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Old 10-05-2009, 03:46 AM   #1
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Yeah ya'll...i'm feelin this shit...I had to do it to em once..

Feelin depression every rhyme I write is going through regressions/
Mental congestion effectin my very best suggestions/
Except i'm accumulatin bullshit when I start guessin
So when i'm realizin my effervescence just turns to question/
Detestin, everything I wrote in my collection/
Convection? Suddenly effectless affection/
A nexus? Prolly need one straight up into heaven/
Debatin bout satan just a kid call me Devin/
Correction, I feel in'clined' just call me Kevin/
You're testin, killin me lookin for ressurections/
But one day I won't come back to this shit cuz you fed it.../
You'll prolly regret it because you fuckin said it
And yeah, devil barges in my mind tryin to sway my thoughts/
Contemplatin just on God and what he fuckin saw/
When he left the world or when Jesus had hit the cross/
Was it the right time or was even heaven distraught?/
I'm thinkin bout hell though heaven is it's tailgate/
Thinkin bout life, 7 days gone in 12 ways/
Put a 20 in front, is the world laid?/
To rest, I got a vest and a fuckin twelve gauge/
Put it in the mouth, fire pellets up through the scalp/
Flesh up on the alps, wake up from the dream without/
A gun, a gauge, a shell, the rage, the brave, er-y, it takes just to kill the hate.../
And understand, I got a message when i'm fuckin thunderin/
Strugglin cuz the devils inturrupt again/
Intermissions show me everything I fucked up in/
Regrets years later, aspirations of self love begin/
And yet their hopeless, i'm hung but ropeless/
Suspended in the air, thinkin that it's dopeness/
Can't breathe now, I guess i'm thoatless/
Part of me wonders who the FUCK really wrote this
Was it me or the other me, the depressed and stressed old distant sucker brother me/
The one that leaves me flustered when I start blustering/
The mirrored ignorance within that is always bubbling/
The one I display when I see something that's troubling/
The one that's on play when typin things that i'm musterig/
Events in my time I think this life is damnin me/
I feel the strangest shit I lost my whole family/
Not whole but if a sentence then a bolded part/
Would you feel the same if you lost bout most of your heart/
In a new environment, strict with a diction/
Of contradiction, constrictin with affliction/
Hopin to end me, fighting in my confliction/
Battle of my own mind without my juridiction/
It's demented, just to lose everything and start/
It's like a exponential version of a change of heart/
Because it's all gone, and you miss home/
You wanna come back to the way it was before you zoned/
Before you lost your soul, to your sad emotion/
To your crazed mind, to it's fast devotion/
To a self empowerment that's like a self demotion/
A tempest of thoughts, waves of them coming like oceans.../
I don't wanna be you, don't wanna be me..../
But don't pass judgement from what you see on the TV/
You see these people cry you feel you wanna start shit/
But in reality...what the fuck are their hardships?

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Yo bruv ya rhyme are sickk man a need to take them to a doctor today lol

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