ShawnDaDon

no real point to these two verses just one i kicked from songs on the mixtape im about to drop The Houston Savior


Step up in the spot you know who it is
SDD bitch back to handle my biz
stay on my shit hand on the rubber grip
tough talk dont slip hollows enter tear and rip
lacerate arteries shoot often so guns are a part of me
big bank cash out the lottery
fill ur hole with dirt call it pottery
acog on the rpd marksman 3
duty is called rpgs maul
10 feet tall leave ya parapalegic cant even crawl
defend and sprawl ya soft droppin shit with tim Mcgraw
Nelly wannabe call me crazy shit st lunatic
mask yo face up feel like im throwin bricks
2 ton punches body shots throwin up lunches
slump you over doin toe touches
evry shot landed is critcial
criminal mindstate calm down dont take it so literal
controlling evrything dictatorship is my political
stature keep 2 black raptors with shell catchers
dont do no dirt i kno some body snatchers
old school dudes rolled wid da black panthers
they ask no questions need no answers
kill you so they can buy they baby graham crackers
stay heated keep the st louis ram to blast ya
ima derranged teen ready to lash out
trippin dont want me bring the rath bout
knife grippd slash shout
coming at me the wrong way homie re-route
gps now turn left dont fuck with the best
lump up ya breast call it a tumor in your chest
callin me weak equal the gore of a horror movie
insane give you the gun to shoot me



2nd verse

i aint fuckin with skinny jeans and vans
stay rockin forces baggy jeans wid my gun in my hand
Dwight Howard strength coming hard with a slam
controlling the paint crushing ya boondocks call me a saint
sucka is what i aint high level soldier sky high rank
supa paid cash out the bank
stay strapped sucka go to battle with a tank
weak dudes see a gun and they faint
yall boys guppies and this is a shark tank
expose yall your new nickname is officer ricky
write up ya best verse nicest punchlines to get me
sickest metaphores shit put together so sickly
you may win but youll never forget me
making money dawg workin on the mixtape
hard beats grimey rhymes equals a high rate
coming january 10th 2010 not one day late
so if beef i held ill give time to clean the slate
but keep hating and ill become irrate
command and conquer this game alexander the great
fuck wit me boy im the leader of this debate
no need to struggle cant help fate
fuck outta here put your vans on and skate

yo hit a nigga up with some feed good or bad all feed is appreciated

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only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy
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Lil Brizzle

no hate...but ur not even close to reaching my standard so stfu with ur garbage talk....

anyways....u need to work on ur multi syllabled rhymes...flow needs a bit of work too....concept is played out....

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S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

ShawnDaDon

i respect ur view homie
these verses were kicked from songs for a reason cuz they fucking sucked
and evrything i post on here is a fucking free so i dont put much effort or time into it

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only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy
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Braidz

dude... YOU DO NOT HAVE A FUCKING STANDARD... your shit is so bad its down in the unstandard section with the likes of Gucci Mane, Soulja Boy & OJ Da Juiceman

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"next big things infront of you your witnessing history / if everybody hates then why the fuck they keep listening" - Braidz

ShawnDaDon

damn compared to the worst rappers in history
braidz goin in on these niggas ha

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only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy
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Braidz

damn... i forgot to add vanilla ice.

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"next big things infront of you your witnessing history / if everybody hates then why the fuck they keep listening" - Braidz

ShawnDaDon

lol vanilla is better that nigga
damn u been getting dissed hard lately my dude

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only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy
Serius Jones

Braidz

yeah haha... i think mad writer on his period or sumtn


n that jigger dude... dissed me coz i stood up for thomas lol, hes a bitch

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"next big things infront of you your witnessing history / if everybody hates then why the fuck they keep listening" - Braidz

Bunny_Rabbit

Kevin Federline>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lil Brizzle

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Lil Brizzle

HAHAHAHA!!! are u serious??? cuz its kinda funny how u dickride ur gay friend Bunny Rabbit who is WACK AS FUCK and not making any progress in life about how wack i am.....its also funny how u keep calling me wack but not have any reason to back it up....

ok do u want me to tell u specifically why im better than u....

1) ur lyrics fucking suck....they are mad corny and they lack rhymes....

2) ur fucking accent is horrible and everybody noes it....its so fucking hard to understand what ur saying and it makes the song even cornier....not to mention that u rap on corny beats too....

3) ok i noe i need work on this too....but ur flows suck....too many words per line....mine is just bad timing...but urs is just a trainwreck.....

4) my hooks > urs....and dont just judge Feel 'Em Glitz....at least my hook is catchy and recognizable....i can barely recognize ur hook in ur diss tracks (thats if u DO HAVE ONE)....

now instead of attempting on trying to make a good comeback....why cant u just take criticism and stop dickriding ur gay pals? cuz unfortunately for u....Bunny Rabbit is wack as fuck and EVERYBODY NOES IT!!! even my biggest rival on this site says my worst song > anything by him.....

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S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

Braidz

maybe listen to my other shit... like... Doing Me or Nothin To Prove.. then judge me.... coz like i said that beat / rhyme / everything in that diss was rushed as fuck

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"next big things infront of you your witnessing history / if everybody hates then why the fuck they keep listening" - Braidz

Lil Brizzle

and how the heck are u guna judge my ass with just one song? u only said it was wack....u didnt even say HOW it was wack...and i heard Nothin To Prove....same shit as ur diss....u need to AT LEAST mix ur shit and change ur accent....thats the first thing....then u have to work on ur lyrics + flow....plus Bunny Rabbit has actually attempted on recording....believe me the quality is just HORRIBLE....i can up u some of the feed he received for that if i can find it....

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S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

Bunny_Rabbit

Lol @ you saying Im wack; hardly anyone on here has said I was wack. Maybe Protege, Shogun, and Baller have said that, but you can't say that mostly everyone on HHboard.com doesn't think you're wack; look at most of the comments on your threads......lol, most of them trashed the shit. So please, stfu and stop thinking that you're better then me because that song I recorded has lyrics that are above your wack ass china raps.

Try asking that question on here; Who's wacker....me or you. And I bet you'll get some pretty harsh answers. So gtfo my dick and go back to recording your garbage ass rhymes; nobody gives a fuck.

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Lil Brizzle

dude im not from china.....and to be completely honest ur record didnt have the quality to have ur lyrics emphasized....

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S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!