Braidz

they say i is, the most nicest
coming out full force during this crisis
the one whos rising despite shit like rap dying
where do i sit n roll lucky 7s where the dice is

my name gets played, while these rappers come fade
doing whatever the mainstream tells them too like a dumb maid
talking bout money cars hoes clothes and gunplay
thats why the clouds have covered up hip hops shining sunray

i ring bells, and bring hell with this intel
impale any battler who trys enter where the king dwell
ive been down, but now ive rose and am well
"how does he rap so good when hes a dropout who cant spell"

well hip hops my life, it runs thru my veins
dont hate keep it straight not crooked like the definition of braids
i use rap to tell stories and express my pain
just remember before turning on that this is my game








my english teacher actually did flunk me at lilydale high
so to shine show them ill make it is why i strive
and keep this dream alive, keep there screams derived
from my mind, and when im big rub it in until they cry

get a track ripped up, leaving scars like nip tucks
my music is the middle finger to society i flip up
if this was a book of history im the next to pen
im used to spitting fire like im always eating "mexican"

time and time when i write they ask what i write to
i answer a beat in my head that replays in a cycle
i wish i had the talent to produce the instrumental
but ill just stick to my lyrics there the thing that i like to vent through

i just gotta do a dope rhyme like im spitting contraband
micro-phone in my hand while i own the concert land
when i walk down the street people like "he a faker"
or "braidz is wack" thanks for the support and report !hater!




stop to thank, the ones who with me all the way
shots away while i roll night n rock the day
these rappers come at me like its there intentions to die
the mirror is the only thing thats really reflecting my life

take a stab at the rap game like im inserting a knife
this music and me are together repairing this type
of music, get on the mic daring to strive
to not hide and to fight all the things scary in life

thats my motto, these rappers aint even sick when they cough
im like the bird flu, catchy, a virus in the air when i talk
i gotta find that mindstate so i can freestyle just like this
see ima last forever just like pc's, nike's and competitive fighting

support aussie hip hop, stick it in your head
like the time you caught another man with your chick up in ya bed
my imaginations wild but still my dreams are still fact
ill sell so much thats its hard to even see the real math

ShawnDaDon

i liked it mayne felt you tried a bit too hard in some places and some places your punches could have been a bit harder but none the less shit was good and yo check out my collab wid bunny though

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only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy
Serius Jones

CriminalThoughtz

nice flow man, some areas multies were on point, some they were just simple, but overall i liked the piece brah, keep drooping homie.

SirFreshington

this was alright but mad predictable.
props for those.

try and make your content a lil more creative.
especially if ur gonna write verses bout how life is hard, dont be saying the same shyt.. about being a drop out.. no one believes in you, ect.

Braidz

i just kinda followed eminems version n made my own rhymes to it.. but yeah thanks everyone for the feed