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Old 09-10-2006, 08:40 PM   #1
 
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War With Myself

War With Myself


Verse 1
you wont understand the struggle ive been through cause music is only a fisard
look into my past the events that left me eternaly scared
i can honestly say though that my life is knice
and it resembles the skills that i display on the mic
i lost my closet homie & neither wishes nor tears ll ever bring em back
only inflictin pain on myself from thinkin of the past
so i got involved with the wrong people but not nearly as severly
as some of my homies my visions are still seen clearly
but i aint got any wories cause my fate is all planned
just doin what i can and the rest lies in his hands

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[My Music jutifies my anger releived through continuous spitten
and if pass tommorow im sattisfied how my life was written
my pain is real and yall use it for a gimmicks
should i slang drugs or remain a thug show love or let em feel the slugs?
i will admit my lifes fucked cause im at war with myself ]

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picture your moms, name mentioned chills goin up her spine
as tears slowly fill her already swollen eyes
worried for her child out for weeks without recognision
until i ended up in some fucked up positions
but now im at it laughin at hypocrites who said i could make tapes
the beat is used to reninerate hate
diamondbacks fited cap to the bag
and the white tees matchin the nikes
this aint about my baggy jeans nor my tall tees
just actin steriotipical towards me
so when im ready to leave hip hop ill let you know
but until then you know you cant fuck with me west coast


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[My Music jutifies my anger releived through continuous spitten
and i pass tommorow im sattisfied how my life was written
my pain is real and yall mcs use it for a gimmick
should i slang drugs or remain a thug show love or let em feel the slugs
i will admit my lifes fucked cause im at war with myself ]



{Talking}
(i just sit contemplate and burn out
and if it continues this how the worlds gonna turn out)

Verse 3
i guess this is the end of the world or atleast life as we know
fuck simplistic rap and all of those who condone it
i spit continuous injenuity
u spit like me before puberty
one day it will gently rain acidous gasses
while you lay in your bed askin
how the fuck did this happen?
poisened by a biological disease transfered from overseas
ill leave you chokin in a room full of lethal injections
caughin up blood from the internal infections
so from this point on is where i make my own desicions
my own renditions
of futuristic livin conditions
of manufacted sickness
never return from the place in wich i escaped
shakles contained your every move stuck behind a great
steel gate
a place where it could occour to murder your own color
your own brother, lock em in close corriders and just watch em kill eachother
your thinkin your lifes hectic and crazy
but i am stuck with this shit on the daily
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Old 09-10-2006, 08:43 PM   #2
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this gonna be an audio track? if it iz its gonna be sick!
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co sign above me...if u got a hard beat to go wit it itll be some crack
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MAN Fuck you leme see you spit

otherwise thanks for the feed back ima hit the studio hard and spit some shit ill post some more lyrics
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Old 09-10-2006, 09:49 PM   #6
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yo dont worry about bwswedonttalktopolice.....he cant rhyme
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Old 09-10-2006, 10:00 PM   #7
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im'a Get A Deal Fum Bws/interscope Very Soon Nd U Callin Me Wack? Noo
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so spit some then
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Old 09-10-2006, 10:27 PM   #9
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aight yo im a BWS RIDA
dunt fukk witt me nigga mah gun count iz HIGHA//
u say u live a hard LIFE
but ayntcha bitch ass a mafucka dass WHITE?//
yeeeeeeah RIGHT
i kan see thru yo bitch azz w/o a SIGHT//
yo ya mommas pussy is jus RIGHT
nd yo lil sisterz iz just RIPE//


juzt a lil sumn sumn
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Old 09-10-2006, 11:07 PM   #10
 
