On Top Of The World REMIX

Braidz · 10-09-2009, 01:52 AM

if you feeling like me you feel good
feeling on top of the world
on top of a girl
non stop with the pearls
gon rock with the planet
on lock and unstandard
apocalypse damaged
im not just gunna stand here
and let these other rappers take my shine
feeling 10 out of 10 becoz this world is mine
you betta get in line becoz the world is mine
yeah you betta get in line, the world is mine

this here is my deepest darkest secretive plans a
introduction to this species at hand my
speakers in hand reefers leaking in stand of
making hip hop a fan of my shit creeping the land of

australia, through the deserts of this dust n dirt
but my shits so dope its gotta go thru customs first
these rappers get 'pissed on / piston' like they 'fast n they furious'
your 'flow' cant harm me like im two halves 'impervious'

melbourne microphone murderers i know that you heard of us
living proof that not all smarts are part nerdiness
saying we wack, GET BACK, theres alot more thats worse than us
like 'beef' itll cost 'lives' if you wanna purchase us

im just on top of the world like the stratosphere
that young up n comer new spitter in rap they fear
taking the globe by 'storm', 'the day after tomorrow'
and though im 'full' of it i stay blasting tha 'hollow'

if you feeling like me you feel good
feeling on top of the world
on top of a girl
non stop with the pearls
gon rock with the planet
on lock and unstandard
apocalypse damaged
im not just gunna stand here
and let these other rappers take my shine
feeling 10 out of 10 becoz this world is mine
you betta get in line becoz the world is mine
yeah you betta get in line, the world is mine

they say what goes up must come down but i stay atop of the clouds
rocking the crowds punches knocking em out dropping these clowns
what goes up must come down its called condensation bitches
only time you can speak big is when conversating bitches

these contemplating listeners they wanna hear that good drop
so one punch to down gods at least until they get hooked on
my drops, classic like hi-tops and nike shops
but bringing something new like saigon and iced rocks

i must not have a father coz its impossible to son me
got this shit locked down and the constables just shun me
coz they sleep on me like insomnia medication
killing any rapper when i get on ya collaboration

the voice they hear across a nation the doctor to this dying patient
dont let the game lie in cases my name will rise to the ocassion
coz they all killing rap, wheras im killing raps
my soul is unbreakable so why dont you try killing that!?

if you feeling like me you feel good
feeling on top of the world
on top of a girl
non stop with the pearls
gon rock with the planet
on lock and unstandard
apocalypse damaged
im not just gunna stand here
and let these other rappers take my shine
feeling 10 out of 10 becoz this world is mine
you betta get in line becoz the world is mine
yeah you betta get in line, the world is mine

ill take you back where it started back out there in 92
who wulda knew that this kid would step up to the line n shoot
through, with the sick raps causing an impact
infact even he didnt see it coming until the lines he drew

got compared to davinci in his prime or a pictured picasso
knowing theyll listen give em time to see hip hop as an art so
for the mean time he will just pass slow and collect his money when he pass go
in this game of monopoly and just continues to play his cards yo

coz hes that shining star, that you see in the horizon
that loves everybody even all the haters that despise him
coz he knows he one of the nicest brightest flyest guys with
a mic in hand, this man is righteous

feeling one hundred percent, with fun his only intent
spitting funny content for no type of money invest-ments
with rhymes outta this world bringing forth dimensions
that are unheard of while running all directions

if you feeling like me you feel good
feeling on top of the world
on top of a girl
non stop with the pearls
gon rock with the planet
on lock and unstandard
apocalypse damaged
im not just gunna stand here
and let these other rappers take my shine
feeling 10 out of 10 becoz this world is mine
you betta get in line becoz the world is mine
yeah you betta get in line, the world is mine

Bunny_Rabbit · 10-09-2009, 03:14 AM

Pretty good drop, homie; Wasn't digging the text hook, though. I see you are really coming along with the wordplay and the multi's, so I give you props for that; not too many dudes on here have wordplay or multi's in their shit, and if they do, It's always forced.

these rappers get 'pissed on / piston' like they 'fast n they furious'

^^Nice bar

Stay up.

Braidz · 10-09-2009, 03:19 AM

haha yeah the hook will sound good once i get it done tho

it goes on that same tune as B.O.B does on the original version with T.I. n Luda

but yeah i need that beat reall bad cant find it anywhere... ahwell i have another one in mind if i have to

Bunny_Rabbit · 10-09-2009, 03:21 AM

^^I know what beat you're talking about; not sure if It's even out there but I can look.

Braidz · 10-09-2009, 03:26 AM

yeah if you can look for me but if not i got one i produced myself so i reckon that wuld be better but i based it on the On Top Of The World beat so itd be easier to do as a remix

Braidz · 10-09-2009, 04:13 AM

really!, 36 views and rabbit is the only person to drop feed

Tom Chambers · 10-09-2009, 11:15 AM

the on top of the world beat i used?

