+++Battle Cry+++

Komplex · 10-03-2009, 11:14 PM

The specialist, a trained assassin shrewd with darts
Godzilla stature, doing pull-ups on the St. Louis arch
My team's colossal, to this artform we're deemed as apostles
Once I've spoken your mind's open like a raging fiend's nostrils
Re-read your vision, fam it's not me you need be dissin
True I'm sick, so they "hit the kid with shots" like a pediatrician
Robert Kraft style, I peep the game from luxury suites
Triple up, then watch my team deliver crushing defeats
Demolish mediocre players who think they fuckin with me
Then delegate them to the low task of dustin my cleats
Headquarters elegant like the Taj Mahal or Vatican
Grand accomidations, who would feel compelled to rap again?
Only the grimiest rap fiend or most clairvoyant poet
Described by fans and critics alike as profound and stoic
Diplomatic dictator, pushing the land's law foward
Enjoying spoils of war while foes are still at the drawing board

Homiewell · 10-03-2009, 11:18 PM

Diplomatic dictator

Contradictory

Apart from that, graceful.

Bunny_Rabbit · 10-03-2009, 11:28 PM

^^^shut your bitch ass up you faggy ass brit.

Anyway, shit was decent apart from the played out pediatrician line; It's a recycled concept, man. But other then that, your multi's are getting better.

Stay up.

Homiewell · 10-04-2009, 12:04 AM

Shut the fuck up Bunny_Rabbit, you're one to talk about recycled concepts, fucking biter, get a microphone, you broke textcee bitch.

SirFreshington · 10-04-2009, 12:11 AM

first time i seen anything from you.. but im impressed by some of your concepts..

Quote:

The specialist, a trained assassin shrewd with darts
Godzilla stature, doing pull-ups on the St. Louis arch

owww

Quote:

Robert Kraft style, I peep the game from luxury suites
Triple up, then watch my team deliver crushing defeats
Demolish mediocre players who think they fuckin with me
Then delegate them to the low task of dustin my cleats

i dig.

but WOW the godzilla line was incredible. Fuck what anyone says. I like shyt like that.

Props. Good drop

Braidz · 10-04-2009, 01:41 AM

still dropping them complex rhymes i see. O.o

Komplex · 10-04-2009, 02:14 PM

much appreciation on all feedback.

DXavier23 · 10-04-2009, 04:34 PM

Yo Plex. As far as structure and rhythm, this was one of the best drops ive seen from you. Apart from the closer, every line was concise and didn't contain extra syllables that sometimes tend to take away from the impact of a bar. Overall, really good job and you had me nodding to it after the opening line.

The specialist, a trained assassin shrewd with darts
Godzilla stature, doing pull-ups on the St. Louis arch
My team's colossal, to this artform we're deemed as apostles
Once I've spoken your mind's open like a raging fiend's nostrils

Robert Kraft style, I peep the game from luxury suites
Triple up, then watch my team deliver crushing defeats
Demolish mediocre players who think they fuckin with me
Then delegate them to the low task of dustin my cleats

---good shit homie

Komplex · 10-05-2009, 01:34 PM

........thanx X

Baller · 10-05-2009, 05:22 PM

Good flow n multies....Didn't like a couple of the puns, the hittin kids with shots and fiends nostrils. Other than that it was pretty good. Good use of vocab, stay up.

ShawnDaDon · 10-05-2009, 09:14 PM

real real tight fam
liked almost everything
the godzilla line was fucking killer stay up

Komplex · 10-06-2009, 02:55 PM

good looks fam

Komplex · 10-12-2009, 09:57 PM

up................

Komplex · 10-15-2009, 11:42 AM

.............................

10-03-2009, 11:14 PM	#1
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	+++Battle Cry+++ +++Battle Cry+++ The specialist, a trained assassin shrewd with darts Godzilla stature, doing pull-ups on the St. Louis arch My team's colossal, to this artform we're deemed as apostles Once I've spoken your mind's open like a raging fiend's nostrils Re-read your vision, fam it's not me you need be dissin True I'm sick, so they "hit the kid with shots" like a pediatrician Robert Kraft style, I peep the game from luxury suites Triple up, then watch my team deliver crushing defeats Demolish mediocre players who think they fuckin with me Then delegate them to the low task of dustin my cleats Headquarters elegant like the Taj Mahal or Vatican Grand accomidations, who would feel compelled to rap again? Only the grimiest rap fiend or most clairvoyant poet Described by fans and critics alike as profound and stoic Diplomatic dictator, pushing the land's law foward Enjoying spoils of war while foes are still at the drawing board __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

10-03-2009, 11:28 PM	#3
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 117 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	^^^shut your bitch ass up you faggy ass brit. Anyway, shit was decent apart from the played out pediatrician line; It's a recycled concept, man. But other then that, your multi's are getting better. Stay up. __________________

10-04-2009, 02:14 PM	#7
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	much appreciation on all feedback. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

10-04-2009, 04:34 PM	#8
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	Yo Plex. As far as structure and rhythm, this was one of the best drops ive seen from you. Apart from the closer, every line was concise and didn't contain extra syllables that sometimes tend to take away from the impact of a bar. Overall, really good job and you had me nodding to it after the opening line. The specialist, a trained assassin shrewd with darts Godzilla stature, doing pull-ups on the St. Louis arch My team's colossal, to this artform we're deemed as apostles Once I've spoken your mind's open like a raging fiend's nostrils Robert Kraft style, I peep the game from luxury suites Triple up, then watch my team deliver crushing defeats Demolish mediocre players who think they fuckin with me Then delegate them to the low task of dustin my cleats ---good shit homie __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

10-05-2009, 01:34 PM	#9
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	........thanx X __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

10-03-2009, 11:18 PM	#2
Homiewell Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Moon Posts: 57 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 6 Posts	Diplomatic dictator Contradictory Apart from that, graceful.

10-04-2009, 12:04 AM	#4
Homiewell Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Moon Posts: 57 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 6 Posts	Shut the fuck up Bunny_Rabbit, you're one to talk about recycled concepts, fucking biter, get a microphone, you broke textcee bitch.

10-04-2009, 01:41 AM	#6
Braidz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Melbourne City, Australia Posts: 321 Repped: 11 Repped 31 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	still dropping them complex rhymes i see. O.o

10-05-2009, 05:22 PM	#10
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,087 Repped: 109 Repped 241 Times in 144 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	Good flow n multies....Didn't like a couple of the puns, the hittin kids with shots and fiends nostrils. Other than that it was pretty good. Good use of vocab, stay up. __________________

10-05-2009, 09:14 PM	#11
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	real real tight fam liked almost everything the godzilla line was fucking killer stay up __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

10-06-2009, 02:55 PM	#12
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	good looks fam __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

10-12-2009, 09:57 PM	#13
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	up................ __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

10-15-2009, 11:42 AM	#14
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	............................. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

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