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dog to be completly truthful you can have my sister 15 cracked out wit a baby
and my moms i aint even know what thats pussys touched lately
you never heard of a hard life cause you was raised in the suburbs
just a word of adivice keep your fuckin head covered
cause the silencer knows no color
will blast through your hat ceropelem leaks
3 weeks later youll be discovered
only by oral identification
or ill leave you disabled like acedemic probation
i gives a fuck and laugh at the though of incarseration
bws yeah right you just loves they shit
thinkin bout games dick so much you figure mind as well claim it
you just got murdered your style with no competition
so stop spitten that repitition
why the fuck would you wanna challenge me
im the foulest b
shit witness this lyrical legacy


thats just a lil some some
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Old 09-10-2006, 11:16 PM   #11
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yo Dat Shyt Waz Madd Wack
Y U Sound Madd When Ya Rap?//
Nigga Im No Cat Frum Da Burbz
Im Frum Hell, Here On Godz Green Earth//
N If U Wanna Get Smart
I'll Lay Down Kuz Ya Soft Lyke A Pop-tart//
GETCHA ASS STRAIGHT NIGGA
BEFOE I U GET BREAK'D NIGGA//


Juzt A Lil Some Some
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Old 09-10-2006, 11:31 PM   #12
 
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yo i aint mad cause this rap shit is easy
and you better believe
ill empty the clip all i needs a reason to squeeze
you the type to ejaculate before your wife fucks you
the type to start screamin before the knife cuts
ill slit your fuckin throat so blood squirts when you spoke
but i aint never killed anyone but test me and that last sentence
could become a pre tense
but honestly im not really wit that murder shit get caught wit a burner shit
but i will ike turner a bitch (bwsdonttalktopolice)
even though i know you in good with the precient
thats why the cops just knocked on my door we have reason to belive
i shut the shit then right in they face went to the pc
and another one of ya wack rhymes was on the screen
so ask me am i scared to lose?
not at all
Scared to die?
let me fall
Think im fake
just test me dog
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Old 09-10-2006, 11:35 PM   #13
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good shit my niggga keep at it dont worry bout BWSWeCantRapForShit
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Old 09-10-2006, 11:52 PM   #14
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dat Was Hideous Yo I Can Go Back N Fourth
Nigga I'll Go Plat W/o A Beat Frum Scott Storch//
N-e Lil Nigga Who Wanna Scarap Or Rap
Get Lay'd Down, Simple Lyke Dat//
Ratta Tat Tat I Put Whole In Ya Back//
Call Me Pac Cuz I Came Back Az A Mack//
U D/k Shyt, U D/k Jack U Soft Lyke Ma Girls Pussy Flapz//
Next Time Just Holla
N Maybe I'll Hook U Up Witta Dolla//
Bum Ass Nigga
Suck A Thumb Ass Nigga//
Hollaback


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Old 09-11-2006, 12:03 AM   #15
 
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haha
shit you wanna murder me why wait
just plz for the sake of rap save your ''gangsta'' shit for myspace
ill lyricly assasinate you
vebaly decapitate you
snatch your purse 3 lines nigga thats all your worth
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Old 09-11-2006, 12:12 AM   #16
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so U Do Reely Wnat Beef?
Niggaz Git Layd Da Fukk Off Dey Feet//
Nigga U Not Worth 2 Dead Ass ******s
Now Stfu Nd Put A Gun To Ur Head Nd Sqweeze Da Trigger
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its more likely for me to put a gun to my own head and pull the trigga
then you cause you would be to scared to pull it nigga
but you beatin me is simply a mircale
and fuck guns im tryin to keep it lyrical
ok this whole battle thing was fun but honestly answer this cause im curious
dog is you serious??
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Old 09-11-2006, 12:57 AM   #18
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im Serious Az Can B
Fuckin Witta Grimey Nigga Lyke Me
Can Result In U Being Deceased//
Juzt A Lil Bitch Mo
Den U Gon Git Layd On Da Floo
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im done these pussy rhymes is hurtin my eyes
if you wanna continue then go head have a good time
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Lil pussy u scared as fukk
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Old 09-11-2006, 10:18 PM   #21
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Lmfaooooooo Bwsweliketosuckdick Cant Fuckin Rhyme

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Old 09-12-2006, 01:35 AM   #22
 
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for real 1
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