::::PROJECT--_--NIGGAS::::--------------------First Freestyle While In GLK

Blue-Da-Vinci · 08-16-2006, 06:08 PM

Essentially we the product of the century /
Effortlessly tha energy of the industry/
Reppin glk all day fuck what the haters say/
We gon get that pay split u in half wid da trey.../
POUND make a loud sound hit da ground/
Bitches runnin scared when they here G-L-K around/
Skip all the commercial contraversial processed bullshit/
Back to the gangbangin days when u loaded a full clip/
Imma smack the black outta you if you want it wid me/
Snitch tryna track the crack wen its gettin transported il-le-ga-ley/
Legaly iv been granted a warrent to kill all you mothafukers/
Your rhymes are comedian shit you a bunch of mothafukin cris tuckers/
Im the king of wereva the fuck i go allways get to fuck wen im wid ya hoe/
She all on me i keep tellin the bitch no but she cant help it allways tryna blow/
Fuckin around you get throwed/
12 inch to ya chest you about to get blowed/
Shootin off at you ******.s kill one for the road/
when its on its on lock and load/
Holdin it down for the homies in jail reppin T-shirts for the ones that aint got bail/
U blind to ma greatness better off readin brail bullet in ya T-hurts so u tuckin ya tail/
Only thing im ever tucking is the piece when im cornered by the punk police/
Bitches finkin they runnin the streets dont commit a crime and you still gon get yo ass beat/

Blue-Da-Vinci · 08-16-2006, 06:10 PM

^^^feedback^^^

In Cats

Rating

Out Of 10

10=hott

0=shit

LethalIsILL · 08-16-2006, 06:23 PM

this is decent, had good flow and multies
7/10

2006mtowers2006 · 08-16-2006, 06:25 PM

outa 10 i wud say 8 still hate glk but tha free was gud liked how ya did tha project niggas theme

G-Shook · 08-16-2006, 07:00 PM

5.......................kinda boring!

L.P. a.k.a Yung~One · 08-16-2006, 09:22 PM

im feelin it , it was decent but i think u could do betta 1 outta 10 i say a 7.5

keep cumin wit it

Dr.P Tha Revolution · 08-16-2006, 11:47 PM

I'd give dis a 7/10 it was pretty good, but u can do better. Keep at it.

Dan Russell · 08-17-2006, 12:44 AM

6.5 , needed a lil more, jus OK

Blue-Da-Vinci · 08-17-2006, 05:21 AM

thnks 4 the feedback i admit i cn do better

.::Mc-TaZo::. · 08-17-2006, 06:06 AM

i like it ill give u 8/10

Blue-Da-Vinci · 08-17-2006, 07:38 AM

look out for ma collab soon ............btw lol @hh earlier ya huurd

Lyrical Coqui · 08-17-2006, 09:42 AM

5/10 not too good but not completely whack

Antidote · 08-18-2006, 12:44 AM

5/10 some good parts, some bad

Ri$e_88 · 08-18-2006, 04:45 PM

i'd say 7/10.......... it was alright but couldve been better

Blue-Da-Vinci · 08-25-2006, 01:59 PM

uppin for feed

-K.P- · 08-25-2006, 02:06 PM

8 outta 10 nice flow, good multies, tight rhymes, lacked something though - maybe punches

Shogun · 08-25-2006, 02:40 PM

Spend more time learning about rhyme schemes & creating some nice concepts instead of pissing around with bolding words & making words multi-coloured - seriously, wtf is that about? LAWL.

0/10.

Blue-Da-Vinci · 08-26-2006, 03:50 PM

eh yo shut the fuck up shogun before i pull out ma shotgun n make you rest in peace like big pun.............R.I.P shogun *no offence to big pun*

Shogun · 08-26-2006, 03:55 PM

HAHAHAHAHA, that has to be one of the most pitiful attempts at a diss I've ever had directed at me.

Good luck with that though, LAWL.

Antidote · 08-26-2006, 04:13 PM

damn smoke make a new free already instead of bumpin the same one for a week. damn let it die

y.A.S.d. · 08-26-2006, 04:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by $moke

eh yo shut the fuck up shogun before i pull out ma shotgun n make you rest in peace like big pun.............R.I.P shogun *no offence to big pun*

catching feelings?

Lil Lay · 08-26-2006, 04:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by $moke

eh yo shut the fuck up shogun before i pull out ma shotgun n make you rest in peace like big pun.............R.I.P shogun *no offence to big pun*

Lmao

Don't shoot the screen man.

But seriously did you think that was scary in any way possible?

BlackWallStrippers · 08-26-2006, 04:56 PM

$moke you a window shoppahhhh mad at Shogun, I think I know why =)
$moke you a window shoppahhhh can't even hold a shotgun, oh my :O!

Btw 6/10, stop posing lil bitch

Oh yeah, and Markco, get yo gay ass outta here, pussy ass nigga

y.A.S.d. · 08-26-2006, 04:56 PM

its hilarious!
look at him catching feelings online xD

why putting it on the forum if you cant take critic?
you cant only expect positive replies
imo its lame too
so?
does that make you wanna get your gun and kill me? xDDD

Blue-Da-Vinci · 08-27-2006, 03:44 PM

fukin homos hatin on me haha get ma dik outta ya mouth seriously n lmao it wasnt a diss but imma diss all yall asses on tuesday wen i get bak u fukin pussies

