Ri$e_88 - New Here Looking for a crew to join

Ri$e_88 · 07-14-2006, 10:40 PM

Your first mistake, is that you wanted to go flow for flow
But my lyrical, was too much for you to bargain fo'
My mic checkin is life threatenin
The style I use can't be defused, it only deton-nates
There's no escape once you enter my zone
See my vocal tone, it's Gulf War Syndrome
Many conspire, to overthrow my style
Cuz a killer for hire, can never retire
Only retaliate with forty-fives and thirty-eights
and escalate, the wack MC's death rate
My slugs scoot out, in a shoot out, bring the loot out
Yo move out, we find a new route
Cause to hold it down, these dumb clowns wanna go the round
I'm layin wack MC's down with my fo'-pound
And then obliterate your whole town
You shoulda never crossed this killer, bet you know now

lokia · 07-14-2006, 11:27 PM

ur in the wrong place

Ri$e_88 · 07-23-2006, 04:29 PM

just Looking for feedback

Ri$e_88 · 07-23-2006, 04:30 PM

and ya i kno it's the wrong place i accidently posted it here

DJ Shinobi [RA] · 07-23-2006, 04:43 PM

better than average, keep it up.

Ri$e_88 · 07-24-2006, 04:43 AM

thanks that was just my first freestyle on here i got more now tho in the Freestyle section

07-14-2006, 10:40 PM	#1
Ri$e_88 Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: T.Dot (Toronto) Posts: 1,416 Repped: 347 Repped 747 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Ri$e_88 - New Here Looking for a crew to join Ri$e_88 - New Here Looking for a crew to join Your first mistake, is that you wanted to go flow for flow But my lyrical, was too much for you to bargain fo' My mic checkin is life threatenin The style I use can't be defused, it only deton-nates There's no escape once you enter my zone See my vocal tone, it's Gulf War Syndrome Many conspire, to overthrow my style Cuz a killer for hire, can never retire Only retaliate with forty-fives and thirty-eights and escalate, the wack MC's death rate My slugs scoot out, in a shoot out, bring the loot out Yo move out, we find a new route Cause to hold it down, these dumb clowns wanna go the round I'm layin wack MC's down with my fo'-pound And then obliterate your whole town You shoulda never crossed this killer, bet you know now

07-23-2006, 04:43 PM	#5
DJ Shinobi [RA] Slangologist nahmsayin? Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: California Posts: 2,488 Repped: 82 Repped 69 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	better than average, keep it up. __________________ Minorities gotta stick together. Fight the power! - ILLogic “I respect hip-hop and i dont know one word of Midnight Marauders and truthfully dont have the interest to go and find out…” - Lupe Fiasco

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07-14-2006, 11:27 PM	#2
lokia Banned Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 45 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ur in the wrong place

07-23-2006, 04:29 PM	#3
Ri$e_88 Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: T.Dot (Toronto) Posts: 1,416 Repped: 347 Repped 747 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	just Looking for feedback

07-23-2006, 04:30 PM	#4
Ri$e_88 Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: T.Dot (Toronto) Posts: 1,416 Repped: 347 Repped 747 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	and ya i kno it's the wrong place i accidently posted it here

07-24-2006, 04:43 AM	#6
Ri$e_88 Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: T.Dot (Toronto) Posts: 1,416 Repped: 347 Repped 747 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	thanks that was just my first freestyle on here i got more now tho in the Freestyle section