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Old 08-20-2006, 04:14 PM   #1
 
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When I Cry, I Leave A Deep-Puddle,
Cuz I'm Stepped On Like The Streets-Rubble
My Hearts Played Like Balls Of Juggle
I Fight This Struggle Hope To Diagnose-The-Flaws
Since The Planes Fly-Into-The-Walls,
Im Dieing Slow Like Jesus Crucified To-The-Cross
Sense-Of-Humour, But This Racism-Is-A-Rumour
Interacts With Bad Seeds Creating A Untreatable-Tumour
Mother Knows, Soon-Her, Son Will Have Left-The-Earth
Coffin Will Step-The-Hearse, Death-Occurs,
When I Was Alive My Breathe Would-Hurt

Air-Was-Exhalin, But My Neck Was Forced Hailin-Down
Foes Happy, Im Failing-Now, My Eyes Staring-Around
Heart In A Emptyness, Invisable-Frown, See My Plastic-Smile
Clownin-Away, Showin No Essense Of Bein-Afraid, Jus-Bein-Wild
Emotion, Was Deep Like The Flows In The Ocean
My Eyes Forcin To See Horror And Poverty It Was Noticin
I Was Thorough-Within, Sometimes I Wish I Had Split-Skin
So Maybe I'd Easily Fit-In, But I Appreciate The Dirty-Grins
There Was A-Time, I Would Cry, Wishin For Suicide
From A Deep Hole Soon I'll Rise
Momz Said I Was A Gods Gift, A Shinin Star From The Sky
I Tried To Kept-Hope, Outta No Where I Stepped-To-The-Rope
I Loved Everyone, Cept Myself, So Now Im In A Death-Choke
Learned To Accept All Races Of Folkz,
Judge There Heart, And Not The The Actions They Provoked
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Note:This is poetry. . .feed would be much appreciated. .thxn u
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Old 08-20-2006, 09:46 PM   #2
 
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Feed me y'all c'mon
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Old 08-20-2006, 09:47 PM   #3
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tight shit mayne 8.5/10
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Old 08-20-2006, 10:12 PM   #4
 
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No 'Fence bro. .but u mind givin me real feed? I'll try to hit u up wit some aswell. .
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Old 08-22-2006, 01:12 PM   #5
 
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more feed please
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Old 08-23-2006, 02:40 PM   #6
 
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Damn. .why y'all sleep so much. .wake up
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Old 08-23-2006, 02:46 PM   #7
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this was nice overall
flowed well, had alright multies but couldve been betta
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Old 08-23-2006, 05:47 PM   #8
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