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Old 10-15-2009, 05:32 PM   #1
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Dinner Time

Yellow tape surrounds it, a mellow tape of sounds that, resemble Marshall Mathers, let me lather the beat
My hell is draped in shadows, these shells, the greatest ammo, to tremble the cowards till they fall to their feet
I rebel from ancient pharos, its hell Im raising now so, bring an end to your power, get ready for defeat
When I come around B, the ground will shake profoundly, I stay in the shallow, but can swim where its deep
Your flow is garbage, but me I go the hardest, they starving for an artist,, to prepare an epic feast
What will slow your heart is, that I came the farthest, but still I acknowledge my best, has yet to be released
I go to college, on banks loans, deposits, even sold my Honda, revelation, that education isn't cheap
Im calling all the martyrs to rebel against the charters, no trepidation or hesitation, wont erase or delete.
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Old 10-15-2009, 05:35 PM   #2
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wtf is this?
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Old 10-17-2009, 11:03 PM   #3
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Why you post it like this...

But ima have to say this kinda Ill...
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Woah....Lines Are TOOOOO Long....Im Likin That Yu Have Mad Multies In Them But Who Cant Do That With A Line Thats The Length Of A Whole Bar?....Shorten Them Lines Lol....But Other Than That Good Drop
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Old 10-17-2009, 11:52 PM   #5
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Have you heard Dinner Time by Royce & Busta? -- thats what I was going for - i was experimenting with the flow royce used (similar prolonged syllable count and syntax)..

I didnt mean to make this a thread- i thought i had posted it in the Drop A Freestyle thread. Im glad you liked it PB tho - means alot..
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Old 10-18-2009, 12:05 AM   #6
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Word lets get that collabo in
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Have you heard Dinner Time by Royce & Busta? -- thats what I was going for - i was experimenting with the flow royce used (similar prolonged syllable count and syntax)..

I didnt mean to make this a thread- i thought i had posted it in the Drop A Freestyle thread. Im glad you liked it PB tho - means alot..
Ohhhhhh Shiiiit....Lol....I Just Rapped Your Shiit In My Head With The Flow Royce Used....Now I Get It Lol....Dope Shiit....See This Is Why Yu Need To Stop With The Text And Do Audio
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