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This is dark Best bars ive ever wrote
When I talk, I bring the force of an avalanche
Youll find me breathing greenhouse gases and water in power plants With weapons forged in my paragraphs I killed time by driving a metal sword through an hourglass The Devil just fell and hit the Bishop Cause Im so heavy when I turn in my sleep, heaven and hell switch positions Misguided youths been forced to rebel chained up Mary and gave Jesus a abortion to hell lyrically priceless got a fortune to sell vibez gos against your will like being tortured in jail emotionally attached the first departed is earning a slaughter swum up a waterfall as i started burning in water arose from the river rapidly bought it lyrically bodys conduct yet fought electricty feel like a hornet keeps stinging me babies are born shit but bigger see reveal my meat beating your wife shes gets fucked harder the four metorites blind deafting your site fuckin bunch of wankers keep beatin the mic found my reason for life to set level protech devils freezing from ice blood satinist, smoke drugs making spliffs place faces in the mood its the greatest trip vibez dont follow force going genocide,showing many died recreating the holocaust my best friends are twin desert eagles enemies living dead like resident evil shooting verbal weaponry through people epitomizing beign intelegantly lethal write bars i cant afford to sing could even go on about lord of the ring im the war lord of mordoor with a broad sword commandig the orc hords
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11-06-2009, 09:26 AM
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tell me your favourite bars and gimmie help where i go
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11-17-2009, 07:39 AM
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bump..........
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11-17-2009, 04:54 PM
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This isn't very good, most of your bars are illiterate.
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11-17-2009, 06:29 PM
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how u mean illiterate?
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illiterate but honestly, i thought that was dope - I personally think you have some dope bars but you need to set them up a little better.....example: "im the war lord of mordoor with a broad sword commandig the orc hords" see that's fucking sick but the setup was "could even go on about lord of the ring" .....kind of a weak setup but work on that and you're dope, lyrics are legit
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