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Old 08-16-2006, 07:42 PM   #1
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jonny's problem (true story)

this is a true story about a kid i used 2 chill wit

relax n picture this...its no ordinary story
remember love life more than any glory
its about a clyde wit no bonnie
see...if u wanna get high u know jonny

one night jonny snorted all into is brain he never was the same
he'd do anythin like sell his chain i told him never love cocaine
wanted 2 sit high as a tower rise i pointed out how it over powered guys
but he wouldnt stop always goin 4 the powdered prize
it was a nice night wit beers us all sittin around fire
jonny pointed 2 the sky n said he wanted 2 be found higer
saw kr, his own homie, drop his wallet jonny snatched it in insane desire
see kr asked if we found it...i guess jonny became a liar
the wallet had an atm card wit savings 4 college in the bank
jonny remembered the password had only his knowledge to thank
withdrew 500 bucks...now hes walkin his own plank
he was on coke facial expression staring...gawking n all blank
jonny's high was fallin...he'd do anythin instead crash
he took the money 2 the dope man said here its 500 hundred cash
to me theres no way that i could feel the least bit rewarded
im laughin cuz jonny forget that his steal released once recorded.........

the following day

next day now kr gets a call from the fuckin slime police....(fuck 5-0 !!)
gets the news sum1 stole his shit thinks when will crime decrease
they show him the video but he dont believe it tho
all to achieve the blow kr wonders how could it be his bro
he thought his hardest when they asked if he would press charges
figured jonny needed help but wanted him 2 rot as his stress enlarges
he decided to have the cop just talk to his mother
maybe jail 4 sum other but still saw jonny as his brother
kr wouldnt lock up his boy or make amends so they're no longer friends
this how the story ends remember when u look at ya friends....
.....look wit a stronger lens
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Old 08-16-2006, 07:47 PM   #2
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wow.. that was the best free ive ever read.. ever..
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Old 08-16-2006, 07:52 PM   #3
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sooooo how sarcastic r u bein right now??? lol
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Old 08-16-2006, 07:55 PM   #4
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nah man.. that was real fly.. 10/10.. i loved it..
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Old 08-16-2006, 08:00 PM   #5
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aight good lookz then man...ur known 4 fuckin wit peeps...haha....


its kinda sad wut he did...stealin from our own friend n shit....no one fucks wit him no more.....
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i didnt think it was sad, i thought it was funny.. i'm glad he died of pneumonia..

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Ha ha thats some funny shit^^^^ good verse dude
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Old 08-17-2006, 02:46 AM   #8
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best verse ever..
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i wish u were jonny...if u were jonny jonnys problem would be rapping
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Old 08-17-2006, 03:31 AM   #10
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prolly better than Muddy Puddles by Viper..
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am feelin dis man
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