my first freestyle...

PhazeG-unit50 · 09-09-2006, 03:00 AM

this is my first attempt to freestyle so just remember that when your reading it lol.....dont really know how to put together verses correctly but i know how to rhyme....anybody got some tips for me reply..

yo....ima flow happily,you dont have the audacity,... to come at me
cuz i,flow like a real G,puttin it down since i was three,so when u try to come and check me, you better come correct,B,cuz i respect but wreck my foes when i spit their throat just close,lyrics murderous like edgar allen po's
as im rhymin i can see the mic disinigrating, and peeps just debating
whether im the best or not, cuz im hott,
and i, only use boom bap beats , so when i rap your in for a treat,
my words they just put you to sleep, permanantly,
other MC's ,lyrically,physically, medaphorically, dont come close to me
when its time to go, i just deliver, my cold words make you shiver
shits as trecharous as the amazon river,dont know how i rhyme so clever
you will never, witness anything like this, ever again, cuz this is just a straight up ten out of ten.....

dLittles · 09-09-2006, 03:33 AM

if they even bother.... they will say somethin. ya might not like it though. 85/15 up in here. it's good for your first time. anyone could always do better. takes time. my opinion is to even off your lines the best that you can. don't run on... like where you got... you better come correct. overall it's good for a first. look at it like... if you were in the record store, would you buy it.....

09-09-2006, 03:00 AM	#1
PhazeG-unit50 $...Paid In Full...$ Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: West Coast... Posts: 1,029 Repped: 42 Repped 494 Times in 84 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	my first freestyle... my first freestyle... this is my first attempt to freestyle so just remember that when your reading it lol.....dont really know how to put together verses correctly but i know how to rhyme....anybody got some tips for me reply.. yo....ima flow happily,you dont have the audacity,... to come at me cuz i,flow like a real G,puttin it down since i was three,so when u try to come and check me, you better come correct,B,cuz i respect but wreck my foes when i spit their throat just close,lyrics murderous like edgar allen po's as im rhymin i can see the mic disinigrating, and peeps just debating whether im the best or not, cuz im hott, and i, only use boom bap beats , so when i rap your in for a treat, my words they just put you to sleep, permanantly, other MC's ,lyrically,physically, medaphorically, dont come close to me when its time to go, i just deliver, my cold words make you shiver shits as trecharous as the amazon river,dont know how i rhyme so clever you will never, witness anything like this, ever again, cuz this is just a straight up ten out of ten.....

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09-09-2006, 03:33 AM	#2
dLittles KrakKihL Inc Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: virginia Posts: 92 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	if they even bother.... they will say somethin. ya might not like it though. 85/15 up in here. it's good for your first time. anyone could always do better. takes time. my opinion is to even off your lines the best that you can. don't run on... like where you got... you better come correct. overall it's good for a first. look at it like... if you were in the record store, would you buy it.....