check it out...

PhazeG-unit50 · 09-09-2006, 04:42 AM

let me know wat yall think.....il take advice.....criticism......dont care just say wat you feel...

yo, this is my second time spittin and i aint fittin to lose
front on me, and you could meet the bottoom of my shoes
while ya layin on the ground, ill snatch all of your jewels
some of the peeps up in here is fools, im just humble and cool
be-freind me, ill hav ya droolin of the dro
bumpin some ice cube, while im blowin perfect O's
im pretty lyrical yo, like i said it before
the journey it takes you on is unbelievable
so before i rip the mic, i take a rip of the pipe
yea i guess you could label me as "unsigned hype"
my words are fully ripe, and ready to get spit
so when my shit comes out it's an instant hit
i never quit, my shit is legit, your throat will get slit
it seems like my words are comin from the bottom of a pit
like i lost em',.but then i finally found em
and i will never succumb to another dumb MC
ima just do me and go on a lyrical killin spree
and some of you might agree, that the key is
to rhyme at a certain degree, that no one can touch
thats why im always hittin the clutch, into the next gear of rhymes
man but these hard times of slingin them dimes, comittin them crimes
are just playin with my mind, sometimes i cant even rhyme
but im fine, dont mean to complain, it aint no thang
cuz in the end it will all come back to you, like a boomerang
but hell i aint givin up, im goin out with a bang!

Godz illa · 09-09-2006, 04:48 AM

ive heard worse.

Young_Nicks · 09-11-2006, 08:33 PM

Yea man thats pretty tight for ur second song

09-09-2006, 04:42 AM	#1
PhazeG-unit50 $...Paid In Full...$ Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: West Coast... Posts: 1,029 Repped: 42 Repped 494 Times in 84 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	check it out... check it out... let me know wat yall think.....il take advice.....criticism......dont care just say wat you feel... yo, this is my second time spittin and i aint fittin to lose front on me, and you could meet the bottoom of my shoes while ya layin on the ground, ill snatch all of your jewels some of the peeps up in here is fools, im just humble and cool be-freind me, ill hav ya droolin of the dro bumpin some ice cube, while im blowin perfect O's im pretty lyrical yo, like i said it before the journey it takes you on is unbelievable so before i rip the mic, i take a rip of the pipe yea i guess you could label me as "unsigned hype" my words are fully ripe, and ready to get spit so when my shit comes out it's an instant hit i never quit, my shit is legit, your throat will get slit it seems like my words are comin from the bottom of a pit like i lost em',.but then i finally found em and i will never succumb to another dumb MC ima just do me and go on a lyrical killin spree and some of you might agree, that the key is to rhyme at a certain degree, that no one can touch thats why im always hittin the clutch, into the next gear of rhymes man but these hard times of slingin them dimes, comittin them crimes are just playin with my mind, sometimes i cant even rhyme but im fine, dont mean to complain, it aint no thang cuz in the end it will all come back to you, like a boomerang but hell i aint givin up, im goin out with a bang!

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09-09-2006, 04:48 AM	#2
Godz illa GLK- THEonlyFOLK -GLK Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 377 Repped: 3 Repped 5 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ive heard worse.

09-11-2006, 08:33 PM	#3
Young_Nicks Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 936 Repped: 62 Repped 131 Times in 58 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yea man thats pretty tight for ur second song