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Old 10-11-2009, 03:19 AM   #1
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Something I wrote a long time back; drop some feed, please.

Wanna act like 'Quentin Tarentino', I'll sever your squad//
put 'em in a 'artificial lake' then they'll be 'Reservoir Dogs'//
I'm calm and witty to bomb your city with verses//
till your committee is worthless cuz I'm sickly berserk, kid//
so murder me soon for you get sent to the emergency room//
or wrapped up in gauze inside a burgendy tomb//
I'll have your urgency doomed when I destroy your existence//
and annoy your persistence cuz this boy is consistent//
cuz my accusation is to throw blows and crack jaws//
and buy carats that are frozen like the nose of Jack Frost//
my attitude's cruel and malicious while I'm schoolin' ya bitches//
on the proper method of spittin' while you drool for the riches//
I'm cool and prestigious cuz I hardly lack verses//
I'll snatch your heart out professionally like Cardiac Surgeons//
with ill actions, hell's where this kid is sendin' soldiers//
my shit'll 'drive you insane' like 'schizophrenic chauffeurs'//
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Old 10-11-2009, 04:10 AM   #2
 
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Wanna act like 'Quentin Tarentino', I'll sever your squad//
put 'em in a 'artificial lake' then they'll be 'Reservoir Dogs'//
I'm calm and witty to bomb your city with verses//
till your committee is worthless cuz I'm sickly berserk, kid//


THATS FUCKING CRAZY

with ill actions, hell's where this kid is sendin' soldiers//
my shit'll 'drive you insane' like 'schizophrenic chauffeurs'//

i like the end line... coulda made the one before it a little stronger



anyways... drop me feed on my new text drop




also check out my new track n tell me what ya think

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