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Yeah ya'll...i'm feelin this shit...I had to do it to em once..
Feelin depression every rhyme I write is going through regressions/ Mental congestion effectin my very best suggestions/ Except i'm accumulatin bullshit when I start guessin So when i'm realizin my effervescence just turns to question/ Detestin, everything I wrote in my collection/ Convection? Suddenly effectless affection/ A nexus? Prolly need one straight up into heaven/ Debatin bout satan just a kid call me Devin/ Correction, I feel in'clined' just call me Kevin/ You're testin, killin me lookin for ressurections/ But one day I won't come back to this shit cuz you fed it.../ You'll prolly regret it because you fuckin said it And yeah, devil barges in my mind tryin to sway my thoughts/ Contemplatin just on God and what he fuckin saw/ When he left the world or when Jesus had hit the cross/ Was it the right time or was even heaven distraught?/ I'm thinkin bout hell though heaven is it's tailgate/ Thinkin bout life, 7 days gone in 12 ways/ Put a 20 in front, is the world laid?/ To rest, I got a vest and a fuckin twelve gauge/ Put it in the mouth, fire pellets up through the scalp/ Flesh up on the alps, wake up from the dream without/ A gun, a gauge, a shell, the rage, the brave, er-y, it takes just to kill the hate.../ And understand, I got a message when i'm fuckin thunderin/ Strugglin cuz the devils inturrupt again/ Intermissions show me everything I fucked up in/ Regrets years later, aspirations of self love begin/ And yet their hopeless, i'm hung but ropeless/ Suspended in the air, thinkin that it's dopeness/ Can't breathe now, I guess i'm thoatless/ Part of me wonders who the FUCK really wrote this Was it me or the other me, the depressed and stressed old distant sucker brother me/ The one that leaves me flustered when I start blustering/ The mirrored ignorance within that is always bubbling/ The one I display when I see something that's troubling/ The one that's on play when typin things that i'm musterig/ Events in my time I think this life is damnin me/ I feel the strangest shit I lost my whole family/ Not whole but if a sentence then a bolded part/ Would you feel the same if you lost bout most of your heart/ In a new environment, strict with a diction/ Of contradiction, constrictin with affliction/ Hopin to end me, fighting in my confliction/ Battle of my own mind without my juridiction/ It's demented, just to lose everything and start/ It's like a exponential version of a change of heart/ Because it's all gone, and you miss home/ You wanna come back to the way it was before you zoned/ Before you lost your soul, to your sad emotion/ To your crazed mind, to it's fast devotion/ To a self empowerment that's like a self demotion/ A tempest of thoughts, waves of them coming like oceans.../ I don't wanna be you, don't wanna be me..../ But don't pass judgement from what you see on the TV/ You see these people cry you feel you wanna start shit/ But in reality...what the fuck are their hardships? Last edited by TheMadWriter; 10-05-2009 at 03:52 AM. |
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Yo bruv ya rhyme are sickk man a need to take them to a doctor today lol
na serioustly there good!!:D:D
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