p-money123

can you guys tell me if i can rap good for my age im only 14

ight.. im gunna rep dis shit the way i was born to rep this shit im from new york a big place where everyone
has dreams a place where they roll the dice and wear there ice so bright it takes up so much light.You never
see a nigga in new york like me runing off dis doe yea theres so many hoes yea that i wouldnt know but when i blow yea yull know
cuz it will be hard... harder den dis flow im spittin on you see gangs on the streets so many dj's with sum pretty hot beats
so im gunna tell you niggaz like il tell u niggaz you come on my block yea u beter watch yo back before i trace your tracks
and il pull out my mac yea im a new york man full of money yea you cant roll with dat becuz u aint have da money
so il tell you niggaz before you come on my block and yull be faceing my hand on da mutha fuking glock. im so hot im hotter
den da devil you just hatin cuz u aint on my level

ILLogic

You're only fourteen????!!!!!!!!????? NO WAY! With skills like that I could swear that you've been in rap since the '80s! Tell me when the album drops!!!!! I can't wait!!!11111!!11

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p-money123

thanx homez

sparxx

Better then soulja boy,hurricane chris,birdman,lil boosie

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Vapour Ice

what's your dance?

Shyne

word, im wondering what the new dance is too. For real though learn to write bars my man

blah blah blah blah rhyme/
blah blah blah blah rhyme/

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Pineapple

damn shyne that bar alone killed his shit

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killed it......

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p-money123

was i realy good becouse i never ever showed any1 my raps before ive been rhyming since 12 i think but yea i appreciate that u like it im sorta new to hhboard i relay never come her dat much but yea i need to learn how to write bars does any1 know how 2?

Shyne

Well take my advice and learn to write in bars, im not taking any shots at you seeing as how your so young doing this.

post your verse again in bar form and i'll leave you some real feedback.

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KING BHOB

there IS an ''MC'' section at the bottom of the board......

but that shit was terrible

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ILLogic

Ya'll some haters! Duke is the next G Rap1!11111111111111111!!!!!!

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Tippz

same old same old... if you quote me, fuck u, end of

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p-money123

yea im gunna get sum haterz but yea i thought i did pretty gud but yea the reasen y im asking is becouse im suposibly doing a song with my friend you can check his myspace out and his song should play once u go on it but yea im supose to do a song and he wants me to spit suttin he no's how to do bars but i dont know how hopefully he will teach me when i go to his house here's his myspace check his song

Doc Glokk

my opinion... even though ur 14 its kinda weak
im not hating, because when i started rhyming i was only a little bit better than your rhyme

bottom line, keep goin regardless homie, and always strive to get better. cuz its a long way to go

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Nokster

That was really wack and simple and meaningless.

Step it up and post again when you do. Then I'll be here.

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Grandmaster G

nowadays who are u gonna take seirously....these posters are alll soooo wack and all want to have their 15 mins of fame; stop wastin time posting and build an actual rep or get a real life....but naw u aint gettin shit lil young'n


hehehehehe ur the shit, i like that glock line hehehehee

Rebel INS {CF}

ur a fuckin beast man

but seriously ...... dont post ur shit in this section

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Just_Blaze

Uh yeah but nah but yeah but nah but i'm 12 but yea ya know but wait... SHUT THE FUCK UP!


Edit: Wanna cyber?

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Cro-Soldier

that shit is awesome!!! for a 14 year old your talent is incredible!! its obvious that you been rapping for some time now and your skillz already reached a level where you can rap out almost anything!! lol why write in bars?! his shit is so fresh you can just read it this way!! damn and you prolly real mature aswell so young already talking bout guns n shit!! id never dare to do that.. but you did man.. props


much loveee

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ILLogic

^ Fuck you for comin' with my style.


"I dun come with the style you about to come with, you the opposite of smart feces -- get it dumb shit?"
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p-money123

so like its like half of you say they like it and like half are like they dont like it but yea im still gunna b on dis shit for a while but when i do get seriouse so seriouse in my rap il holla at all of yall ight thanx

ILLogic

No. Nobody liked your whack shit. The few that did say that were being sarcastic. Normally, I don't give a fuck when my e-wit goes above cats heads, but when it goes over the kid's head who it was intended at, it is just totally useless. So fuck you, you're whack, being 14 isn't an excuse. Go slit your wrist or drink bleach because your skill is about as existent as an Asian woman's ass.

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mouad

wooooooooo! DAMN ILL!!! you're thugin' daddy

ILLogic

Word? Ballz mom said the same thing.

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