01/22/08 - Vocab and ILLogic - ILL Vocab - Page 2

Shyne · 01-24-2008, 11:49 AM

for anyone who thought the beat overpowered me, sorry I didnt have my Vocals ups higher, INS actually warned me about this and I completly forgot lol, I fucked that one up myself. and for people saying to make it more simple, this is my simple shit, I toned my use of syllable's down a shit load from what I usually do. I only upped my rhyme scheme for like 4 bars on the whole 'Apocalyptic Vision' part and thats cause I wanted to try my hand at how many multiples I could fit into a bar. Still im sorry you guys didnt like it more, ill def take your critism to heart and work on it. I have some shit in the works with sCool that should blow you away though. and ILL I would love to work on another track with you when im not so busy man so get at me.

Also my lyrics for ya peoples

I Blow Your Mind, Like a Shotgun in the Mouth/
This is how its going down when the sun isnt out/
Without a doubt dog, I cant explain how real it is/
Screaming fuck apppearances, im the rawest lyricist/
My spirit is furious, it reflects in my vocals/
with this universal voice I could never stay local/
Murder cats on the track, use em as an example/
A Vandal, that'll straight dismantle your sample/
Apocalyptic Vision, rippin the Heavens in Half/
I predict it when I spit it, now you get it at last/
Understand its outlandish how underhanded we live/
But we was branded as Savage and bandits when we were kids/
Now I stand as a man and I fight the temptation/
to blow my fucking head off just to meet the god of all creation/
im waitin and satin is anticipatin my soul/
but my body hold no heart only bullet holes/
pull air into my lungs till theres swellin in my chest/
and spit a thousand bar verse off the strength of one breath/
and cats wonder why I rip ever verse when I get it/
cause 16 from me is worth more then your whole existence

p.s. a cookie for the first person to point out the irony in this verse

I bet Nok or INS figures it out first

Rebel INS {CF} · 01-24-2008, 01:11 PM

*fails to see the irony*

maybe with another listen .........

oh and shyne dog, lotus dog wants to do a track with u apparently, he didnt say directly but i seen him say it

scool · 01-24-2008, 01:19 PM

fuck lotus, let shyne concentrate on whats important

Shyne · 01-24-2008, 01:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rebel INS {CF}

*fails to see the irony*

maybe with another listen .........

*Hint*

and cats wonder why I rip ever verse when I get it/
cause 16 from me is worth more then your whole existence

Rebel INS {CF} · 01-24-2008, 01:40 PM

OoOoOoOoOoOoO ITZ ON NOW GEEE

well ............ it isnt really

Deep South Kid · 01-24-2008, 01:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shyne

*Hint*

and cats wonder why I rip ever verse when I get it/
cause 16 from me is worth more then your whole existence

Maybe because Chris Brown was 16 when he put out his first single?

Doc Glokk · 01-24-2008, 02:50 PM

i think i kno the irony..
you say its a 16, buts it more than a 16

A.T.I. · 01-24-2008, 04:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Deep South Kid

Maybe because Chris Brown was 16 when he put out his first single?

^^^^

Shyne · 01-24-2008, 05:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Doc Glokk

i think i kno the irony..
you say its a 16, buts it more than a 16

yes indeed! but actually I think I like the Chris Brown answer more so im changing it to that.

InFiNiTiZeD · 01-24-2008, 06:31 PM

this is a real solid track.... shyne your lyrics are dope and you are real good at the multies and dope vocab the only real flaw i saw from you was the flow when you seemed to be fallin back.... Ill your shit was straight the grimey voice is def not bad and your flow was pretty good, but then when you got to those stretched lines it hurt ya flow. you had some corny punches and some nice punches... it was a nice collab from both of you and i see even better stuff in the future

Nokster · 01-24-2008, 06:47 PM

aight I see Shyne... you throwin' disses at me now just cuz I like Chris Brown!?!?!

ITZ ON DAWG!!111

*starts recording diss track*

shyne's wack, he has a hairy back
he can't win even if i was in a potato sack...

you 'bout to be ethered son...

Shyne · 01-24-2008, 10:48 PM

"Nok close your eyes, mess with me and you die/
if you in a potato sack I guess that would make it small fries

I aint going down without a fight ya heard!

and much love on everyone leaving feedback on my flow, for the longest time all I heard was how ill my flow and rythm was, I guess I got too cocky and it made me sloppy, thanks for keeping me in check ya'll, im mos def going to make sure to make the proper changes in the future

Nokster · 01-25-2008, 03:52 AM

Shyne sucks so on and so forth and such
i splatter his blood all over his shirt like ketchup/

cot daaaaaaaamn

Shyne · 01-25-2008, 11:24 AM

Doggy cant you see, you need to leave/leaf like a tree
Fuck 'Ketchup', you'll never 'Catch Up' to me

WOOOOOOOOOOOOO! My wordplay is unfukwitable

Nokster · 01-25-2008, 05:39 PM

DISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I'm 'bout to fingerfuck cuz my finger's on the trigz
And leave your eyes split like Notorious Biggz /

I pertain to facts, my debonair ain't hard to follow
Try to deepthroat my thoughts but they too hard to swallow/

A penny for my thoughts means I'm a good investment to keep
Cuz I show ya'll I mean business like a Harvard degree/

the last 4 bars were fo realz tho

lollllzzzzzzzzzzzz

A.T.I. · 01-25-2008, 06:49 PM

hey Shyne, good news! The RapUp (site) chose to use my blurb for Monch's Desire as a top album of the year! (My Blu & Exile one too!)

