Stranded in Hell

Pillow · 10-23-2009, 08:00 AM

My mind used ta be my sanctuary but you should seen wat i envisioned,
I'm stranded in hell i might as well give up like i'm livin imprisoned.
These evil motives take control demons corruptin my thoughts,
Its sickenin how they listen then destroy wat i sought.
I feel like a coward in the towers the mornin of nine eleven
Satan tells me where would hell be if it wasnt placed before heaven?
I'm being held back so i fell back then i tried to break free,
but there's no returns so i burn like i'm payin a lat fee!
Chains around my hips i'm bein whipped an startin ta cry,
wipe the tears on my sleeves i wanna leave or just die!
I dont give a fuck i wanna give up i feel this fight is done lost,
I'm not God's son theres no reason for me ta bear Christs cross!
Suddenly i see clearly like God himself could hear me,
I listen as he speaks and says theres no need ta fear me.
I tell him i'm stranded in hell an I've paid for my crimes,
He sets me free now can you see? its just a day in my mind

ShawnDaDon · 10-23-2009, 08:06 AM

i think this one is better
it also seems you have a dark concept on most of ur drops
which is cool son kep droppin
u said u didnt see many multies but there was none or very few in this one

Pillow · 10-23-2009, 08:06 AM

btw i'd like ta use this as my SFR thing as a topical piece if thats possible
Edit:
yeah i focused more on te inner rhymes on this one but i wrote it about a year ago...i'll drop moreof a happier type thing in a sec if ya want lol

10-23-2009, 08:00 AM	#1
Pillow Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: a place Posts: 28 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Stranded in Hell Stranded in Hell My mind used ta be my sanctuary but you should seen wat i envisioned, I'm stranded in hell i might as well give up like i'm livin imprisoned. These evil motives take control demons corruptin my thoughts, Its sickenin how they listen then destroy wat i sought. I feel like a coward in the towers the mornin of nine eleven Satan tells me where would hell be if it wasnt placed before heaven? I'm being held back so i fell back then i tried to break free, but there's no returns so i burn like i'm payin a lat fee! Chains around my hips i'm bein whipped an startin ta cry, wipe the tears on my sleeves i wanna leave or just die! I dont give a fuck i wanna give up i feel this fight is done lost, I'm not God's son theres no reason for me ta bear Christs cross! Suddenly i see clearly like God himself could hear me, I listen as he speaks and says theres no need ta fear me. I tell him i'm stranded in hell an I've paid for my crimes, He sets me free now can you see? its just a day in my mind __________________ Dont sleep on me

10-23-2009, 08:06 AM	#2
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	i think this one is better it also seems you have a dark concept on most of ur drops which is cool son kep droppin u said u didnt see many multies but there was none or very few in this one __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

10-23-2009, 08:06 AM	#3
Pillow Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: a place Posts: 28 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	btw i'd like ta use this as my SFR thing as a topical piece if thats possible Edit: yeah i focused more on te inner rhymes on this one but i wrote it about a year ago...i'll drop moreof a happier type thing in a sec if ya want lol __________________ Dont sleep on me

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