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Old 08-25-2009, 06:15 PM   #1
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Default You Played Yourself (CriminalThoughtz Diss)

You Played Yourself (CriminalThoughtz Diss)

Hard to call this shit a diss....call it a fuckin warning...niggas don't understand what they're doin to themselves...

Kick rocks like a muthafuckin hiker/
Spit shots keep reachin I am a striker/
And fuck your grapples, that's for rikers/
The Big Apple, where the loose are tighter/
You don't understand the way you're fuckin fumblin/
Your bumblin with the stolen words that you're mumblin/
And humblin the same nigga that dissed you/
Rumblin a day the next he has to delist you/
Cease and desist too, you're rappin so blissful/
Not knowin that the words are stolen from the one that ripped you/
He shaped your hearse never had to spit a verse/
Cuz the moment you traversed you stole from him that's the worst.../
Why would you do this? The game is screwed it's, usin niggas that dissed you for influence/
That's not fluent, what the fuck you strewin?/
You're too pursuant, bullshit's what you're brewin/
And you might not like this song...but you're suckin fat dick over a microphone...

Nigga you played yaself..../
Criminal, you played yaself.../
Homeboy, you played yaself..../
You hear me son? You really played yaself.../

When I think Criminal Thoughts i'm thinkin bout robbery/
Or murder, not plagiarism and copying/
So work on stoppin that, bust ya glock and caps/
But PLEASE don't be a muthafuckin copycat/
Your M.O was once straight original/
Now the Criminal Thoughts are all residual/
You're straight whack now, no click clack now/
What the fuck you gonna try and backpack now?/
Where's the honesty? Nigga you're comedy/
Everytime I see those dots I see a mockery/
How dare you call it a freestyle to hide it/
It might as well be a sickness it's all Virus/
Not even you in there, is it mind control?/
Did you switch ya shit just because ya lines are old?/
When you dissed him I saw an opportunity/
Now I see that you lack the immunity...

Ya played yaself...you feel me son?/
Ya played ya self...you hear me son?/
Ya played ya self...get a vaccine yadadamean?/
Ya played ya self...this nigga wiped you clean/

Now what's most ironic bout this lyrical mortar/
Is that the maker crossed into the Law & Order/
And even though hypocrisy had had it's hour/
He still makes your ass look like more of a coward/
Devoured, eaten up by a virus/
You bow to another man sayin 'your highness'/
Your shyness, you must be fuckin timid/
Because you just crossed another fuckin limit/
He comes on your freestyle after your supposed spasm/
You orgasm at some false sarcasm.../
He even calls you out on the stolen structure/
And then you shrugged, played like a fuckin sucker/
It's a shame when you see men condescended/
Extended, the torture you'll never mend it/
Damaged as a man you bear this scar.../
A coward dies a thousand deaths without a heart/
I hope you heard the line it comes from straight poetry/
This flowetry is to ensure that you are knowin me/
And understandin where the fuck i'm really comin from/

This ain't the Bay smarten up and quit dumbin son

I took a few elements my self/
But damn, I kept it original and well/
The next time you wanna disgrace the genre/
Check yourself the next time you try to saunter...

You play yourself, and I ain't gotta fuckin finish, this rhyme's diminished your astonished when you see infinite, limits, and I don't have to fuckin copy, I keep it original they can't stop me, dissed slaughter and made em multiple martyrs, you wanna follow footsteps but nigga why bother?? Don't make him your father step up as a challenger, and stop suckin the dicks of the higher calibre...

You really fuckin played yourself.

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Old 08-25-2009, 10:39 PM   #2
 
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man....i truly honored by this....thankz "maddy"....hook and everythin...''ya played yourself....son ya played yourself....lol..thats was funny dawg.

seriously now.....had some good rhymez but too damn long brah...not really impressed by this 'newspaper'.....n since u mentioned Virus...his drop was more accurate than yours even though it was only 16.

Now tell me this...u still mad at me??..c'mon homie..still?...it has been a month since i dropped 'The lecture'....deadline was like 3 weeks ago man....propz thou'....."ya palyed yourself"..lolol man.
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First you copy my name, now you copying niggas lyrics? fake ass CriminalThoughtz
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Old 10-22-2009, 08:51 PM   #5
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Can a Mod Delete this Wack Shit>?
Maybe I should go up your boring ass old man raps that brag about the intelligence you don't really have? Or should it be the one bragging about your 'power with the pen' where you parade around like you're actually writing something? Like you could make a real work of literature? Hahhahaha.

Gtfo, this was dope anyway.
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