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Old 08-18-2009, 03:57 AM   #1
 
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-Angel of Death-

Call me the Angel of Death, a dark apostle
Always hostile, now spreading unholy gospel
To those who would ally themselves I offer hostel
A safe haven under the wings of a raven
Stop misbehaving cause Hell’s started cremating
Sinners lined up hardly fazed, but now their blazing
I wrote their names on the page and dug their graves
Left them to rot and be forgotten through the ages
To those who should suffer longer, their in cages
But finally I have been sent to represent
All those who believe the rules should not be bent
Death to all of those who should refuse to repent
So I’m sent on a mission, not even Christian
If you’ve even made a crime, please start listenin’,
Here’s your chance, turn back now, see what you’re missin’
Don’t follow my steps and misstep just to rep
I’ve got a set of skulls; soon to be a true vet,
I have many friends I’m sure you’ve seen or met
I must grow stronger, promised I would never fade
I will show you all in my riposte; a darker shade

Here's my first attempt at a freestyle it's simple with almost no wordplay, but I think it's an okay start. Please comment good or bad. If you can manage to mangle it so it can flow it works decent with AOTP's battle cry beat at .
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Old 08-18-2009, 04:06 AM   #2
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Here`s my cosign..lets get some opinions in..this is my homie from real life..not some internet shiiiiiit ya digggggg
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Old 08-18-2009, 03:12 PM   #3
 
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very good drop homie
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Old 08-18-2009, 05:22 PM   #4
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this shit's good.

I really liked it. propz
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Old 08-18-2009, 08:37 PM   #5
 
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i like this... if its really a freestyle... then its pre good...

if not... its still allright.

but i do like this.

record it or sumtn
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Old 08-18-2009, 09:23 PM   #6
 
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i was feelin this freestyle man...and if is ya first 1...man u got talent brah
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