|<\|<\|< >>>>>>>LIFE

04-10-2008, 12:42 AM	#11
Just_Blaze Thread Jacker Numero Uno! Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Nu Jers.. It's that on top muzik! Posts: 3,641 Repped: 131 Repped 146 Times in 103 Posts Neg Reps: 11 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	fuck bhob. __________________ "tell blaze to stop it wit the embarassing posts.....he's making everything die" - Grandmaster G

04-18-2008, 12:14 PM	#12
r1rydr Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 176 Repped: 26 Repped 40 Times in 15 Posts Neg Reps: 9 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 10 Posts	Dont rap bout gats and stabbin ppl and all this shit.. rap bout somthing that u done.. or learned bout, that doesnt sound ignorant and stupid.. and dont try to copy what u hear on MainStream rappers say all the time cuz 90% of them dont do that shit either... they watch movies and "GangLand" on tv and write notes to know what to rap bout.. and its not "Raped" (LMAO) soo ya.. go to school...

04-18-2008, 07:25 PM	#13
Grandmaster G Veteran Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: . Posts: 8,274 Repped: 1 Repped 105 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 7 Posts	uhhhh,....u didnt have to bump this............

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