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Old 08-19-2009, 01:42 AM   #1
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Niggas wanna Tupac me, but like Tupac i'ma come back like Rocky, and like Rocky it's the end that's that, and like Tupac i'ma air you out on the track, but like Rocky my punches just might blind your cataracts, till you clean your act so I don't have to give a heart attack.....don't feel like I have a life of my own, so what the fuck makes you think I wouldn't wanna make your life my own? Get used to me here Hip Hop's my home, i'm in my zone like a nigga with two girls and bone...please...

Fuckin classic...I know this is what ya'll have been waitin for...some of that wordplay shit...

You could say i'm enlightened, my senses heightened as if i'm dodgin and i'm fightin, keep gripin, i'ma kill you fruits before you ripen and murder every single that you ever tried hypin...then make you dash no muthafuckin hyphen, and take your bitch and put her on my dick although she's triflin...

ILL...where you at Buddens? I know readers are waitin for me to go in...well here it is...

How do you tell someone with a life changin experience/
That they're delirious and what they had was never serious/
Makin evidence though what you're sayin's never evident/
The situation's different yet you still seem to reference it/
For leverage yet, you claim that you do is in your effort's best/
You sit here in your wretchedness, what you're sayin is effortless/
Shootin down a UFO with claims more vacuous/
Nothin to back-you-up in fact your marvels are miraculous/
Distractin us, from what the person's sayin's really happenin/
And expect us to go with analysis of paralysis/
When your dialysis is nothin but a pointless malice it/
Makes me question the intention of he who's fiction's talented/
And by fiction I mean the pseudo scientific claim/
That's made to violate- a rather high prolific name/
That is used throughout movies and it always stays the same/
Though the place directors get it is where crop circles and grain/
Really meet...so how do you say to annhilate the pain/
That's continuous insinuate that dyin in it's fame/
Is the only way to say people ain't lyin in it's frame/
It's a message that theories really struggle for acceptance/
Even if they're proven people make em look decrepid.../
A place where a sound recordin is aborted/
A place where picture evidence all stays deported/
A place where things are mostly biased when they are reported/
And re-assorted so when people just ignore it/
They're subconciously ignor-ant, in a state that's euphoric/
Watchin the same rhetoric, when the truth is metaphoric/
Dug into philosophy and shunned away as dork shit/
So now it's just historic when it was once hydrochloric/
Burned into our memories like thunder in forest.../
Of course it's never suspected not enforced/
Coerced to change our course and look at things that aren't impor-tant.../
And mano e mano, I think there are more things pressing than Brad at Mcdonalds/
Angelina drinkin aquafina just like a model, they'd prolly sell more if her face was plastered on the bottle/
But I guess it's hard to swallow, that those two things would get more press if nukes would ever fly and hit tomorrow/
And we're irrelevent, rarely do we report things that are federate/
Better yet, we're more than that to people we are reverent/
And I don't propose that we slay the entertainment/
Just make us more polticial, five minutes dedicated/
Even if it's biased, we'll only get the vaguest/
Idea, so we can research it and then hate it/
But please give us somethin, we really ain't that far/
I'd rather see more biased shit than be left up in the dark../
And a, nother person's propaganda/
Is so bad when other countries can't even understand a/
Resolution to revolution so they just hand a.../
Bad solution to kill the contribution and reel from these illusions they'll kill you just to fool you it's.../
Worse over there than over here, and why emerse us in the shit you fear when you could cover your ear/
And see for yourself, then spread it to those who care/
Go to the appropriate place, then it can spread everywhere...yeah/
If it was so bad everyone's involved, it wouldn't be reported for people just to seek resolves/
Fortunately it is, what we see's what we saw but it's overshadowed by bullshit like what niggas did to dogs/
Though I say this outside the box, I still hate networks like Fox/
I just flip em never watch em let em die without me watchin.../
It's not that they're a sensation, it's just that America brings it on itself with ignorant populations/
Misguided we this that, stories that we retract, when people react and other people look and see that.../
I wouldn't be surprise if me bein in the booth, or even on the computer was a source of legit truth.../
Dude, I spit shit that seems crude but I do it to be the best with fools that I illude/
And in the end, i'm where I was when I begin...I got so much focus that i'm rappin into lens...

And it's warnin shot through logic, just to show you that I can spit some hot shit, but through intelligence with a hint of benevolence and prevelence that makes me prominent yet longevously relevent...so, just remember who i'm better than, i'm the most incredible edible reputable rappin specimen, and if you want to ask me why i'm so contentious read this...

A nigga's just appeased to disappeasement...one.

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