Nokturnal I spit over ya beat lil nigga..

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-21-2007, 02:33 PM

wafflesquad the frruck up...

tell me what u think of it

I could care less if u dont like it... y'all can all die of aids as far as I'm concerned

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Hypocritical, fictuals thoughts make it difficult for me to think analytical
Knowledge passed in the transcriptual, Pagan or biblical, never critical
Hip hop contradictual, words be sinical, always fail to be lyrical
Still waiting on a myrical, stay true never mimickall, thats why I’m so difficult
Strongly built, purpose killed for what should be the circus dealt
To perfection, consist of no complexion, turn to the stars cuz the need for direction
Our planet is a faction, low risk section, words like ancient hexins
Feed the king by taxing, without even asking, why we still sexin
With no protection, affirmitive action, stop heating we need to be relaxin
I keep it on the low, this my manifesto, bloody sundays red like pesto
U don’t believe? Come test hoe, give me your best go, end up like esco
Time to cut the grass cuz lord knows I see snakes, if I had a car haters wuld cut my brakes
So I remain for christ sake, still run from jake, the goverment’s a botomless lake, high stakes
Hold me, allow me to unfold me, my shit’s holy, you’re shit’s ballony, so you call me a homie
6 million dollar wigga like lucife, mister zig zag zigga, didnt took me long to figure
what it takes go get bigger, hip hop gravedigger, I bring back them bones without the harmony
so without you harming me, all out war has me arming me, illuminati influences obviously
so what u know bout that? How to be, just like me? It’s all I can be

Doc Glokk · 03-21-2007, 05:03 PM

u really need to work on flow. and ur voice kinda sounds funny...like ur forcin it out. rhymes are nice tho

Nokster · 03-21-2007, 09:52 PM

lol^ co-sign with everything he said

ur rhymes are dope tho.... pretty damn impressed. and the beat is fiiiiyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

this is making me want to spit on my own beat cuz I know I can't get much worse than that.... lol.... no hate.. good shit overall

bayAreaSLAP · 03-22-2007, 01:24 AM

It's hard to sit down and try to listen to the words because the flow is so off and your voice doesn't sound that great... but it's not all bad. The lyrics are pretty dope.

A.T.I. · 03-22-2007, 01:53 AM

ghost written

Hotnikelz · 03-22-2007, 04:45 AM

Nu School is tha truth.............

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-22-2007, 07:44 AM

not ghost written

thats all, fagz

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-22-2007, 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by A.T.I.

ghost written

I didnt hate on u enough for that comment so here goes

listne you douchebag girlraping shitmonkey, I write all my shit myself.. so you can eat my urine

ImmortalTechnique · 03-22-2007, 01:31 PM

come on, skool. i know English isn't your first language, but that was some Papoose make big words rhyme without really meaning anything shit

A.T.I. · 03-22-2007, 01:32 PM

i didnt actually read it until now, but i can tell that it wasnt ghostwritten because while the vocab seemed impressive, half the lines don't make much sense

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-22-2007, 01:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Busta Nut

come on, skool. i know English isn't your first language, but that was some Papoose make big words rhyme without really meaning anything shit

wu tang does it all the time... so why can't I?

ILLogic · 03-22-2007, 05:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LOL U FEEL UPSET?

wu tang does it all the time... so why can't I?

Because you're not Black.

Doc Glokk · 03-22-2007, 06:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LOL U FEEL UPSET?

wu tang does it all the time... so why can't I?

wen does wu tang do it...and even if they did, why would u wanna do what they do anyways...just do yourself son.

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-23-2007, 11:27 AM

when does wu tang do it? you serious?

lets be honest about it, half of the time they not making sentences.. they just putting words that rhyme behind each other... I'll look for some examples when I got some more time

Shyne · 03-23-2007, 02:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LOL U FEEL UPSET?

when does wu tang do it? you serious?

lets be honest about it, half of the time they not making sentences.. they just putting words that rhyme behind each other... I'll look for some examples when I got some more time

now to be fair the only two who really do that are Ghostface and Rae, and id bet anything Rae actually is saying somthing, half his slang just go's over my head lol. Ghost on the otherhand, he just go's off on these 'Aesop Rock' type of rants where im not sure what the fuck he's trying to say.

Shyne · 03-23-2007, 02:30 PM

Also about the song, from one mc to another, you really impressed me with your lyrics on this shit school. like some others said not all of it makes sence but ya know what? fuck it, if it sounds dope and I can vibe to it its all good, things dont always have to make perfect sense. Your flow can use a lot of work but I would imagin its mainly from you rapping in english when that isnt your first language, ive noticed your flow tends to me much better on the tracks you stick to your own language on.

