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Join Date: Oct 2005
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When I Cry, I Leave A Deep-Puddle, Cuz I'm Stepped On Like The Streets-Rubble My Hearts Played Like Balls Of Juggle I Fight This Struggle Hope To Diagnose-The-Flaws Since The Planes Fly-Into-The-Walls, Im Dieing Slow Like Jesus Crucified To-The-Cross Sense-Of-Humour, But This Racism-Is-A-Rumour Interacts With Bad Seeds Creating A Untreatable-Tumour Mother Knows, Soon-Her, Son Will Have Left-The-Earth Coffin Will Step-The-Hearse, Death-Occurs, When I Was Alive My Breathe Would-Hurt Air-Was-Exhalin, But My Neck Was Forced Hailin-Down Foes Happy, Im Failing-Now, My Eyes Staring-Around Heart In A Emptyness, Invisable-Frown, See My Plastic-Smile Clownin-Away, Showin No Essense Of Bein-Afraid, Jus-Bein-Wild Emotion, Was Deep Like The Flows In The Ocean My Eyes Forcin To See Horror And Poverty It Was Noticin I Was Thorough-Within, Sometimes I Wish I Had Split-Skin So Maybe I'd Easily Fit-In, But I Appreciate The Dirty-Grins There Was A-Time, I Would Cry, Wishin For Suicide From A Deep Hole Soon I'll Rise Momz Said I Was A Gods Gift, A Shinin Star From The Sky I Tried To Kept-Hope, Outta No Where I Stepped-To-The-Rope I Loved Everyone, Cept Myself, So Now Im In A Death-Choke Learned To Accept All Races Of Folkz, Judge There Heart, And Not The The Actions They Provoked [Outro: Goodbye] Note:This is poetry. . .feed would be much appreciated. .thxn u |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
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Feed me y'all c'mon
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tight shit mayne 8.5/10
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No 'Fence bro. .but u mind givin me real feed? I'll try to hit u up wit some aswell. .
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Join Date: Oct 2005
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more feed please
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Join Date: Oct 2005
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Damn. .why y'all sleep so much. .wake up
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Go play somewhere im busy
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps
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this was nice overall
flowed well, had alright multies but couldve been betta check out my free "stay shinin"
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: UK
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its ite ..........
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