Few Rhymes Outta This Long ASS diss im workin on

Braidz · 10-05-2009, 12:04 AM

yeah i no what BK means its blood killa but you aint a blood killa
or a drug dealer or thug figure the only booth you stand in takes smug pictures
thats why i said BK was brooklyn coz you aint no crook n
fucking rookie dont get mad at me coz i got u shooken

you put your tracks on myspace but all your tracks queer dude
are you scared your mums in a near room coz we cant hear you
im a machine i tear thru whip up your bitch ass and dont fear you
you tripping like you sipping to much beer dude your just a car i steer you

right into a wall its game night i skip shoot n scored
while you tripped to the floor with ligaments torn
listenen to your shit n my ears gettin sore
these are called punchlines you might wanna spit em in yours

because really all i felt was weak efforts wish i knocked this boy out sooner
coz in a punch i pack more force than roy jones junior
and rampage jackson combined in rap i define
the true meaning of real the cops want you becoz your crap is a crime

ill fuck you up but thatd involve you losing your virginity
brooklyn is not conneticutt you confusing your vicinity

you sitting at school rapping but i still got more class this dudes faggot
hes just a letter envelope packet whereas im the full package
your just hollow theres nothing between your ears but air
you may have a good line here n there but mine come one after the other like deers and bears

see im a hungry champ punchlines against you, punching bag
to crunch this fag once is bad but twice now i got your whole country mad
you say your hard your not you just pass the shot
even in basketball you dont shoot you just pass it off

now watch me as i pass the time while waiting for a response
saying i look like buzz lightyear thats why i got rhymes that are infinity and beyond

another thing to speak on, you claim BK crip but your from conneticut
but in your display pic your wearing red hes all colours on some confetti shit
just confess it bitch, you dont have to claim just coz you rap
faking blood or crip like lil wayne just becoz your wack

yeah thats right thats who i compare you to coz you be kissing ya father
oh shit i forgot hes dead can my personals get any larger?
coz they are bigger than you are, and thats saying something
you aint shit to me your more my underlayings dumpings

i bet the whole time you been listenen you stopping n starting
looking up my words in a dictionary coz your fucking retarted
fake crip couldnt stomp on the red if he dropped on red carpet
my swaggers hot n the largest you think you get a swag shopping at target

my shit heres freestyled all your rhymes were pre written
i would fuck ya girl but her twat is all flea ridden
oh i forgot you cant see chicks n looking like biggie but that cant be spittin
im looked up to by the kids n your a kid who looks up to these women

tryna diss me spitting please is he kidding
starving for attention sitting at home praying please listen
you just another pussy nah rephrase your the kitten
who ive been shittin on for over 3 minutes

from the start of this rhyme id won it was iight n fun
im that shining sun, whos quality of lines is 9 + 1
stop lying son stop crying son
losers should be used to losing allright im done

some dude was hating on my accent in a few tracks.... n made a diss against me........... IT WAS SOOO WACK but yeah.. feed?

ShawnDaDon · 10-05-2009, 12:33 AM

damn lucky me im on ya good side
not that im scared but shit was fire

yeah thats right thats who i compare you to coz you be kissing ya father
oh shit i forgot hes dead can my personals get any larger?
coz they are bigger than you are, and thats saying something
you aint shit to me your more my underlayings dumpings

i bet the whole time you been listenen you stopping n starting
looking up my words in a dictionary coz your fucking retarted
fake crip couldnt stomp on the red if he dropped on red carpet
my swaggers hot n the largest you think you get a swag shopping at target

my shit heres freestyled all your rhymes were pre written
i would fuck ya girl but her twat is all flea ridden
oh i forgot you cant see chicks n looking like biggie but that cant be spittin
im looked up to by the kids n your a kid who looks up to these women

tryna diss me spitting please is he kidding
starving for attention sitting at home praying please listen
you just another pussy nah rephrase your the kitten
who ive been shittin on for over 3 minutes

from the start of this rhyme id won it was iight n fun
im that shining sun, whos quality of lines is 9 + 1
stop lying son stop crying son
losers should be used to losing allright im done
my favorite section dawg

