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Jesus Walks
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: from California to Florida to New York
Posts: 1,699
Repped: 257
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Neg Reps: 41
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I don't really write much anymore but I get bored here and there and write a few things. The first one I use a different pace so when it says fast flow im going a little faster and vice versa
Fast Flow: Some need a slow flow but I don't know, How I should go, someoen need to light the wick so i explode, But how long will it burn before i blow, and when it's my time to come will I show, Slow Flow: Will I meet expectations will people even like me, But the chances I will disappoint are highly unlikely, in a lyrical war no one want to fight me, because I know how to get creative like i was singing hyphy, Fast: But I'll switch it up, I'll never give up, Slow: I'll give it any way even if I have to mix it up, Fast: I'll do it slow, or even fast at the same time, Slow: I'll do it fast, even slow like I was saying the same rhyme --------- When they put you in a box it'll mess with your mind state, The images your mind creates will make your spine shake, They do it because you don't know how lie straight, But I say forget them, I won't let them decide my fate, They try to convince you that the system isnt corrupt, they tell you it'll make your better but it'll only make you give up, but don't give up, but than don't be like I don't give a f***, If you work to get your dreams than you might have a bit of luck, -------- I use the power of a pen to release my thought, I put my emotions in words, so you can see I'm lost, I'm not mentally disturbed, I don't believe I'm god, But I'm self controlled so to me I'm all, You don't have swagger you just have a high self esteem, Cockiness is confidence, but you bragging isnt helpin me, Nothing is perfect, but my skill of expressing words is close to it, I pay attention to detail so I pick apart what I say bit for bit, I scratch out, rewrite, change it again, than recite, I'll take you through a dark tunnel just to see the light, I hate talking about the negatives, but in life you have to compare and contrast, so when you look at it, you need to see the positives and put the rest in the past ------ I hate to see people depressed, life is too short to be down, because before you know it you'll be unable to pick yourself off of the ground, I tell people not to let others determine how you look at life, but if u listen to me, life will get better if they took it right, because after every storm the sun shines more, and if u use that as a metaphor with your life, u have happiness in store, god gives you pain to teach you how to survive, and if you think failure is an option, he doesn't think you deserve to be alive
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Jesus Walks
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: from California to Florida to New York
Posts: 1,699
Repped: 257
Repped 1,126 Times in 499 Posts
Neg Reps: 41
Neg Repped at 19 Times in 13 Posts
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I'm really not a bar for bar, spit a metaphor every line type of person... I used to be like that a long time ago untill I realized you really don't get anywhere with that. I show my creativity in different way.
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