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Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Melbourne City, Australia
Posts: 320
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heres the audio on this post
check it.. anyways heres the lyrics three I's where you from like ontop of tien's skull my rhymes should be rocks? when did you start being dull? acting like you can win? yeah you, n what army? you cant harm me, bitch ill box u up like you a barbie you were only amusing for one day MAD like the magazine thats all you are a WRITER because your voice is lacking key yeah i dont diss vets, but i will diss a faggot who is wack to me whos verses range from Bad to worse n all the sections thats between i dont diss vets coz theres this thing called respect your respect i neglect ill come thru wrecking your set who the fucks a mad writer? a fag thats tad whiter than an albino skinned vampire who hands out flyers you say youll do that to my mum, youd really touch a dead bitch? now i know the reason they call you mad because your heads sick three eyes in your state name if we put one behind ya we get you a 'virgina' 'period' a 'MAD' writer yeah you something like a servant, coz the schooling system failed you all your intentions of rapping, failed to i couldnt even play you if i had a remote to your music with only a play button couldnt get exposure if you were vanessa A. Hudgens man your my new inspiration, im inspired to not be you even a telescope on the streets could still not see you like id be suprised if you left ya house even at lunchtime like your pic before you changed it learn to do some punchlines everyone now days seem so hard coz you spend ya days watching gay porn, fucking retard first you came after tom then you came after me but you couldnt hit this target point blank crossbowing in archery okay i got a few tips for your next track, first up is maybe rhyme second stay on beat, third give up, realise your lame in lines like it was so hard for me to listen to your entire gay rhyme you just a jay-z wannabe, without an empire state mind |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: The Tangent Universe
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Good shit, Braidz; you might end up being the best Australian emcee I've seen thus far, IMO. You got them multis and wordplay down; you need to work on your flow, though. Cuz when I listen to your audios, I see you're spitting hot lyrics but you don't have that clean flow. Just keep working at it and you'll definitely get better.
But yo, what's up with you and Mad Writer? Why yall beefing?
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Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Melbourne City, Australia
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coz i disagreed with him wanting all the new school to diss the vets n shit
so he wrote somethin against me n yeah this track was rushed as with the audio i just wanted to do something to shut him up haha
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Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: WORLDWIDE
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the barbie line was nice.. diss was pretty good in general too.
get out the body bags. Quote:
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Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Melbourne City, Australia
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yeah rabbit aint heard any bliss n eso or justice n all dem i dont think
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