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Old 10-28-2006, 10:53 PM   #1
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iight...most of you seen my drops..any bodey got any suggestions on what i should work on to get better?
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Old 10-29-2006, 12:18 AM   #2
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Old 10-29-2006, 01:03 AM   #3
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^LOL get da fuck outta here i want tips from people that ckan actually rap
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Old 10-29-2006, 01:28 AM   #4
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Old 10-29-2006, 07:19 AM   #5
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Old 10-29-2006, 01:36 PM   #6
 
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Old 10-29-2006, 01:48 PM   #7
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I was hopin for more from u, sho
The only thing I can remember about dude's work is one verse sitting comfortably amidst the grave wackness of a GLK group piece & his lack of individuality there only merits a banal response from myself here.

My initial tip was, indeed, "suicide" though.

Anyway, how's puberty going? lawl.
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Old 10-29-2006, 02:33 PM   #9
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lol much better


this is Pandemic from RA, btw.
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Old 10-29-2006, 05:37 PM   #11
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Old 10-29-2006, 05:42 PM   #12
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5 More till 500............

Ill, leave u full ah clips like da moon blockin da sun......


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Old 10-30-2006, 12:24 AM   #18
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oh shit mi bad i thought u was black wall killer..lol
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Old 10-30-2006, 12:27 AM   #19
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skippy skippy skippy

my suggestion would be to use more personals in battles

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Old 10-30-2006, 12:41 AM   #20
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^nigga who da fuck u ckallin skippy? thnx 4 advice doe
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Old 10-30-2006, 12:51 AM   #21
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you skippy

like the peanut butter

skippy de do dah zippy de deh
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Old 10-30-2006, 12:59 AM   #22
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^LOL i have no come back 4 that
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i win :)

my oh my wat a wonderful day......

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