i dont really no what i call this.. tryna make it complex n shid FEED!

Braidz · 10-11-2009, 02:26 AM

i remember this girl asked who am i "I'm braidz girl I thought ya knew me"
pretended to be a 'family guy' till i was getting more head than 'stewie'
the promoters ran me by now im getting more 'dates' than 'roofies'
im getting more bread than you is "but your forehead look stupid"

thats what they telling me so i point them in the right direction like cupid
on mic im bestest to do this got more investments than movies
'hot since 97','105's' my win percentage, ima shining intelectual
when my rhymes come hit the records, im leaving you 'clue less'

like i walked on stage and 'smacked ye' i knocked these white sunglasses off
whateva, call me a dick im something that can go hard or soft
see just coz your in a gang does not make you gangsta bruh
to prove my point look how many net gangs there are

i cant be beat like an Artificial Intelegent Allen Iverson
the rap game needs 'AIDS' but cuts you off like it 'Hates IVy xon / H.I.V son'
once you notice im better than you possibly in e-ver-y way
proves its true "YOU learn something new every day"

still more to come

didnt feel 2 lines in there... but that last 8 were keystyled

Bunny_Rabbit · 10-11-2009, 05:03 AM

matter fact im bigger than 'family guy' getting more head than 'stewie'
the promoters ran me by now im getting more 'dates' than 'roofies'

^^^Lol, those were pretty good. Anyway, I thought this was pretty nice; your wordplay's getting better and I like your multi's.

Stay up homie.

Braidz · 10-11-2009, 12:35 PM

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10-11-2009, 02:26 AM	#1
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 324 Repped: 13 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	i dont really no what i call this.. tryna make it complex n shid FEED! i dont really no what i call this.. tryna make it complex n shid FEED! i remember this girl asked who am i "I'm braidz girl I thought ya knew me" pretended to be a 'family guy' till i was getting more head than 'stewie' the promoters ran me by now im getting more 'dates' than 'roofies' im getting more bread than you is "but your forehead look stupid" thats what they telling me so i point them in the right direction like cupid on mic im bestest to do this got more investments than movies 'hot since 97','105's' my win percentage, ima shining intelectual when my rhymes come hit the records, im leaving you 'clue less' like i walked on stage and 'smacked ye' i knocked these white sunglasses off whateva, call me a dick im something that can go hard or soft see just coz your in a gang does not make you gangsta bruh to prove my point look how many net gangs there are i cant be beat like an Artificial Intelegent Allen Iverson the rap game needs 'AIDS' but cuts you off like it 'Hates IVy xon / H.I.V son' once you notice im better than you possibly in e-ver-y way proves its true "YOU learn something new every day" still more to come didnt feel 2 lines in there... but that last 8 were keystyled Last edited by Braidz; 10-11-2009 at 12:34 PM.

10-11-2009, 05:03 AM	#2
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 118 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	matter fact im bigger than 'family guy' getting more head than 'stewie' the promoters ran me by now im getting more 'dates' than 'roofies' ^^^Lol, those were pretty good. Anyway, I thought this was pretty nice; your wordplay's getting better and I like your multi's. Stay up homie. __________________

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10-11-2009, 12:35 PM	#3
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 324 Repped: 13 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	updated BUMP