iLLuminati - Gorillas Solo Mix *Re-spit with new mic*

Rebel INS {CF} · 10-06-2007, 06:43 PM

Still the same lyrics as it was when i first posted, basically the first full verse i ever wrote but its still probably my favourite

anyway, its re-recorded here on my new mic, u might remember it from before with CC and Lotus also on it but lil CC fucked the mixing ... anyway its just me on this one

and dont expect amazing quality either ! i was still gettin to grips with the mic so its just pretty average, also i asked Rapsody to put in that echo effect on the acapella which i kinda regret now, it sounds a bit di dumb ya digg ? but oh well ill know for future

expect more new tracks soon

ILLogic · 10-06-2007, 06:48 PM

Dope shit! Lyricism was on point. Only criticism I could give was that you kinda sounded a lil intimidated. Your presence wasn't there and your flow was amateur. but lyrically, you killed it.

Rebel INS {CF} · 10-06-2007, 06:52 PM

yeah i just need more practice with the flow and ill hopefully get better with time, its definatly my weak point, and my presence should come once i learn how to handle tracks after a few more recording too if u get me, ill just be like ok,ok i know what im doing wrong from other experiences

mind if i send u a few writtens in PM ?

ILLogic · 10-06-2007, 07:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Revolutionary

yeah i just need more practice with the flow and ill hopefully get better with time, its definatly my weak point, and my presence should come once i learn how to handle tracks after a few more recording too if u get me, ill just be like ok,ok i know what im doing wrong from other experiences

mind if i send u a few writtens in PM ?

Yeah, definetly! I feel you, it takes a bit to get used to. But yeah, definetly pass me some writtens, I'm eager to read. (no homo)

Chow Mien Gunna · 10-06-2007, 07:08 PM

this was decent lyrically.....i aint like that echo effect much either...flow was solid..u can work on it...props

Shyne · 10-06-2007, 07:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ILLogic

Dope shit! Lyricism was on point. Only criticism I could give was that you kinda sounded a lil intimidated. Your presence wasn't there and your flow was amateur. but lyrically, you killed it.

lmao, this is the EXACT same shit im always telling him, he doesnt have presence. INS can come with some ill lyrics but he doesnt sound sure of himself when he spits.

Rebel INS {CF} · 10-06-2007, 07:19 PM

calm urself kiddes, ill get there eventually ! ...... i hope

A.T.I. · 10-06-2007, 08:39 PM

u whack shun!

really though, I like the original better, it was mad gully (nomo)

Nokster · 10-06-2007, 10:17 PM

wow... iLL liked this? This must be good.

*checks poster's name*

*notices it's CF*

nevermind.

will check my friend.

Shyne · 10-06-2007, 10:25 PM

^^^Word up, ILL hates on my shit but loves INS....somthing is up here doggy's

Chow Mien Gunna · 10-06-2007, 10:35 PM

yall niggas weight till i get a good mic....

Montana Diary · 10-06-2007, 11:12 PM

Well, I'm impressed, and since this post was typed by the fingers of Earth's ruler, nobody else needs to leave a comment tellin' you how talented you are since it's just been set in stone by yours truly.

This = dopeness
My opinion = law

:)

bayAreaSLAP · 10-07-2007, 01:01 AM

Dope shit INS. I listened to your previous tracked you upped a while ago and I hear vast improvements. Keep workin' on the flow, delivery and fuck wit a new mic and you'll be good.

Rebel INS {CF} · 10-07-2007, 08:21 AM

proprz on duh feedz all !11

Dope Da Damaja · 10-07-2007, 10:36 AM

first time i heard the rev rebel on the mic !! propz u gd

ILLogic · 10-07-2007, 10:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shyne

^^^Word up, ILL hates on my shit but loves INS....somthing is up here doggy's

Post ya shit again, I forget how bad you are.

Rebel INS {CF} · 10-07-2007, 10:41 AM

yeah shyne, and while ur at it ....... up Informer and the Weatherman shit !!! *grrr*

Shyne · 10-07-2007, 04:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ILLogic

Post ya shit again, I forget how bad you are.

Sons of Liberty (Vocab & Sticky) - Understand Why

S.O.L. (Vocab & Sticky) - 25 to Life

Rebel INS {CF} · 10-07-2007, 04:07 PM

hrmmmmmm ..... i hear the forcast is for Snow in Iowa .... with it spreading to Ireland ...... or so i was INFORMED

Doc Glokk · 10-07-2007, 06:43 PM

nice shit INS, ur pretty dope... check this beat i did any of yall can spit on it if u want, im droppin on it this week.