Braidz · 10-05-2009, 12:58 AM

haha @ damn lucky me im on ya good side

but yahh thanks for tha feed dude

ShawnDaDon · 10-05-2009, 01:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Braidz

haha @ damn lucky me im on ya good side

but yahh thanks for tha feed dude

lol yo u wanna collab on a text

Braidz · 10-05-2009, 01:38 AM

yeah im down... topical? punchline? what type?

Bunny_Rabbit · 10-05-2009, 01:40 AM

shit was dope, my man; your wordplay is coming along. And yeah, I think me, you, and Shawn should do a posse cut; go all out on this board.

Braidz · 10-05-2009, 01:46 AM

yeah im down with that.... but i aint going out against no vets or nuffn like virus n chambers n shit haha

ShawnDaDon · 10-05-2009, 01:54 AM

nah not against any vets just at this board being full of straight haters
make it like more of a battle type verse at hhboard as a whole ya feel me

Witty Qwan · 10-05-2009, 02:37 AM

The i forgot ya fathers dead line may be too much

SirFreshington · 10-05-2009, 06:58 PM

good diss. dependin on how he rhymes you pretty much killed him.. is this diss on a track...?

hmmmm, two lines i dont feel.. and you will know why.

Braidz · 10-06-2009, 03:13 AM

yea i was thinkn i should change it... its a bit too deep.

but if you really wanna see it lol

he disses us aussies

SirFreshington · 10-06-2009, 09:57 PM

lol aussie disses are pointless. we are too multicultural.. so any of the g'day mate shyt will just make me laugh at them.

what is the kid like 14? lol.

smh

but come'on mayne.. dont play, you know exactly what lines i dont feel.

Braidz · 10-08-2009, 11:15 PM

yeah ive already changed em i no the lines you were talkn bout

but yeah this guys a homo lol

10-05-2009, 12:04 AM	#1
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 321 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	Few Rhymes Outta This Long ASS diss im workin on Few Rhymes Outta This Long ASS diss im workin on yeah i no what BK means its blood killa but you aint a blood killa or a drug dealer or thug figure the only booth you stand in takes smug pictures thats why i said BK was brooklyn coz you aint no crook n fucking rookie dont get mad at me coz i got u shooken you put your tracks on myspace but all your tracks queer dude are you scared your mums in a near room coz we cant hear you im a machine i tear thru whip up your bitch ass and dont fear you you tripping like you sipping to much beer dude your just a car i steer you right into a wall its game night i skip shoot n scored while you tripped to the floor with ligaments torn listenen to your shit n my ears gettin sore these are called punchlines you might wanna spit em in yours because really all i felt was weak efforts wish i knocked this boy out sooner coz in a punch i pack more force than roy jones junior and rampage jackson combined in rap i define the true meaning of real the cops want you becoz your crap is a crime ill fuck you up but thatd involve you losing your virginity brooklyn is not conneticutt you confusing your vicinity you sitting at school rapping but i still got more class this dudes faggot hes just a letter envelope packet whereas im the full package your just hollow theres nothing between your ears but air you may have a good line here n there but mine come one after the other like deers and bears see im a hungry champ punchlines against you, punching bag to crunch this fag once is bad but twice now i got your whole country mad you say your hard your not you just pass the shot even in basketball you dont shoot you just pass it off now watch me as i pass the time while waiting for a response saying i look like buzz lightyear thats why i got rhymes that are infinity and beyond another thing to speak on, you claim BK crip but your from conneticut but in your display pic your wearing red hes all colours on some confetti shit just confess it bitch, you dont have to claim just coz you rap faking blood or crip like lil wayne just becoz your wack yeah thats right thats who i compare you to coz you be kissing ya father oh shit i forgot hes dead can my personals get any larger? coz they are bigger than you are, and thats saying something you aint shit to me your more my underlayings dumpings i bet the whole time you been listenen you stopping n starting looking up my words in a dictionary coz your fucking retarted fake crip couldnt stomp on the red if he dropped on red carpet my swaggers hot n the largest you think you get a swag shopping at target my shit heres freestyled all your rhymes were pre written i would fuck ya girl but her twat is all flea ridden oh i forgot you cant see chicks n looking like biggie but that cant be spittin im looked up to by the kids n your a kid who looks up to these women tryna diss me spitting please is he kidding starving for attention sitting at home praying please listen you just another pussy nah rephrase your the kitten who ive been shittin on for over 3 minutes from the start of this rhyme id won it was iight n fun im that shining sun, whos quality of lines is 9 + 1 stop lying son stop crying son losers should be used to losing allright im done some dude was hating on my accent in a few tracks.... n made a diss against me........... IT WAS SOOO WACK but yeah.. feed?