Braidz · 10-09-2009, 02:04 PM

haha nah i can find that one easy.... its on top of the world by T.i. you used the ace hood one if i can remember correctly

anyways... updated this post for the final complete version so BUMP

Braidz · 10-09-2009, 09:57 PM

Uppin this shit

drop feed on the completed version

10-09-2009, 01:52 AM	#1
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 699 Repped: 92 Repped 76 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 18 Posts	On Top Of The World REMIX On Top Of The World REMIX if you feeling like me you feel good feeling on top of the world on top of a girl non stop with the pearls gon rock with the planet on lock and unstandard apocalypse damaged im not just gunna stand here and let these other rappers take my shine feeling 10 out of 10 becoz this world is mine you betta get in line becoz the world is mine yeah you betta get in line, the world is mine this here is my deepest darkest secretive plans a introduction to this species at hand my speakers in hand reefers leaking in stand of making hip hop a fan of my shit creeping the land of australia, through the deserts of this dust n dirt but my shits so dope its gotta go thru customs first these rappers get 'pissed on / piston' like they 'fast n they furious' your 'flow' cant harm me like im two halves 'impervious' melbourne microphone murderers i know that you heard of us living proof that not all smarts are part nerdiness saying we wack, GET BACK, theres alot more thats worse than us like 'beef' itll cost 'lives' if you wanna purchase us im just on top of the world like the stratosphere that young up n comer new spitter in rap they fear taking the globe by 'storm', 'the day after tomorrow' and though im 'full' of it i stay blasting tha 'hollow' if you feeling like me you feel good feeling on top of the world on top of a girl non stop with the pearls gon rock with the planet on lock and unstandard apocalypse damaged im not just gunna stand here and let these other rappers take my shine feeling 10 out of 10 becoz this world is mine you betta get in line becoz the world is mine yeah you betta get in line, the world is mine they say what goes up must come down but i stay atop of the clouds rocking the crowds punches knocking em out dropping these clowns what goes up must come down its called condensation bitches only time you can speak big is when conversating bitches these contemplating listeners they wanna hear that good drop so one punch to down gods at least until they get hooked on my drops, classic like hi-tops and nike shops but bringing something new like saigon and iced rocks i must not have a father coz its impossible to son me got this shit locked down and the constables just shun me coz they sleep on me like insomnia medication killing any rapper when i get on ya collaboration the voice they hear across a nation the doctor to this dying patient dont let the game lie in cases my name will rise to the ocassion coz they all killing rap, wheras im killing raps my soul is unbreakable so why dont you try killing that!? if you feeling like me you feel good feeling on top of the world on top of a girl non stop with the pearls gon rock with the planet on lock and unstandard apocalypse damaged im not just gunna stand here and let these other rappers take my shine feeling 10 out of 10 becoz this world is mine you betta get in line becoz the world is mine yeah you betta get in line, the world is mine ill take you back where it started back out there in 92 who wulda knew that this kid would step up to the line n shoot through, with the sick raps causing an impact infact even he didnt see it coming until the lines he drew got compared to davinci in his prime or a pictured picasso knowing theyll listen give em time to see hip hop as an art so for the mean time he will just pass slow and collect his money when he pass go in this game of monopoly and just continues to play his cards yo coz hes that shining star, that you see in the horizon that loves everybody even all the haters that despise him coz he knows he one of the nicest brightest flyest guys with a mic in hand, this man is righteous feeling one hundred percent, with fun his only intent spitting funny content for no type of money invest-ments with rhymes outta this world bringing forth dimensions that are unheard of while running all directions if you feeling like me you feel good feeling on top of the world on top of a girl non stop with the pearls gon rock with the planet on lock and unstandard apocalypse damaged im not just gunna stand here and let these other rappers take my shine feeling 10 out of 10 becoz this world is mine you betta get in line becoz the world is mine yeah you betta get in line, the world is mine Last edited by Braidz; 10-09-2009 at 02:06 PM.

10-09-2009, 03:14 AM	#2
Bunny_Rabbit The Man With No Name Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 983 Repped: 57 Repped 126 Times in 58 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 90 Times in 81 Posts	Pretty good drop, homie; Wasn't digging the text hook, though. I see you are really coming along with the wordplay and the multi's, so I give you props for that; not too many dudes on here have wordplay or multi's in their shit, and if they do, It's always forced. these rappers get 'pissed on / piston' like they 'fast n they furious' ^^Nice bar Stay up. __________________ "I blow a hole in your face and then I go in the house... and I sleep like a baby"

10-09-2009, 03:21 AM	#4
Bunny_Rabbit The Man With No Name Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 983 Repped: 57 Repped 126 Times in 58 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 90 Times in 81 Posts	^^I know what beat you're talking about; not sure if It's even out there but I can look. __________________ "I blow a hole in your face and then I go in the house... and I sleep like a baby"

10-09-2009, 11:15 AM	#7
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,381 Repped: 134 Repped 510 Times in 316 Posts Neg Reps: 20 Neg Repped at 71 Times in 56 Posts	the on top of the world beat i used? __________________ http://www.datpiff.com/Tom_Chambers_Official_Jae_Rock_Tash_Stack_B-d.m104300.html NEW TAPE!

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10-09-2009, 03:19 AM	#3
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 699 Repped: 92 Repped 76 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 18 Posts	haha yeah the hook will sound good once i get it done tho it goes on that same tune as B.O.B does on the original version with T.I. n Luda but yeah i need that beat reall bad cant find it anywhere... ahwell i have another one in mind if i have to

10-09-2009, 03:26 AM	#5
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 699 Repped: 92 Repped 76 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 18 Posts	yeah if you can look for me but if not i got one i produced myself so i reckon that wuld be better but i based it on the On Top Of The World beat so itd be easier to do as a remix

10-09-2009, 04:13 AM	#6
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 699 Repped: 92 Repped 76 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 18 Posts	really!, 36 views and rabbit is the only person to drop feed

10-09-2009, 02:04 PM	#8
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 699 Repped: 92 Repped 76 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 18 Posts	haha nah i can find that one easy.... its on top of the world by T.i. you used the ace hood one if i can remember correctly anyways... updated this post for the final complete version so BUMP

10-09-2009, 09:57 PM	#9
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 699 Repped: 92 Repped 76 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 18 Posts	Uppin this shit drop feed on the completed version