Nokster · 10-08-2007, 01:26 AM

Lyricism was indeed on-point.

Co-sign what people said about your flow and presence, no need to go further.

Other than that, only problem I see is your breathe control. It kinda sounds like you're trying to shove and fit as many words as you can under one breathe. Take it easy and let it flow and breathe when you need to to make a nice transition.

But IMO these are just minor details. Overall, you got talent my overseas brotha.

ps. you don't have an accent? no "top of the mornin' to ya" ??

DJ Shinobi [RA] · 10-08-2007, 12:39 PM

bitches dont know about the iLLuminati. it sounds like u left ur balls at the door to the studio, on the next version remember to bring em with you and you will succeed!

"your one basket short of a picnic!"

Rebel INS {CF} · 10-08-2007, 01:00 PM

dont worry, ill forget them again and spit on Suicide .... deal ?

scool · 10-08-2007, 04:36 PM

DAMN YO THESE WIGGAS GASSIN MY LIL YOUNG BUCK UP....

AIGHT IT IS WUDIDIDI.. I FELT YOUR LIL FLOW.. PUT YOU ON THE GAME... NOW DONT GET BIGHEADED ... IM 50 .. YOU LLOYD... AIGHT? YOU MY RUNNER UP.. BUT IM STILL SWINGIN THE BAT

I got a date on thursday, I see yall crying n shit... haha I'm gon buy her mad drinks and try to get her to come back to my place .... I'ma force her into making a hhboard account and repping me on the daily

P I M P

Nokster · 10-09-2007, 04:20 AM

^ that some pimp shit fa real

I would,'t fuck with that ganxta if it killed me

props to momma

10-06-2007, 06:43 PM	#1
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	iLLuminati - Gorillas Solo Mix Re-spit with new mic iLLuminati - Gorillas Solo Mix Re-spit with new mic Still the same lyrics as it was when i first posted, basically the first full verse i ever wrote but its still probably my favourite anyway, its re-recorded here on my new mic, u might remember it from before with CC and Lotus also on it but lil CC fucked the mixing ... anyway its just me on this one and dont expect amazing quality either ! i was still gettin to grips with the mic so its just pretty average, also i asked Rapsody to put in that echo effect on the acapella which i kinda regret now, it sounds a bit di dumb ya digg ? but oh well ill know for future expect more new tracks soon __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

10-06-2007, 06:48 PM	#2
ILLogic Pharaoh in Ghetto Apparel Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In God's Head Posts: 3,384 Repped: 13 Repped 129 Times in 74 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Dope shit! Lyricism was on point. Only criticism I could give was that you kinda sounded a lil intimidated. Your presence wasn't there and your flow was amateur. but lyrically, you killed it. __________________ Recognized Thresholds of Negative Stress "Two wrongs don't make a right, but three rights make a left" - Ras Kass

10-06-2007, 06:52 PM	#3
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	yeah i just need more practice with the flow and ill hopefully get better with time, its definatly my weak point, and my presence should come once i learn how to handle tracks after a few more recording too if u get me, ill just be like ok,ok i know what im doing wrong from other experiences mind if i send u a few writtens in PM ? __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

10-06-2007, 07:19 PM	#7
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	calm urself kiddes, ill get there eventually ! ...... i hope __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

10-06-2007, 08:39 PM	#8
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,592 Repped: 1,371 Repped 2,036 Times in 716 Posts Neg Reps: 155 Neg Repped at 159 Times in 129 Posts	u whack shun! really though, I like the original better, it was mad gully (nomo) __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

10-06-2007, 07:08 PM	#5
Chow Mien Gunna Baller Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: The Fuck Posts: 352 Repped: 82 Repped 26 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was decent lyrically.....i aint like that echo effect much either...flow was solid..u can work on it...props

10-06-2007, 10:17 PM	#9
Nokster ♫, $, & ♀ = Life. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 8,903 Repped: 758 Repped 2,443 Times in 835 Posts Neg Reps: 44 Neg Repped at 104 Times in 85 Posts	wow... iLL liked this? This must be good. checks poster's name notices it's CF nevermind. will check my friend.