Rebel INS {CF} · 01-25-2008, 07:17 PM

here lads, off topic a bit, but this is the first time ever ive been on the comp proper fuckin wrecked !!!!

Shyne · 01-25-2008, 07:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nokturnal

DISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I'm 'bout to fingerfuck cuz my finger's on the trigz
And leave your eyes split like Notorious Biggz /

I pertain to facts, my debonair ain't hard to follow
Try to deepthroat my thoughts but they too hard to swallow/

A penny for my thoughts means I'm a good investment to keep
Cuz I show ya'll I mean business like a Harvard degree/

the last 4 bars were fo realz tho

lollllzzzzzzzzzzzz

pffffft. fuck with me in a battle muh fucka you'll regret it/
the last 4 bars wasnt 'real', they was just 'real' pathetic

blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!

Quote:

Originally Posted by A.T.I.

hey Shyne, good news! The RapUp (site) chose to use my blurb for Monch's Desire as a top album of the year! (My Blu & Exile one too!)

ah, congrats doggy, good to see your work getting recognized

Rebel INS {CF} · 01-25-2008, 07:19 PM

and errrr nok pull in ur horny horns gee, cus on msn freestyle battles shyne is soooooo quick off the dome in seconds, ur finna get MURKED !!!

Nokster · 01-26-2008, 12:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rebel INS {CF}

and errrr nok pull in ur horny horns gee, cus on msn freestyle battles shyne is soooooo quick off the dome in seconds, ur finna get MURKED !!!

lol you obviously have never chatted with me. Axe ATI.... I shit bars and punches.

Deep South Kid · 01-26-2008, 01:00 AM

Aint noone spittin more MSN heat than me....Yall know that already. Chuch.

Montana Diary · 01-26-2008, 01:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shyne

ah, congrats doggy, good to see your work getting recognized

^^^^^^^^^^^

A.T.I. · 01-26-2008, 02:16 AM

thanks Shyne and MD!

01-24-2008, 11:49 AM	#26
Shyne Sons Of Liberty Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Iowa Posts: 5,554 Repped: 3 Repped 2,054 Times in 849 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 151 Times in 95 Posts	for anyone who thought the beat overpowered me, sorry I didnt have my Vocals ups higher, INS actually warned me about this and I completly forgot lol, I fucked that one up myself. and for people saying to make it more simple, this is my simple shit, I toned my use of syllable's down a shit load from what I usually do. I only upped my rhyme scheme for like 4 bars on the whole 'Apocalyptic Vision' part and thats cause I wanted to try my hand at how many multiples I could fit into a bar. Still im sorry you guys didnt like it more, ill def take your critism to heart and work on it. I have some shit in the works with sCool that should blow you away though. and ILL I would love to work on another track with you when im not so busy man so get at me. Also my lyrics for ya peoples I Blow Your Mind, Like a Shotgun in the Mouth/ This is how its going down when the sun isnt out/ Without a doubt dog, I cant explain how real it is/ Screaming fuck apppearances, im the rawest lyricist/ My spirit is furious, it reflects in my vocals/ with this universal voice I could never stay local/ Murder cats on the track, use em as an example/ A Vandal, that'll straight dismantle your sample/ Apocalyptic Vision, rippin the Heavens in Half/ I predict it when I spit it, now you get it at last/ Understand its outlandish how underhanded we live/ But we was branded as Savage and bandits when we were kids/ Now I stand as a man and I fight the temptation/ to blow my fucking head off just to meet the god of all creation/ im waitin and satin is anticipatin my soul/ but my body hold no heart only bullet holes/ pull air into my lungs till theres swellin in my chest/ and spit a thousand bar verse off the strength of one breath/ and cats wonder why I rip ever verse when I get it/ cause 16 from me is worth more then your whole existence p.s. a cookie for the first person to point out the irony in this verse I bet Nok or INS figures it out first __________________ myspace.com/vocabthemc http://coldglassofoj.blogspot.com

01-24-2008, 01:11 PM	#27
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,454 Repped: 151 Repped 648 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	fails to see the irony maybe with another listen ......... oh and shyne dog, lotus dog wants to do a track with u apparently, he didnt say directly but i seen him say it __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

01-24-2008, 01:40 PM	#30
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,454 Repped: 151 Repped 648 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	OoOoOoOoOoOoO ITZ ON NOW GEEE well ............ it isnt really __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

