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Old 08-19-2006, 02:21 AM   #1
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Old 08-19-2006, 10:43 AM   #2
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Old 08-19-2006, 11:27 AM   #3
 
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Yo man no disrespect but i wasnt feelin this....i think u need to rok on ur rhymin a lil bit homie...keep at it tho!
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Old 08-19-2006, 06:00 PM   #4
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^Lol, Uh Huh...

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Old 08-19-2006, 09:49 PM   #5
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Old 08-19-2006, 09:59 PM   #6
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yea u do gotta work on ur rymes and shit...only line I liked was the Chris Reeves one
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Old 08-19-2006, 10:03 PM   #7
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that pill line would be hot if you waz a female

the rest was okay
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Old 08-19-2006, 10:40 PM   #8
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da verse was iight but u shoula add'd mor 2 it so ppl could see yo full potential feel me but da hol thyn was iight
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