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Old 09-05-2006, 11:50 PM   #1
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str8 punchez..... duck ma'fu.kkaz... d.j is here

Str8 MURDA!

turn ya grill into a 'STRAWBERRY SMOOTHEE' wen i shove ya 'FACE IN A BLENDER', beatin g? letz just say datz 'UNCERTAIN' lyke 'OLIVIAZ GENDER'

in itz jus startin.....

be careful wut yu bring~to~tha~boss, cuz if not yu wont be livin-dy.ke, sry homie but ya in~for~a~loss cuz mah 'SENTENCEZ will leave yu LOCKED UP and I aint talkin bout da PRISON-TYPE
i got 'PITCHERZ' in mah hood, dat can 'BEAM'-ya-ock, wen 'WATCHIN BASKETBALL' iz da only time youve 'SEEN-A-BLOCK'
step to dis n watch ya team-git-rocked, cuz gz lyke a 'MAID IN A ROLEX STORE' cuz ill fuckin 'CLEAN-YA-CLOCK'
i neva answer wen da fedz-knock, cuz ill got in mah crib iz WEED, HENNY n sum fuckin DEAD-COPZ
lyke 'BLOODZ IN DESERTZ' im 'RED-HOT', im a feared battler, all mah CALLOUTZ are so EMPTY catz b startin to think all my THREADZ-LOCKED
fuck yu bitchez dat voted fo dat bitch-royal, so yu say ya chickz-loyal? i hadnt even made eye~contact, n dat bitch started givin-me-head, dont be mad i left ya fly~momz~tapped, n now dat bitch b givin me mo 'PAGEZ' then dat FUCKIN 'INFINITY-THREAD'
BULLETZ<<watch as mah GUN-SHOWER-DEEZ, homie ill 'PUT THA SHELLZ IN YA MOUTH' lyke 'BASEBALL PLAYERZ EATIN SUN-FLOWER-SEEDZ'
dont be a 'DICK~HOMIE' cuz ya 'MOMZ-SUCKZ-THAT', i can tell ya shitz~phony, so imma put more 'HOLEZ IN YA' then tha 'BACK OV A FUCKIN VON-DUTCH-HAT'
homie from da way yu look i can just tell-ya-borin, so dont test~mah~clique cuz we got techz~n~shit, n well bring da 'CLIPSE TO YA HOOD' just lyke wen 'PHARELL-WENT-TOURIN'
i alwayz got a piece~on~me even wen I write-mah-barz, im a pimp nigga, i had ya 'NISSAN(niece on)'-ME n i dont mean da 'TYPE-OV-CAR'
i got a BLACK-GLOCK dat I MIGHT-PULL n just SHOWER-YA-MANZ, n fo ya gurly i got a FAT-C.OCK n a EIFFEL(eye full) lyke da TOWER-IN-FRANCE
wid jus a pen n pad homie i can ROUTE-YA-WRITTENZ, i dropped 'TWO PIECEZ IN DA OPEN MIC' n i got '20/20', and NO! im 'NOT TALKIN-BOUT-MAH-VISION'<<< (DAYUM..!!!)
homie yu already on thin~ice fo thinkin yu even TOUCHIN-MAH-KEYZ, so lyke 'MEDATATING SIAMESE TWINZ' ill make yu 'THINK~TWICE' bout eva FUCKIN-WID-G

chea.............

Ill

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Old 09-05-2006, 11:54 PM   #2
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that was good, kinda stretched, but the punches were hard

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Old 09-06-2006, 03:45 AM   #3
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word,
im gettin adjusted to da format round here,
dass da reason for da stretched barz
preciate feed

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Old 09-06-2006, 02:23 PM   #4
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ya your bars are a little long, and it sounds like your a rookie to the battling thing, cuz vet's know using "thats the only way..." to play off a punch or metaphor, is forbidden, its kindergarten wordplay.
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