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Old 10-28-2009, 10:05 AM   #1
 
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LALALA {Mad Writer & Jigger Diss}

heres the audio on this post



check it.. anyways heres the lyrics



three I's where you from like ontop of tien's skull
my rhymes should be rocks? when did you start being dull?
acting like you can win? yeah you, n what army?
you cant harm me, bitch ill box u up like you a barbie

you were only amusing for one day MAD like the magazine
thats all you are a WRITER because your voice is lacking key
yeah i dont diss vets, but i will diss a faggot who is wack to me
whos verses range from Bad to worse n all the sections thats between

i dont diss vets coz theres this thing called respect
your respect i neglect ill come thru wrecking your set
who the fucks a mad writer? a fag thats tad whiter
than an albino skinned vampire who hands out flyers

you say youll do that to my mum, youd really touch a dead bitch?
now i know the reason they call you mad because your heads sick
three eyes in your state name if we put one behind ya
we get you a 'virgina' 'period' a 'MAD' writer









yeah you something like a servant, coz the schooling system failed you
all your intentions of rapping, failed to i couldnt even play you
if i had a remote to your music with only a play button
couldnt get exposure if you were vanessa A. Hudgens

man your my new inspiration, im inspired to not be you
even a telescope on the streets could still not see you
like id be suprised if you left ya house even at lunchtime
like your pic before you changed it learn to do some punchlines

everyone now days seem so hard
coz you spend ya days watching gay porn, fucking retard
first you came after tom then you came after me
but you couldnt hit this target point blank crossbowing in archery

okay i got a few tips for your next track, first up is maybe rhyme
second stay on beat, third give up, realise your lame in lines
like it was so hard for me to listen to your entire gay rhyme
you just a jay-z wannabe, without an empire state mind
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Old 10-28-2009, 09:44 PM   #2
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Good shit, Braidz; you might end up being the best Australian emcee I've seen thus far, IMO. You got them multis and wordplay down; you need to work on your flow, though. Cuz when I listen to your audios, I see you're spitting hot lyrics but you don't have that clean flow. Just keep working at it and you'll definitely get better.

But yo, what's up with you and Mad Writer? Why yall beefing?
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Old 10-29-2009, 03:21 AM   #3
 
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coz i disagreed with him wanting all the new school to diss the vets n shit

so he wrote somethin against me


n yeah this track was rushed as with the audio i just wanted to do something to shut him up haha
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Old 11-01-2009, 08:14 PM   #4
 
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the barbie line was nice.. diss was pretty good in general too.

get out the body bags.

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you might end up being the best Australian emcee I've seen thus far
you should holla and ill give you a bunch of names i roll with, if you want dope australian artists.. we have a whole bunch ranging from battlers to people that make exceptionally good music.
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yeah rabbit aint heard any bliss n eso or justice n all dem i dont think
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