Who Am I

ShadyKid · 08-15-2006, 12:25 PM

Im only 12 ive been rappin for 1 year,

Hes something i started yesterday:

Yeh Dirty F, i rap under that name/
Ever since i was 4 ive had no brain/
Cuz my nursery teacher strangled it with a chain/
After she caught me playin a rapper game/
Now i dont play, but rap is my game/
But not only cuz i wanna wear a fly chain/
I dont do it for personal gain/
Or for world fame/
I do it to let out my unbearable pain/
To make people feel happy, to entertain/
With my insane lyrics/
My lyrics are insane/
And you dont wanna mess with the flow maayyne/
ish at 14 ill probably on cociaanne/

Can u leave feed plz, and tell me if i should take out/add anything.

Thanks

-Young Captain- · 08-15-2006, 01:01 PM

....Ummm This Was 'Decent', But try and up your lyrical skills..... but keep writing shit and you'll get alot better... keep droppin...

Stay up, check mines "26 Lines"...

ShadyKid · 08-15-2006, 01:22 PM

Ive checked it out, what do u really mean by "uppin" my lyrical skillz?

red eye · 08-15-2006, 04:39 PM

wtf

no propz

-Tha FreeStyle King- · 08-15-2006, 05:40 PM

this boi is 12...lol learn some methaphors and multies

Dr.P Tha Revolution · 08-15-2006, 05:49 PM

Lol wasnt feelin dis shit at all. Keep tryin tho.

G-Shook · 08-15-2006, 06:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ericedwards1234

this boi is 12...lol learn some methaphors and multies

ur 14 so STFU kid!

Dan Russell · 08-15-2006, 11:43 PM

eric's 14, what wait a minute, r u serious.... fuck, ok then. thats funny.
anyway, for shadykid-

jus as what young said, keep writin', but most important in my eyes, non-stop listen to rap music, tha type you like, (i feel Jadakiss is good for lil MC's, he jus that damn good, Harlem World Flashbacks, fuck Mase ha ha) yall get tha talent for rhymin without even meanin too that way.... keep poppin'.......

ShadyKid · 08-16-2006, 05:23 AM

^Thanks, ill download some Jadakiss

Dan Russell · 08-16-2006, 06:57 AM

good fuckin idea, here are some song ideas
-get money feat. sheek
-tha passion of kiss
-air it out
-by your side
-d-block thugs

but whatever you can get,, papoose is not bad either,

-hood pride
-lets play monopoly

ShadyKid · 08-16-2006, 07:30 AM

Im quite a big Papoose fan, got The Best Of Papoose Mixtape and 1.5 Million Dollar Man.

Thanks for the Jada track names

08-15-2006, 12:25 PM	#1
ShadyKid Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: London Posts: 27 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Who Am I Who Am I Im only 12 ive been rappin for 1 year, Hes something i started yesterday: Yeh Dirty F, i rap under that name/ Ever since i was 4 ive had no brain/ Cuz my nursery teacher strangled it with a chain/ After she caught me playin a rapper game/ Now i dont play, but rap is my game/ But not only cuz i wanna wear a fly chain/ I dont do it for personal gain/ Or for world fame/ I do it to let out my unbearable pain/ To make people feel happy, to entertain/ With my insane lyrics/ My lyrics are insane/ And you dont wanna mess with the flow maayyne/ ish at 14 ill probably on cociaanne/ Can u leave feed plz, and tell me if i should take out/add anything. Thanks

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08-15-2006, 01:01 PM	#2
-Young Captain- RECORD: 2-0 (2 KO, 0 TKO) Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 141 Repped: 0 Repped 42 Times in 7 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	....Ummm This Was 'Decent', But try and up your lyrical skills..... but keep writing shit and you'll get alot better... keep droppin... Stay up, check mines "26 Lines"...

08-15-2006, 01:22 PM	#3
ShadyKid Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: London Posts: 27 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ive checked it out, what do u really mean by "uppin" my lyrical skillz?

08-15-2006, 04:39 PM	#4
red eye Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIA Posts: 1,070 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	wtf no propz

08-15-2006, 05:40 PM	#5
-Tha FreeStyle King- Banned Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 1,719 Repped: 0 Repped 32 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this boi is 12...lol learn some methaphors and multies

08-15-2006, 05:49 PM	#6
Dr.P Tha Revolution Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: New Jersey Posts: 324 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Lol wasnt feelin dis shit at all. Keep tryin tho.

08-15-2006, 11:43 PM	#8
Dan Russell D-Block 4 Life Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Perth City Posts: 1,374 Repped: 6 Repped 34 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	eric's 14, what wait a minute, r u serious.... fuck, ok then. thats funny. anyway, for shadykid- jus as what young said, keep writin', but most important in my eyes, non-stop listen to rap music, tha type you like, (i feel Jadakiss is good for lil MC's, he jus that damn good, Harlem World Flashbacks, fuck Mase ha ha) yall get tha talent for rhymin without even meanin too that way.... keep poppin'.......

08-16-2006, 05:23 AM	#9
ShadyKid Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: London Posts: 27 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^Thanks, ill download some Jadakiss

08-16-2006, 06:57 AM	#10
Dan Russell D-Block 4 Life Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Perth City Posts: 1,374 Repped: 6 Repped 34 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good fuckin idea, here are some song ideas -get money feat. sheek -tha passion of kiss -air it out -by your side -d-block thugs but whatever you can get,, papoose is not bad either, -hood pride -lets play monopoly

08-16-2006, 07:30 AM	#11
ShadyKid Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: London Posts: 27 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Im quite a big Papoose fan, got The Best Of Papoose Mixtape and 1.5 Million Dollar Man. Thanks for the Jada track names