Lil Brizzle

the wait is over...

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Lil Brizzle

uppin this....

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AGENT OO

y the fuck u uppin this for...............


lol...................let it die...............

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Bunny_Rabbit

Lmao; AGENT OO, you should just go ahead and neg the hell out of this dude.

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Lil Brizzle

hey faggot....do u wanna noe something?

1) my worst rival on this site rebel says my worst song > anything uve ever done....therefore u have no right to continously hate on my shit....

2) u notice that everyone on ur side are ppl like braidz and shawndadon aka wack rookies who dunno what hip hop actually is....

3) ur not making any progress with ur hate OR keystyles so why dont u get a move on and grab a mic to record?

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Braidz

dude, aint you from like asia? if so shouldnt you be smart enough to realise that we all better than you



though i do agree on that last point, b.rabbit gotta record n shid.... but then he would just prove you are wrong even more

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Lil Brizzle

wow u are FUCKING STUPID ARENT U???? WOW!!!

hahaha....why am i even responding to a no brainer like u....true ignorance.....do u notice that bunny rabbit has recorded shit right???? and they fucking suck....now why dont u try giving a specific reason to why im wack instead of dickriding ur gay friend....

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Braidz

okay here i go then



are you saying

And Mind Me Cuz Coz My Skill Is Sick? (dont make sense)
or
A'Mind Me Cuz That My Skill Is Sick? (Its Remind, learn english)


LOL I JUST HEARD THE BIT WHERE YOUR LIKE

"im the genuine wapper" dude... wat are you, bugs bunny?

your grand like museums? LOOOL worst line i ever heard... its like
i got green like the grass


thats about it on the lines..



now... your timing... is fuuuuucked. stick to selling copied movies.
you need more words in some bits it might flow it better

your to like DUH-DUH-DUH instead of daaadaaadaaaa if you no what im sayin


you dont emphasise your words properly... they are like rushed n shit sounds like you rushing way too much


you stayed the same flow the whole song, it makes it boring dude... change it up on 2nd verse


and as for the lyrics... alot of them made no sense at all


the emotion is just not there... this sounds like its meant to be a happy "talk myself up" song and you sound like your angry n shit


the intro's and outro's do not feel sincere, feels like you just talking... put emotion into it....


okay now im done


happy?

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Lil Brizzle

first part of ur feed = some stupid joke....read my other post in the audio section to find out more....

and yes i noe my words are not emphasized clearly....but u do hear alot of other rappers who dont emphasize their words clearly as well....and ur clearly no better....my flow changed alot in this song....listen to it again....heres one of the lines "Witness my supremacy blowing up as it sparks through the night".....and this was a laid back track so not much emotion was there although there STILL WAS emotion....as for my lyrics....post the parts of my lyrics where nothing makes sense....and yes i WAS just talking in my intro and outro....i noe the outro sucks but the intro is how the majority of rappers start their song....

btw propz for the feed....but dont come running to me and asking me to quit audio.....cuz thats just pure hate....

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Braidz

man.. i was never hating... im just wondering why you would post a weak track out to promote your up coming tape..

if you post sumtn i like i aint gon be like THIS IS WACK becoz rabbit n shid dont like u

ima give you MY honest opinion, i just felt that the song was not as good as it culd of been

peace

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Lil Brizzle

^^ ok then i respect u....just dont ask me to stick to written and stuff....and instead of just saying wack u couldve suggested me on ways to improve....peace then....

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Braidz

yeah true... i was acting ignorant as fuuuck
but yeah wateva keep improving n shit dude

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ShawnDaDon

i dont now what actual hip hop and ur fav artistis 50 cent get down with the real. lupe,nas,jay,eminem,obie,budden,raekwon someone with actual skill. and dont come at me with go record type shit nigga im workin with real producers in a real sudio nigga u just a weak record at home mc goin nowhere.

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TheRealProtege

quit lying, you sound stupid^

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Bunny_Rabbit

I don't know if I should respect Brizzle or not? He continues to act like he's better then me; little cocky much?

Okay Brizzle, I'll consider not dissing you constantly if you would just take my fucking criticism like a man and not try to start shit; If I say It's ass cheeks, then I think It's ass cheeks. It's just my opinion.

Now shape up your attitude and be a little more mature about things instead of acting as if It's the end of the world just because you're getting bad feed.

Move on and improve your mic skills/delivery/flow/presence on the mic, cuz your lyrics were pretty decent but your flow wasn't that good, and your delivery was pretty horrible; like you have a hard time pronouncing words or some shit. Just keep working at it until you see some improvement.

There, I left feed.

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ShawnDaDon

Im lying please dawg come to houston with you weak ass myspace songs and get ran the fuck out of the H. Nigga im down here grinding trying to make it in rap working with the choppaholics crew. Since u not from texas u wouldnt even know who they are bitch.

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Lil Brizzle

dude its obviously beyond criticism when u call me chink and so on....i didnt say anything when u said it was ass cheeks.....u just took it too far and even PB knew it was hate....u can say im wack but dont make 10 posts about how wack i am....

propz at the last paragraph though....

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Lil Brizzle

who said i was a weak record at home mc goin nowhere??? i actually plan to send my mixtapes to record companies.....and since when was 50 my fav rapper? just cuz i have him in my dp....as for the artists uve mentioned...i basically listen to all of them apart from budden....and add the likes of rakim and big l as well.....show me proof about urself working with real producers then....

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Bunny_Rabbit

Yeah, I did get out of line there with the chink shit; I apologize for that. Just take the criticism people give you and improve what you can, cuz you can get wayyy more skilled when you practice more with the negatives.

Stay up.

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