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J~Souljah · 03-12-2007, 01:19 PM

Put ya linkz in here.........i'll feed......im bored

rep me if u want....i could care less

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 03-12-2007, 01:36 PM

.Krysis. · 03-12-2007, 01:48 PM

J~Souljah · 03-12-2007, 02:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ►Urban ▲ Legend◄

o ok

....1st thing that dat grabbed mah attention was ya flow.....ya flow iz good......ya lyricz are also good.......u did a good job of stayin on topic....it was also a good concept.......but you need 2 pronounce your words with more clarity......your wordz were slurred many timez......you also need 2 work on ya delivery......u were rappin in da same monotonous tone throughout the whole song....alll in all....this was a decent drop

6/10

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 03-12-2007, 02:15 PM

i tried to change up my voice and yell a lil...all that good stuff...but it didnt sound right...

cuz thats what everybody said i need to werk on...puttin more emotion in

and i kno the werds were kinda slurred....i did that all in one breath..thanks for the feed.

03-12-2007, 01:19 PM	#1
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	Get Sum Feed Get Sum Feed Put ya linkz in here.........i'll feed......im bored rep me if u want....i could care less

03-12-2007, 01:36 PM	#2
C. Sense AKA L.J. Still a Buc Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 4,476 Repped: 371 Repped 403 Times in 174 Posts Neg Reps: 14 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 18 Posts	__________________ 20100426

03-12-2007, 01:48 PM	#3
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	__________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

03-12-2007, 02:15 PM	#5
C. Sense AKA L.J. Still a Buc Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 4,476 Repped: 371 Repped 403 Times in 174 Posts Neg Reps: 14 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 18 Posts	i tried to change up my voice and yell a lil...all that good stuff...but it didnt sound right... cuz thats what everybody said i need to werk on...puttin more emotion in and i kno the werds were kinda slurred....i did that all in one breath..thanks for the feed. __________________ 20100426

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