Dinner Time

DXavier23 · 10-15-2009, 05:32 PM

Yellow tape surrounds it, a mellow tape of sounds that, resemble Marshall Mathers, let me lather the beat
My hell is draped in shadows, these shells, the greatest ammo, to tremble the cowards till they fall to their feet
I rebel from ancient pharos, its hell Im raising now so, bring an end to your power, get ready for defeat
When I come around B, the ground will shake profoundly, I stay in the shallow, but can swim where its deep
Your flow is garbage, but me I go the hardest, they starving for an artist,, to prepare an epic feast
What will slow your heart is, that I came the farthest, but still I acknowledge my best, has yet to be released
I go to college, on banks loans, deposits, even sold my Honda, revelation, that education isn't cheap
Im calling all the martyrs to rebel against the charters, no trepidation or hesitation, wont erase or delete.
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TheRealProtege · 10-15-2009, 05:35 PM

wtf is this?

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-17-2009, 11:03 PM

Why you post it like this...

But ima have to say this kinda Ill...

FacilDinero · 10-17-2009, 11:36 PM

Woah....Lines Are TOOOOO Long....Im Likin That Yu Have Mad Multies In Them But Who Cant Do That With A Line Thats The Length Of A Whole Bar?....Shorten Them Lines Lol....But Other Than That Good Drop

DXavier23 · 10-17-2009, 11:52 PM

Have you heard Dinner Time by Royce & Busta? -- thats what I was going for - i was experimenting with the flow royce used (similar prolonged syllable count and syntax)..

I didnt mean to make this a thread- i thought i had posted it in the Drop A Freestyle thread. Im glad you liked it PB tho - means alot..

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-18-2009, 12:05 AM

Word lets get that collabo in

FacilDinero · 10-18-2009, 03:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DXavier23

Have you heard Dinner Time by Royce & Busta? -- thats what I was going for - i was experimenting with the flow royce used (similar prolonged syllable count and syntax)..

I didnt mean to make this a thread- i thought i had posted it in the Drop A Freestyle thread. Im glad you liked it PB tho - means alot..

Ohhhhhh Shiiiit....Lol....I Just Rapped Your Shiit In My Head With The Flow Royce Used....Now I Get It Lol....Dope Shiit....See This Is Why Yu Need To Stop With The Text And Do Audio

10-15-2009, 05:32 PM	#1
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	Dinner Time Dinner Time Yellow tape surrounds it, a mellow tape of sounds that, resemble Marshall Mathers, let me lather the beat My hell is draped in shadows, these shells, the greatest ammo, to tremble the cowards till they fall to their feet I rebel from ancient pharos, its hell Im raising now so, bring an end to your power, get ready for defeat When I come around B, the ground will shake profoundly, I stay in the shallow, but can swim where its deep Your flow is garbage, but me I go the hardest, they starving for an artist,, to prepare an epic feast What will slow your heart is, that I came the farthest, but still I acknowledge my best, has yet to be released I go to college, on banks loans, deposits, even sold my Honda, revelation, that education isn't cheap Im calling all the martyrs to rebel against the charters, no trepidation or hesitation, wont erase or delete. __________________ __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in Last edited by DXavier23; 10-15-2009 at 05:40 PM.

10-15-2009, 05:35 PM	#2
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	wtf is this? __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

10-17-2009, 11:03 PM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,901 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Why you post it like this... But ima have to say this kinda Ill... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

10-17-2009, 11:36 PM	#4
FacilDinero EasyMoney™ Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Queens Posts: 3,928 Repped: 960 Repped 744 Times in 453 Posts Neg Reps: 260 Neg Repped at 230 Times in 157 Posts	Woah....Lines Are TOOOOO Long....Im Likin That Yu Have Mad Multies In Them But Who Cant Do That With A Line Thats The Length Of A Whole Bar?....Shorten Them Lines Lol....But Other Than That Good Drop __________________ Hawks: 11-2

10-17-2009, 11:52 PM	#5
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	Have you heard Dinner Time by Royce & Busta? -- thats what I was going for - i was experimenting with the flow royce used (similar prolonged syllable count and syntax).. I didnt mean to make this a thread- i thought i had posted it in the Drop A Freestyle thread. Im glad you liked it PB tho - means alot.. __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-18-2009, 12:05 AM	#6
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,901 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Word lets get that collabo in __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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