10-05-2009, 12:33 AM	#2
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	damn lucky me im on ya good side not that im scared but shit was fire yeah thats right thats who i compare you to coz you be kissing ya father oh shit i forgot hes dead can my personals get any larger? coz they are bigger than you are, and thats saying something you aint shit to me your more my underlayings dumpings i bet the whole time you been listenen you stopping n starting looking up my words in a dictionary coz your fucking retarted fake crip couldnt stomp on the red if he dropped on red carpet my swaggers hot n the largest you think you get a swag shopping at target my shit heres freestyled all your rhymes were pre written i would fuck ya girl but her twat is all flea ridden oh i forgot you cant see chicks n looking like biggie but that cant be spittin im looked up to by the kids n your a kid who looks up to these women tryna diss me spitting please is he kidding starving for attention sitting at home praying please listen you just another pussy nah rephrase your the kitten who ive been shittin on for over 3 minutes from the start of this rhyme id won it was iight n fun im that shining sun, whos quality of lines is 9 + 1 stop lying son stop crying son losers should be used to losing allright im done my favorite section dawg __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

10-05-2009, 01:40 AM	#6
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 117 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	shit was dope, my man; your wordplay is coming along. And yeah, I think me, you, and Shawn should do a posse cut; go all out on this board. __________________

10-05-2009, 01:54 AM	#8
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	nah not against any vets just at this board being full of straight haters make it like more of a battle type verse at hhboard as a whole ya feel me __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

10-05-2009, 02:37 AM	#9
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	The i forgot ya fathers dead line may be too much __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

10-05-2009, 12:58 AM	#3
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 321 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	haha @ damn lucky me im on ya good side but yahh thanks for tha feed dude

10-05-2009, 01:38 AM	#5
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 321 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	yeah im down... topical? punchline? what type?

10-05-2009, 01:46 AM	#7
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 321 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	yeah im down with that.... but i aint going out against no vets or nuffn like virus n chambers n shit haha

10-05-2009, 06:58 PM	#10
SirFreshington Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: WORLDWIDE Posts: 44 Repped: 0 Repped 23 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good diss. dependin on how he rhymes you pretty much killed him.. is this diss on a track...? hmmmm, two lines i dont feel.. and you will know why.

10-06-2009, 03:13 AM	#11
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 321 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	yea i was thinkn i should change it... its a bit too deep. but if you really wanna see it lol he disses us aussies

10-06-2009, 09:57 PM	#12
SirFreshington Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: WORLDWIDE Posts: 44 Repped: 0 Repped 23 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol aussie disses are pointless. we are too multicultural.. so any of the g'day mate shyt will just make me laugh at them. what is the kid like 14? lol. smh but come'on mayne.. dont play, you know exactly what lines i dont feel.

10-08-2009, 11:15 PM	#13
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 321 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	yeah ive already changed em i no the lines you were talkn bout but yeah this guys a homo lol

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