10-06-2007, 10:25 PM	#10
Shyne Sons Of Liberty Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Iowa Posts: 5,552 Repped: 3 Repped 2,054 Times in 849 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 151 Times in 95 Posts	^^^Word up, ILL hates on my shit but loves INS....somthing is up here doggy's __________________ myspace.com/vocabthemc http://coldglassofoj.blogspot.com

10-06-2007, 10:35 PM	#11
Chow Mien Gunna Baller Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: The Fuck Posts: 352 Repped: 82 Repped 26 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yall niggas weight till i get a good mic....

10-06-2007, 11:12 PM	#12
Montana Diary Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Brampton, ON, Canada Posts: 2,845 Repped: 173 Repped 2,242 Times in 307 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Well, I'm impressed, and since this post was typed by the fingers of Earth's ruler, nobody else needs to leave a comment tellin' you how talented you are since it's just been set in stone by yours truly. This = dopeness My opinion = law :) __________________

10-07-2007, 01:01 AM	#13
bayAreaSLAP Veteran Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Bay Posts: 2,514 Repped: 0 Repped 11 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Dope shit INS. I listened to your previous tracked you upped a while ago and I hear vast improvements. Keep workin' on the flow, delivery and fuck wit a new mic and you'll be good.

10-07-2007, 08:21 AM	#14
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	proprz on duh feedz all !11 __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

10-07-2007, 10:36 AM	#15
Dope Da Damaja ! OMG ! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: <3 Posts: 908 Repped: 132 Repped 274 Times in 87 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	first time i heard the rev rebel on the mic !! propz u gd __________________

10-07-2007, 10:41 AM	#17
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	yeah shyne, and while ur at it ....... up Informer and the Weatherman shit !!! grrr __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

10-07-2007, 04:07 PM	#19
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	hrmmmmmm ..... i hear the forcast is for Snow in Iowa .... with it spreading to Ireland ...... or so i was INFORMED __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

10-07-2007, 06:43 PM	#20
Doc Glokk Tha Doctor Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 1,438 Repped: 51 Repped 15 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice shit INS, ur pretty dope... check this beat i did any of yall can spit on it if u want, im droppin on it this week. __________________ PeAcE tO tHe StReEtS

10-08-2007, 01:26 AM	#21
Nokster ♫, $, & ♀ = Life. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 8,903 Repped: 758 Repped 2,443 Times in 835 Posts Neg Reps: 44 Neg Repped at 104 Times in 85 Posts	Lyricism was indeed on-point. Co-sign what people said about your flow and presence, no need to go further. Other than that, only problem I see is your breathe control. It kinda sounds like you're trying to shove and fit as many words as you can under one breathe. Take it easy and let it flow and breathe when you need to to make a nice transition. But IMO these are just minor details. Overall, you got talent my overseas brotha. ps. you don't have an accent? no "top of the mornin' to ya" ??

10-08-2007, 12:39 PM	#22
DJ Shinobi [RA] Slangologist nahmsayin? Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: California Posts: 2,488 Repped: 82 Repped 69 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bitches dont know about the iLLuminati. it sounds like u left ur balls at the door to the studio, on the next version remember to bring em with you and you will succeed! "your one basket short of a picnic!" __________________ Minorities gotta stick together. Fight the power! - ILLogic “I respect hip-hop and i dont know one word of Midnight Marauders and truthfully dont have the interest to go and find out…” - Lupe Fiasco

10-08-2007, 01:00 PM	#23
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	dont worry, ill forget them again and spit on Suicide .... deal ? __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

10-08-2007, 04:36 PM	#24
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	DAMN YO THESE WIGGAS GASSIN MY LIL YOUNG BUCK UP.... AIGHT IT IS WUDIDIDI.. I FELT YOUR LIL FLOW.. PUT YOU ON THE GAME... NOW DONT GET BIGHEADED ... IM 50 .. YOU LLOYD... AIGHT? YOU MY RUNNER UP.. BUT IM STILL SWINGIN THE BAT I got a date on thursday, I see yall crying n shit... haha I'm gon buy her mad drinks and try to get her to come back to my place .... I'ma force her into making a hhboard account and repping me on the daily P I M P

10-09-2007, 04:20 AM	#25
Nokster ♫, $, & ♀ = Life. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 8,903 Repped: 758 Repped 2,443 Times in 835 Posts Neg Reps: 44 Neg Repped at 104 Times in 85 Posts	^ that some pimp shit fa real I would,'t fuck with that ganxta if it killed me props to momma

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