08-16-2006, 06:08 PM	#1
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Repped: 434 Repped 552 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	::::PROJECT--_--NIGGAS::::--------------------First Freestyle While In GLK ::::PROJECT--_--NIGGAS::::--------------------First Freestyle While In GLK Essentially we the product of the century / Effortlessly tha energy of the industry/ Reppin glk all day fuck what the haters say/ We gon get that pay split u in half wid da trey.../ POUND make a loud sound hit da ground/ Bitches runnin scared when they here G-L-K around/ Skip all the commercial contraversial processed bullshit/ Back to the gangbangin days when u loaded a full clip/ Imma smack the black outta you if you want it wid me/ Snitch tryna track the crack wen its gettin transported il-le-ga-ley/ Legaly iv been granted a warrent to kill all you mothafukers/ Your rhymes are comedian shit you a bunch of mothafukin cris tuckers/ Im the king of wereva the fuck i go allways get to fuck wen im wid ya hoe/ She all on me i keep tellin the bitch no but she cant help it allways tryna blow/ Fuckin around you get throwed/ 12 inch to ya chest you about to get blowed/ Shootin off at you ****.s kill one for the road/ when its on its on lock and load/ Holdin it down for the homies in jail reppin T-shirts for the ones that aint got bail/ U blind to ma greatness better off readin brail bullet in ya T-hurts so u tuckin ya tail/ Only thing im ever tucking is the piece when im cornered by the punk police/ Bitches finkin they runnin the streets dont commit a crime and you still gon get yo ass beat**/

08-16-2006, 06:23 PM	#3
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,013 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	this is decent, had good flow and multies 7/10 __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

08-16-2006, 07:00 PM	#5
G-Shook BANN ME IF U CAN! Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 2,077 Repped: 2 Repped 107 Times in 25 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	5.......................kinda boring! __________________ "...Overrated."

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08-16-2006, 06:10 PM	#2
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Repped: 434 Repped 552 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^feedback^^^ In Cats Rating Out Of 10 10=hott 0=shit

08-16-2006, 06:25 PM	#4
2006mtowers2006 !!!buck the world!!! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 209 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	outa 10 i wud say 8 still hate glk but tha free was gud liked how ya did tha project niggas theme

08-16-2006, 09:22 PM	#6
L.P. a.k.a Yung~One G~L~K Join Date: May 2006 Location: miami//dade county//305 Posts: 829 Repped: 4 Repped 24 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	im feelin it , it was decent but i think u could do betta 1 outta 10 i say a 7.5 keep cumin wit it

08-16-2006, 11:47 PM	#7
Dr.P Tha Revolution Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: New Jersey Posts: 324 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'd give dis a 7/10 it was pretty good, but u can do better. Keep at it.

08-17-2006, 12:44 AM	#8
Dan Russell D-Block 4 Life Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Perth City Posts: 1,374 Repped: 6 Repped 34 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	6.5 , needed a lil more, jus OK

08-17-2006, 05:21 AM	#9
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Repped: 434 Repped 552 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thnks 4 the feedback i admit i cn do better

08-17-2006, 06:06 AM	#10
.::Mc-TaZo::. !!UNIQUE.GANGSTA.CLICK!! Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: !!...U.K...!! Posts: 40 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like it ill give u 8/10

08-17-2006, 07:38 AM	#11
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Repped: 434 Repped 552 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	look out for ma collab soon ............btw lol @hh earlier ya huurd

08-17-2006, 09:42 AM	#12
Lyrical Coqui Lyrically Sick Rican Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: 254 Texas Posts: 514 Repped: 16 Repped 48 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	5/10 not too good but not completely whack

08-18-2006, 12:44 AM	#13
Antidote Beck Unit Don Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,263 Repped: 104 Repped 100 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	5/10 some good parts, some bad

08-18-2006, 04:45 PM	#14
Ri$e_88 Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: T.Dot (Toronto) Posts: 1,416 Repped: 347 Repped 747 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	i'd say 7/10.......... it was alright but couldve been better

08-25-2006, 01:59 PM	#15
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Repped: 434 Repped 552 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin for feed

08-25-2006, 02:06 PM	#16
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	8 outta 10 nice flow, good multies, tight rhymes, lacked something though - maybe punches

08-25-2006, 02:40 PM	#17
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Spend more time learning about rhyme schemes & creating some nice concepts instead of pissing around with bolding words & making words multi-coloured - seriously, wtf is that about? LAWL. 0/10.

08-26-2006, 03:50 PM	#18
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Repped: 434 Repped 552 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	eh yo shut the fuck up shogun before i pull out ma shotgun n make you rest in peace like big pun.............R.I.P shogun no offence to big pun

08-26-2006, 03:55 PM	#19
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	HAHAHAHAHA, that has to be one of the most pitiful attempts at a diss I've ever had directed at me. Good luck with that though, LAWL.

08-26-2006, 04:13 PM	#20
Antidote Beck Unit Don Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,263 Repped: 104 Repped 100 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	damn smoke make a new free already instead of bumpin the same one for a week. damn let it die

08-26-2006, 04:56 PM	#23
BlackWallStrippers Hood Surgeon Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In the fucking OR motherfucker Posts: 1,032 Repped: 262 Repped 114 Times in 69 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	$moke you a window shoppahhhh mad at Shogun, I think I know why =) $moke you a window shoppahhhh can't even hold a shotgun, oh my :O! Btw 6/10, stop posing lil bitch Oh yeah, and Markco, get yo gay ass outta here, pussy ass nigga

08-26-2006, 04:56 PM	#24
y.A.S.d. Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 32 Repped: 0 Repped 3 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	its hilarious! look at him catching feelings online xD why putting it on the forum if you cant take critic? you cant only expect positive replies imo its lame too so? does that make you wanna get your gun and kill me? xDDD

08-27-2006, 03:44 PM	#25
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Repped: 434 Repped 552 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	fukin homos hatin on me haha get ma dik outta ya mouth seriously n lmao it wasnt a diss but imma diss all yall asses on tuesday wen i get bak u fukin pussies