01-24-2008, 02:50 PM	#32
Doc Glokk Tha Doctor Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 1,438 Repped: 51 Repped 15 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i think i kno the irony.. you say its a 16, buts it more than a 16 __________________ PeAcE tO tHe StReEtS

01-24-2008, 06:47 PM	#36
Nokster ♫, $, & ♀ = Life. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 8,910 Repped: 761 Repped 2,461 Times in 843 Posts Neg Reps: 44 Neg Repped at 104 Times in 85 Posts	aight I see Shyne... you throwin' disses at me now just cuz I like Chris Brown!?!?! ITZ ON DAWG!!111 starts recording diss track shyne's wack, he has a hairy back he can't win even if i was in a potato sack... you 'bout to be ethered son... __________________ Los Scandalous.

01-24-2008, 01:19 PM	#28
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	fuck lotus, let shyne concentrate on whats important

01-24-2008, 06:31 PM	#35
InFiNiTiZeD Fuck You....... Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 3,324 Repped: 24 Repped 25 Times in 14 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is a real solid track.... shyne your lyrics are dope and you are real good at the multies and dope vocab the only real flaw i saw from you was the flow when you seemed to be fallin back.... Ill your shit was straight the grimey voice is def not bad and your flow was pretty good, but then when you got to those stretched lines it hurt ya flow. you had some corny punches and some nice punches... it was a nice collab from both of you and i see even better stuff in the future

01-24-2008, 10:48 PM	#37
Shyne Sons Of Liberty Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Iowa Posts: 5,554 Repped: 3 Repped 2,054 Times in 849 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 151 Times in 95 Posts	"Nok close your eyes, mess with me and you die/ if you in a potato sack I guess that would make it small fries I aint going down without a fight ya heard! and much love on everyone leaving feedback on my flow, for the longest time all I heard was how ill my flow and rythm was, I guess I got too cocky and it made me sloppy, thanks for keeping me in check ya'll, im mos def going to make sure to make the proper changes in the future __________________ myspace.com/vocabthemc http://coldglassofoj.blogspot.com

01-25-2008, 03:52 AM	#38
Nokster ♫, $, & ♀ = Life. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 8,910 Repped: 761 Repped 2,461 Times in 843 Posts Neg Reps: 44 Neg Repped at 104 Times in 85 Posts	Shyne sucks so on and so forth and such i splatter his blood all over his shirt like ketchup/ cot daaaaaaaamn __________________ Los Scandalous.

01-25-2008, 11:24 AM	#39
Shyne Sons Of Liberty Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Iowa Posts: 5,554 Repped: 3 Repped 2,054 Times in 849 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 151 Times in 95 Posts	Doggy cant you see, you need to leave/leaf like a tree Fuck 'Ketchup', you'll never 'Catch Up' to me WOOOOOOOOOOOOO! My wordplay is unfukwitable __________________ myspace.com/vocabthemc http://coldglassofoj.blogspot.com

01-25-2008, 05:39 PM	#40
Nokster ♫, $, & ♀ = Life. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 8,910 Repped: 761 Repped 2,461 Times in 843 Posts Neg Reps: 44 Neg Repped at 104 Times in 85 Posts	DISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I'm 'bout to fingerfuck cuz my finger's on the trigz And leave your eyes split like Notorious Biggz / I pertain to facts, my debonair ain't hard to follow Try to deepthroat my thoughts but they too hard to swallow/ A penny for my thoughts means I'm a good investment to keep Cuz I show ya'll I mean business like a Harvard degree/ the last 4 bars were fo realz tho lollllzzzzzzzzzzzz __________________ Los Scandalous.

01-25-2008, 06:49 PM	#41
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,606 Repped: 1,379 Repped 2,050 Times in 720 Posts Neg Reps: 156 Neg Repped at 163 Times in 130 Posts	hey Shyne, good news! The RapUp (site) chose to use my blurb for Monch's Desire as a top album of the year! (My Blu & Exile one too!) __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

01-25-2008, 07:17 PM	#42
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,454 Repped: 151 Repped 648 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	here lads, off topic a bit, but this is the first time ever ive been on the comp proper fuckin wrecked !!!! __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

01-25-2008, 07:19 PM	#44
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,454 Repped: 151 Repped 648 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	and errrr nok pull in ur horny horns gee, cus on msn freestyle battles shyne is soooooo quick off the dome in seconds, ur finna get MURKED !!! __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

01-26-2008, 01:00 AM	#46
Deep South Kid UnderGround UnderPressure Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Mexico City Posts: 6,176 Repped: 17 Repped 446 Times in 138 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Aint noone spittin more MSN heat than me....Yall know that already. Chuch. __________________ guess whos back up in the building, mind on a million...

01-26-2008, 02:16 AM	#48
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,606 Repped: 1,379 Repped 2,050 Times in 720 Posts Neg Reps: 156 Neg Repped at 163 Times in 130 Posts	thanks Shyne and MD! __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

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