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-23-2007, 02:48 PM

thx buddiieeee

yah english rapping is mad dificult

IntelligentHoodlm · 03-23-2007, 05:36 PM

dont diss wu..its like shyne said...they speak in such heavy slang that u cant even really understand what there talking about if u dont have prior knowledge of it.

forreal though your lyrics were pretty nice. your voice just sucked ass though

Nokster · 03-23-2007, 10:03 PM

ehhheemmm.... no comments on the produckzhizzle people??

...........

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-24-2007, 09:47 AM

^^my vocals overpower that weak shit

03-21-2007, 05:03 PM	#2
Doc Glokk Tha Doctor Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 1,438 Repped: 51 Repped 15 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	u really need to work on flow. and ur voice kinda sounds funny...like ur forcin it out. rhymes are nice tho __________________ PeAcE tO tHe StReEtS

03-21-2007, 09:52 PM	#3
Nokster ♫, $, & ♀ = Life. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 8,903 Repped: 758 Repped 2,443 Times in 835 Posts Neg Reps: 44 Neg Repped at 104 Times in 85 Posts	lol^ co-sign with everything he said ur rhymes are dope tho.... pretty damn impressed. and the beat is fiiiiyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa this is making me want to spit on my own beat cuz I know I can't get much worse than that.... lol.... no hate.. good shit overall __________________ Los Scandalous.

03-22-2007, 01:53 AM	#5
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,591 Repped: 1,371 Repped 2,035 Times in 715 Posts Neg Reps: 155 Neg Repped at 159 Times in 129 Posts	ghost written __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

03-22-2007, 01:32 PM	#10
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,591 Repped: 1,371 Repped 2,035 Times in 715 Posts Neg Reps: 155 Neg Repped at 159 Times in 129 Posts	i didnt actually read it until now, but i can tell that it wasnt ghostwritten because while the vocab seemed impressive, half the lines don't make much sense __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

03-23-2007, 05:36 PM	#18
IntelligentHoodlm Point Black. Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Port City, NC Posts: 396 Repped: 2 Repped 25 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	dont diss wu..its like shyne said...they speak in such heavy slang that u cant even really understand what there talking about if u dont have prior knowledge of it. forreal though your lyrics were pretty nice. your voice just sucked ass though __________________ "This aint no Gangsta rap, how many mothafuckin gangsta's rap? -Sean Price

03-22-2007, 01:24 AM	#4
bayAreaSLAP Veteran Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Bay Posts: 2,514 Repped: 0 Repped 11 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	It's hard to sit down and try to listen to the words because the flow is so off and your voice doesn't sound that great... but it's not all bad. The lyrics are pretty dope.

03-22-2007, 04:45 AM	#6
Hotnikelz Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Decatur, IL Posts: 422 Repped: 234 Repped 75 Times in 25 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nu School is tha truth.............

03-22-2007, 07:44 AM	#7
LOL U FEEL UPSET? Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 497 Repped: 256 Repped 68 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	not ghost written thats all, fagz

03-22-2007, 01:31 PM	#9
ImmortalTechnique OPEN WIDE! Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Brew City, Milwaukee Posts: 3,042 Repped: 189 Repped 845 Times in 371 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 235 Times in 142 Posts	come on, skool. i know English isn't your first language, but that was some Papoose make big words rhyme without really meaning anything shit

03-23-2007, 11:27 AM	#14
LOL U FEEL UPSET? Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 497 Repped: 256 Repped 68 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	when does wu tang do it? you serious? lets be honest about it, half of the time they not making sentences.. they just putting words that rhyme behind each other... I'll look for some examples when I got some more time

03-23-2007, 02:30 PM	#16
Shyne Sons Of Liberty Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Iowa Posts: 5,552 Repped: 3 Repped 2,054 Times in 849 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 151 Times in 95 Posts	Also about the song, from one mc to another, you really impressed me with your lyrics on this shit school. like some others said not all of it makes sence but ya know what? fuck it, if it sounds dope and I can vibe to it its all good, things dont always have to make perfect sense. Your flow can use a lot of work but I would imagin its mainly from you rapping in english when that isnt your first language, ive noticed your flow tends to me much better on the tracks you stick to your own language on.

03-23-2007, 02:48 PM	#17
LOL U FEEL UPSET? Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 497 Repped: 256 Repped 68 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thx buddiieeee yah english rapping is mad dificult

03-23-2007, 10:03 PM	#19
Nokster ♫, $, & ♀ = Life. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 8,903 Repped: 758 Repped 2,443 Times in 835 Posts Neg Reps: 44 Neg Repped at 104 Times in 85 Posts	ehhheemmm.... no comments on the produckzhizzle people?? ........... __________________ Los Scandalous.

03-24-2007, 09:47 AM	#20
LOL U FEEL UPSET? Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 497 Repped: 256 Repped 68 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^my vocals overpower that weak shit

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