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Old 09-07-2006, 04:13 PM   #1
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Default ^.^....Rap or Poem....^.^

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U wake up to distrubance, a short but loud noise,
sound of a car back-firing, but ya think its them toys.
Rushin up to get outa bed, rummaging around,
lookin for the silencer head, grabbin ur gat from the ground.

Openin the door, u hear footsteps, prayin they aint goin in that direction.
Just hopin u can get to ur child, give em that last love n affection.
Walkin out ur room, kid constanly on ur mind,
painful feelings rippin, tearin u up from inside.
From the outside u got the cold blood filled air, holdin ur breath.
another strange smell tingling ur nose, just hoping its the meth.
Gettin closer to the door, loadin ur calli.
Hear slight movements, gta be the cats in the back alley.

Turnin the handle, tha sweat drippin from ur head,
prayin, just prayin for ur lil girl, prayin she aint dead.
The door fully open , still alive, but daughter looks like she seen a ghost,
stuffed wiv her head back, right back against the bed post.
She not even blinking, now ur brain cant start soothing,
grabbin ur piece tighter, tighter... as u see sumfin moving.
U see liquid hittin the laminate floor as u lookin at the ground,
This ur baby girl u cant take a chance, lettin off the whole dam round..

Prising open ur eyes to see ur girl even whiter,
Blood all over the room.. u get a glimpse of the lighter.
Man wearin a ski mask, shot in the neck, breathing but on the floor,
Grab ur girl bust back out, dont even check, just run through that corridoor.
No key on u and the door locked, locked tight
Ur gon go alone now...ima be right back alrite.
Openin the small window next to the frondoor,
u hear screamin n cryin as u lower her to the outside floor.....

Flames come gushin through ur hall, like in a bank raid,
bein brave for ur lil girl, pretending u aint afraid.

Last look at her as u touch the glass and wave bye,
the flames come up closer, ur girl see's them reflecting from ur eye.

hearin screams an cryin as she see's u drop to the floor.
........cryin, just cryin, til she cant hear that cryin no more.
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