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Rorshak
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: The Tangent Universe
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Here's a song I wrote over Secrets by Joe Budden; pretty dark song, IMO. I wrote this a while back, and It's sorta based off a dream I had. This verse is pretty long; just take the time and read it, please. Let me know what you think:
Im walkin' down a dark hallway of my imagination//
this darkness was real/ there was no fabrication// It's like I blacked out and ended up in here without reason// I heard a noise, so I quietly started creepin'// my heart was beatin' fast, so I ran in a room// and locked the door/ I had to understand I was doomed// that nobody was there to even hear me or find me// but then I focused on the walls which clearly where slimey// I then noticed I was in a room that looked prehistoric// seen a man in a trenchcoat with a face that seemed distorted// I stood there in shock as he was lookin' in the mirror// he didn't pay me no mind, but the fiend was morbid// he then made a noise where it sounded like he hyperventilated// then I heard a loud siren as the walls disintegrated// the man turned around and the mirror shattered to bits// he just stared at me as the room gathered a mist// I then found myself lookin' at my own reflection// the inner complexion of the man showed me my own deception// I was trickin' myself into believin' this was fake// but it was real/ this nightmare made me realize I was awake// and that I was plagued by the evil before me// the man slowly moved closer and closer towards me// I then ran out of the room before he could catch me// everything was pitch black/ I woke up in a backseat// well, now I realize I've ended up in an abandoned car// in a deserted area/ seen a stranger wasn't standin' far// my instincts told me to get out and ask for help// but somethin' didn't seem right/ I'd be walkin' down a path to hell// I tried lookin' for the car keys, but I couldn't find 'em nowhere// a mist started to come in, and I was feelin' so scared// noticed the stranger was still standin' without question// I scrambled for the keys to the point where I was now stressin'// I then see the stranger walk right in my direction// his eyes started to glow/ he might just have a weapon// he stopped right in front of me/ his face was dry rotted// the stranger was very quiet but he seemed psychotic// I felt paralyzed by his sight/ it was blindin' my optics// he stood there for a moment and pointed to my pocket// I found the keys/ ran in the car without hesitation// started it up, and then drove off to my destination// I was drivin' down the highway as fast as I could// thinking about the sins I commited/ It wasn't lookin' good// suddenly, I heard the awful sounds of a woman screamin'// looked in the rear-view mirror and seen the image of a demon// the woman shouted my name/ I realized she was my mother// at that exact moment, I just couldn't believe it// the brakes wouldn't work, so I couldn't stop for shit// closed my eyes as the car drove off a bridge// I then realized I was drownin' in the evil that plagued me// to do the things I did/ which made me deceitful and crazy// and my mother was a victim of the sins I commited// so then I prayed to God and asked to be forgiven// Then I woke up
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