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Old 10-14-2009, 06:50 PM   #1
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Default Name Unknown - If You Dont Know ME

Name Unknown - If You Dont Know ME

look in my eyes you can tell nothing can phase me,
I dont really care if you love me or hate me,
read my thoughts and you can dub me as crazy,
all i have to know is that its something that made me,
I can write for days and not accomplish a thing,
because ill wake up and realize it was all just a dream,
I write to make others feel the power of my emotion,
ill catch their attention on how i approach them,
Thats why I start out like im nice than rape the mic,
like a sick pedophile, but really id never take a life,
but when i make it right ill give u something you like,
Id be disappointed if I wrote and gave you nothing to bite,
steal my words, it just means someone likes me,
and if i had no critics id feel like no one writes me,
and i prepare for everything that i might see,
but ull always leave a mark if u try to bite me,
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Old 10-15-2009, 09:49 AM   #2
 
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dope im feeling this for real


these are the dopest lines


Thats why I start out like im nice than rape the mic,
like a sick pedophile, but really id never take a life,
but when i make it right ill give u something you like,
Id be disappointed if I wrote and gave you nothing to bite,
steal my words, it just means someone likes me,
and if i had no critics id feel like no one writes me,
and i prepare for everything that i might see,
but ull always leave a mark if u try to bite me,


props homie
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Old 10-15-2009, 01:52 PM   #3
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Its aight, you should try using multis more tho

And yo why u always write "name unknown" in front of u lyrics names?
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Old 10-15-2009, 10:25 PM   #4
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Its aight, you should try using multis more tho

And yo why u always write "name unknown" in front of u lyrics names?
because i dont really have a rap name ... nor do i really care i just put that as a filler kinda. i just like to put what i write. Something i enjoy
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Old 10-15-2009, 10:29 PM   #5
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dope im feeling this for real


these are the dopest lines


Thats why I start out like im nice than rape the mic,
like a sick pedophile, but really id never take a life,
but when i make it right ill give u something you like,
Id be disappointed if I wrote and gave you nothing to bite,
steal my words, it just means someone likes me,
and if i had no critics id feel like no one writes me,
and i prepare for everything that i might see,
but ull always leave a mark if u try to bite me,


props homie
good lookin on the props, but I saw u missed the clever line right before that where i said "ill catch their attention on how i approach them," something like when a sick perv tries to be all nice at first and than rape them
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Old 10-27-2009, 11:43 AM   #6
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ok......umm. since you do it for fun.
pretty good...but itll be funner if you put more into it.
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Old 10-27-2009, 03:14 PM   #7
 
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i liked the flow and rhymes you used
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