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Old 10-16-2009, 10:16 PM   #1
 
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love...venting

aight i just keystyled this in like 5-10 minutes, mite be weak shit but w/e leave some feed

i need to pour our my emotions, so ima do what they call venting/
im giving her my heart im not just lending/
becuz she already has it and i dont want it back ever/
my love will always be with this girl...forever/
never in my life have i felt this way about a girl before/
i usually just fucked around with some stupid whores/
now i realize all i want is her love, i dont need sex/
being with her will make me happy...fuck the rest/
only if she knew how i felt...wat would she say?/
would she get weirded out and ignore me startin today?/
i hope not cuz that'd break my heart/
well its already broken cuz i know she dont like me like i like her, but it'll tear me apart/
it'd make my heart go from being in half to shattered in pieces/
it'll leave me speechless, yet i'd be screaming, DAMN I DONT NEED THIS!/
but i do need you/
your the only person my heart responds to/
so without being able to talk to you it'll have me feeling like ima die inside/
my feelings for you are to strong...these emotions i cant hide/
cuz you got me crazy in love...always making me laugh and smile/
ur like a gift from above...and i love your style/
i wish we could be together...beautiful young lady/
i love you...ur amazing...yet yu got me thinkin' all crazy/





yea like i said it was like a 5-10 minute keystyle i did on my blackberry, leave some feed if you dont mind
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Old 10-17-2009, 02:01 AM   #2
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hmm.... looks like yo bitch dumped you

but it was alright.. some parts where off but still decent freestyle fucker introduce yoself
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Old 10-17-2009, 11:10 AM   #3
 
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thanks man. appreciate it.
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Old 10-17-2009, 12:54 PM   #4
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prolly only LOVE drop ive ever seen on here.. cuz 99% of the board has never had REAL pussy -_-
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Old 10-17-2009, 06:13 PM   #5
 
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prolly only LOVE drop ive ever seen on here.. cuz 99% of the board has never had REAL pussy -_-


I'm sure that 99% includes you shitface.
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Old 10-17-2009, 06:34 PM   #6
 
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prolly only LOVE drop ive ever seen on here.. cuz 99% of the board has never had REAL pussy -_-
lol yea im goin through some shit with this girl right now so i wanted to vent. but yea im guessin what you said was a good thing about me? lol


but can yall leave feed if you dont mind?
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Old 10-17-2009, 08:20 PM   #7
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Eh...It Was A Decent Drop....Good Emotion...


it'd make my heart go from being in half to shattered in pieces/
it'll leave me speechless, yet i'd be screaming, DAMN I DONT NEED THIS!/
but i do need you/
your the only person my heart responds to/


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Old 10-17-2009, 09:09 PM   #8
 
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dope drop holmes like it a lot
yo chk my shit straight rippin and im done fucking playin
oh i def felt the emotion in this
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Old 10-17-2009, 11:00 PM   #9
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Shit was dope fam... ima have to cosign Protege .. even though hes homosexual..
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Old 10-17-2009, 11:43 PM   #10
 
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thanks a lot. appreciate the feedback . im new to the texting shit but idk why im only good at writing about love shit and wen i attempt another subject it comes out trash. im guessin its because ive been through a lot with girl problems. i can be a sucker for love at times lmao. so yall can expect me to write a couple more keystyles about love. hope yall aint imature and start sayinh im gay or some shit for speakin how i feel and shit lol
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