Sometimes

Baller · 10-12-2009, 01:26 AM

Sometimes I wanna write verses
But sometimes I aint motivated, Cuz all people do is overrate it
Sometimes I can’t find what the right word is
Plus the flow is basic, I feel people are supposed to hate it
Years of repetitive negative thoughts
No prescription, I need some medicine doc
Sometimes I… wanna down a bottle
And It’s been a path I’ve been bound to follow
So I… Tilt it upside down and swallow
Look, see a hundred of em around me hollow
Think, fuck it, I can stop when I want to
Then remember this kind of thinking can haunt you
Considered an underdog, and wonder the reason
Feel I can do nothing wrong, but I’m under achieving
Confusion, I want seclusion, I’ve lost track of goals
Surrounded by a pack of wolves
And everything else around me feels unnatural
Damn, I wish everything would go back to old
Where lacking soul was irrational
I hate their actions so I sit back and pack a bowl
People are far from what they pretend to be
I have a few tendencies which caused a few enemies
And I… feel like no ones defending me
Too much dependency when I want no one to depend in me
Just remembered I needed a cigarette
Not sure if this, the liquor, or stress is a bigger threat
Sometimes I think of reasons why I’m here
And if there’s chances of redeeming my career
Sometimes I think I think too much
And give two fucks about these rap dudes who suck

Braidz · 10-12-2009, 01:47 AM

that was tight.... everyone needs to start dropping hell of a lot more

Bunny_Rabbit · 10-12-2009, 02:12 AM

You bit from Sidetracked

Braidz · 10-12-2009, 02:44 AM

seriously everyone needs to stop saying who bit what from who.... truth is... everyone bites in one way or the other. you no basically any punchline you spit wuld have been spat before by someone round the world at sumtime... so basically everyone bites

Baller · 10-12-2009, 03:14 AM

Wrote over the beat...stfu

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-12-2009, 11:14 AM

I could tell this was over the Sidetracked beat..

it was dope.. good flow and multies.. nothing amazing but better than most shit i see..

ThA ViiRu5 · 10-12-2009, 01:43 PM

^^ lawl before i read the rest of this hilarious thread i too thought of Sidetracked, and then i thought if u werent writin to that beat you still sounded like you had a Budden flow goin on..in any event, it was cool. I liked it.

Komplex · 10-13-2009, 01:16 PM

Sometimes I… wanna down a bottle
And It’s been a path I’ve been bound to follow
So I… Tilt it upside down and swallow
Look, see a hundred of em around me hollow

And I… feel like no ones defending me
Too much dependency when I want no one to depend in me
Just remembered I needed a cigarette
Not sure if this, the liquor, or stress is a bigger threat

Nice balance of flow and coherent content in this piece. Solid joint, stay up.

Baller · 10-15-2009, 02:02 AM

good looks....

10-12-2009, 01:26 AM	#1
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,087 Repped: 109 Repped 241 Times in 144 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	Sometimes Sometimes Sometimes I wanna write verses But sometimes I aint motivated, Cuz all people do is overrate it Sometimes I can’t find what the right word is Plus the flow is basic, I feel people are supposed to hate it Years of repetitive negative thoughts No prescription, I need some medicine doc Sometimes I… wanna down a bottle And It’s been a path I’ve been bound to follow So I… Tilt it upside down and swallow Look, see a hundred of em around me hollow Think, fuck it, I can stop when I want to Then remember this kind of thinking can haunt you Considered an underdog, and wonder the reason Feel I can do nothing wrong, but I’m under achieving Confusion, I want seclusion, I’ve lost track of goals Surrounded by a pack of wolves And everything else around me feels unnatural Damn, I wish everything would go back to old Where lacking soul was irrational I hate their actions so I sit back and pack a bowl People are far from what they pretend to be I have a few tendencies which caused a few enemies And I… feel like no ones defending me Too much dependency when I want no one to depend in me Just remembered I needed a cigarette Not sure if this, the liquor, or stress is a bigger threat Sometimes I think of reasons why I’m here And if there’s chances of redeeming my career Sometimes I think I think too much And give two fucks about these rap dudes who suck __________________

10-12-2009, 02:12 AM	#3
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 117 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	You bit from Sidetracked __________________

10-12-2009, 03:14 AM	#5
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,087 Repped: 109 Repped 241 Times in 144 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	Wrote over the beat...stfu __________________

10-12-2009, 11:14 AM	#6
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	I could tell this was over the Sidetracked beat.. it was dope.. good flow and multies.. nothing amazing but better than most shit i see.. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

10-12-2009, 01:43 PM	#7
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ lawl before i read the rest of this hilarious thread i too thought of Sidetracked, and then i thought if u werent writin to that beat you still sounded like you had a Budden flow goin on..in any event, it was cool. I liked it. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

10-12-2009, 01:47 AM	#2
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 321 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	that was tight.... everyone needs to start dropping hell of a lot more

10-12-2009, 02:44 AM	#4
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 321 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	seriously everyone needs to stop saying who bit what from who.... truth is... everyone bites in one way or the other. you no basically any punchline you spit wuld have been spat before by someone round the world at sumtime... so basically everyone bites

10-13-2009, 01:16 PM	#8
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Sometimes I… wanna down a bottle And It’s been a path I’ve been bound to follow So I… Tilt it upside down and swallow Look, see a hundred of em around me hollow And I… feel like no ones defending me Too much dependency when I want no one to depend in me Just remembered I needed a cigarette Not sure if this, the liquor, or stress is a bigger threat Nice balance of flow and coherent content in this piece. Solid joint, stay up. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

10-15-2009, 02:02 AM	#9
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,087 Repped: 109 Repped 241 Times in 144 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	good looks.... __________________

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