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today september 23rd me grandad past away
but in my heart you will always stay i remeber wen iwas young you put me in the apple tree i was so sacred that i wud fall but u were there for me well i guess ur gonna see my nan they didnt no wot was wrong after the scan shit man u had 5 heart attacks GOD musta wanted you bad didnt he think of the consqeunce it wud had im sad i never gotta say bye or tell you i love you if only i cuda been by ur side wating for you i wud be holding ur hand none of this was planned when nan went you were crying for days you proved the scientist wrong u didnt die cos u smoke u neva seemed to be an old folk u were such a joke i love u man i hope u will never forget that i no last year i was a brat but u loved me and i wont forget dat Chorus Youve been in suffering pain for so many years now uve gone i still crying all these tears i still membah ur saying "when u find your girl love her and make her yours" i nodded my head done my chors and mebah u lived throght the wars u said i will become a grate football player when im older i will do it for you even if it breaks my shoulder rest in peace and now hopefull the pain will cease Verse 2 as soon as i saw my mother walkin though the door was the tears in her eye i knew i was my turn to cry now uve gons someway up high well goodbye we in the same blood line lord gimmie a sign im gonna cry and whine it sends a shiver down my spine the doctors and nurses done there best but it wernt enough im sure it was rough but i guess u wenrt that tough 2 family members are dead gone outa my life thats my grandad and his wife mr and mrs bolsen rip nan im missing you all the time thats why im putting this into this rhyme you will always be mine im stealing ya dnt care if its a crime i will pick a daisy make a chain to ease the pain but my mminds on you just the same but as it remains ur blood still goes throught my vains Chorus Youve been in suffering pain for so many years now uve gone i still crying all these tears i still membah ur saying "when u find your girl love her and make her yours" i nodded my head done my chors and mebah u lived throght the wars u said i will become a grate football player when im older i will do it for you even if it breaks my shoulder rest in peace and now hopefull the pain will cease
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leav some feed and ur fav lines
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bumping for feed
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nice yo..but r.i.p. to your grandad
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thx eric bumoing for feed and tell me ur fav line
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shits from the heart...maybe (in my opinion) ur best shit to date
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thx man i was from da heart
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i always write betta wen i got sumting to do like en i got du,pd i fuckin done 3 verese and got told it was dope by my m8s
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bumping for feed
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yo RIP it was a deep song from tha heart but at sum parts it was like u was jus lukin for sumthin 2 rhyme
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R.I.P
as soon as i saw my mother walkin though the door was the tears in her eye i knew i was my turn to cry now uve gons someway up high well goodbye thats deep the same shit happened to me homie |
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my fav lines was tha chorus
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I feel you on this. liked verse 2 best
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thx for dis man
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yo mayne, real shit mayne,
from da heart, shit was touching, stay up mayne..... +...R.I.P Blaze's Grandad...+ |
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thx man it was from da heart and can u cheack out my newst free
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that was real gd throughout nd u stayed on topic.. R.I.P
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thanks for dat man
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