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Default Rorschak- Macabre Reality

Rorschak- Macabre Reality

Here's a song I wrote over Secrets by Joe Budden; pretty dark song, IMO. I wrote this a while back, and It's sorta based off a dream I had. This verse is pretty long; just take the time and read it, please. Let me know what you think:

Im walkin' down a dark hallway of my imagination//
this darkness was real/ there was no fabrication//
It's like I blacked out and ended up in here without reason//
I heard a noise, so I quietly started creepin'//
my heart was beatin' fast, so I ran in a room//
and locked the door/ I had to understand I was doomed//
that nobody was there to even hear me or find me//
but then I focused on the walls which clearly where slimey//
I then noticed I was in a room that looked prehistoric//
seen a man in a trenchcoat with a face that seemed distorted//
I stood there in shock as he was lookin' in the mirror//
he didn't pay me no mind, but the fiend was morbid//
he then made a noise where it sounded like he hyperventilated//
then I heard a loud siren as the walls disintegrated//
the man turned around and the mirror shattered to bits//
he just stared at me as the room gathered a mist//
I then found myself lookin' at my own reflection//
the inner complexion of the man showed me my own deception//
I was trickin' myself into believin' this was fake//
but it was real/ this nightmare made me realize I was awake//
and that I was plagued by the evil before me//
the man slowly moved closer and closer towards me//
I then ran out of the room before he could catch me//
everything was pitch black/ I woke up in a backseat//
well, now I realize I've ended up in an abandoned car//
in a deserted area/ seen a stranger wasn't standin' far//
my instincts told me to get out and ask for help//
but somethin' didn't seem right/ I'd be walkin' down a path to hell//
I tried lookin' for the car keys, but I couldn't find 'em nowhere//
a mist started to come in, and I was feelin' so scared//
noticed the stranger was still standin' without question//
I scrambled for the keys to the point where I was now stressin'//
I then see the stranger walk right in my direction//
his eyes started to glow/ he might just have a weapon//
he stopped right in front of me/ his face was dry rotted//
the stranger was very quiet but he seemed psychotic//
I felt paralyzed by his sight/ it was blindin' my optics//
he stood there for a moment and pointed to my pocket//
I found the keys/ ran in the car without hesitation//
started it up, and then drove off to my destination//
I was drivin' down the highway as fast as I could//
thinking about the sins I commited/ It wasn't lookin' good//
suddenly, I heard the awful sounds of a woman screamin'//
looked in the rear-view mirror and seen the image of a demon//
the woman shouted my name/ I realized she was my mother//
at that exact moment, I just couldn't believe it//
the brakes wouldn't work, so I couldn't stop for shit//
closed my eyes as the car drove off a bridge//
I then realized I was drownin' in the evil that plagued me//
to do the things I did/ which made me deceitful and crazy//
and my mother was a victim of the sins I commited//
so then I prayed to God and asked to be forgiven//




























































































































































































































































Then I woke up
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