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Old 10-06-2009, 11:24 AM   #1
 
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This is my Revenge

I am feeling it burning throughout ma’ body,
I feel it burning in the air,
Am hearing screams from everywhere,
Ive had enough,
Dont want no more love affairs,
Now I'm turned around,
I’ve returned to the old me,
I don’t care,
No matter how cold my heart be,
Am gon get whats mine,
Its hidden between these lines,
You keep running away,
Swinging from vine to vines,
Sit back and sip this red wine,
You hate me now but thats fine,
Cos I don’t love you neither,
Am almost dead without a doubt,
So you can all hear me shout,
I'm coming for my revenge,
Coming at you from all ends,
This here is where it ends,
Turn this around,
Like a 360 bend,
I cant go on,
This may be the last time you hear me rhyme,
I was balled for a crime that I didn’t commit,
I'm sure I'm right,
I must be legit,
This the last time you ever hear me spit,
I cant handle no more of this shit,
I feel like I'm buried underground,
But I'm still sittin on DUBS,
Still talkin to her,
How long will this argument go on,
Life’s keeps dragging me on,
How much longer will I go on,
I just want this life to end,
Buss a cap in ma brain and die,
I still see that love for me in ma lil mama’s eyes,
But she don’t wanna admit it,
She says its all over,
So before I roll over,
I need my revenge,
I keep my heart on lockdown,
It dosent even beat anymore,
You turned it into stone,
I'm buried underground,
All skull and all bone,
I'm left here in this room,
With the smell of your perfume,
Wake up late in the afternoon,
But my brains still dead,
I'm after my revenge soon.
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Old 10-06-2009, 11:31 AM   #2
 
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