Frank The Rabbit- You Ain't Fuckin' With Me

Bunny_Rabbit · 10-17-2009, 04:01 AM

Drop some feed :)

You couldn't 'drop a verse' if ya 'threw a bible'//
Im 'dressed to kill' so everytime I look in a mirror, it's 'suicidal'//
a cum shot to your eye'll leave ya sloppy vision blurred//
for refusin' to see dopeness, you cocky listener//
my shit is ill/ sayin' I won't get a deal//
but Im a 'blow up' behind these 'bars' like a 'kamikaze prisoner'//
claim a spot in rap, you'll get popped, bitch//
like 'Jim' from '28 Days Later' you the only cat that's 'not sick'//
I think I just demolished rap/ my lyrical power killed it//
the fly bitches 'love' my 'craft' like 'Howard Phillips'//
fuck your crew/ I'll have the rest of ya tremblin' quick//
this 'coyote' will 'snatch ya dogs' on some Jessica Simpson shit//

Desire · 10-17-2009, 11:16 AM

yo great drop. i loved the first 2 bars. your wordplay was great and so was your nameplay. flow was good. creativity was there. overall good drop. keep it up fam

you mind droppin' feed on mine?

Bunny_Rabbit · 10-18-2009, 05:19 AM

Thanks for the feedback; I read your drop and I thought it was pretty good, man.

Bump

10-17-2009, 04:01 AM	#1
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 885 Repped: 44 Repped 117 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	Frank The Rabbit- You Ain't Fuckin' With Me Frank The Rabbit- You Ain't Fuckin' With Me Drop some feed :) You couldn't 'drop a verse' if ya 'threw a bible'// Im 'dressed to kill' so everytime I look in a mirror, it's 'suicidal'// a cum shot to your eye'll leave ya sloppy vision blurred// for refusin' to see dopeness, you cocky listener// my shit is ill/ sayin' I won't get a deal// but Im a 'blow up' behind these 'bars' like a 'kamikaze prisoner'// claim a spot in rap, you'll get popped, bitch// like 'Jim' from '28 Days Later' you the only cat that's 'not sick'// I think I just demolished rap/ my lyrical power killed it// the fly bitches 'love' my 'craft' like 'Howard Phillips'// fuck your crew/ I'll have the rest of ya tremblin' quick// this 'coyote' will 'snatch ya dogs' on some Jessica Simpson shit// __________________ Last edited by Bunny_Rabbit; 10-17-2009 at 04:18 AM.

10-18-2009, 05:19 AM	#3
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 885 Repped: 44 Repped 117 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	Thanks for the feedback; I read your drop and I thought it was pretty good, man. Bump __________________

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10-17-2009, 11:16 AM	#2
Desire Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: BX Posts: 11 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yo great drop. i loved the first 2 bars. your wordplay was great and so was your nameplay. flow was good. creativity was there. overall good drop. keep it up fam you mind droppin' feed on mine?