DX Presents 'Cyber Terrorism' - (Ft. ThA ViiRu5)

DXavier23 · 08-13-2009, 10:39 PM

-DX-
Cue up the C4, explosives, yea I need more
Life is a highway, Ill make you take a detour
Chillin by the seashore, glasses, they are Dior
In the latest fashions, my passion is now reborn
When typin on my keyboard, I reach enlightenment
I don't chase the throne, cause the crown lies within
I have sinned, but I'm still worshiped like the sun god
Potential with the pencil, script verses like a young Nas
Here to reform the game, rap needs deliverance
Yet intelligence goes unnoticed in a sea of ignorance
Still I stay afloat, like the house in Up, the drought's robust
But you can't create rain, from clouds of dust
Can't you see it's obvious, the state of hip-hop is dichotomous
Some starve for food for thought while others demandin just the condiments
Rappin bout rock fantasies, like yawl plan to be geologists
But you're putting us to sleep, like anesthesiologists
It's hard to see through me, but transparent is my confidence
I'm from a place, where most parents are anonymous
We were on a freight train, but the conductor was absent
But enough of what happened, I no longer fuck with the past tense
The fact is, my bars formed Oz, housed N Mandela
I'm stellar, when I create magic with a pen, like Teller
On each new page, my raps show improvement
But yawl sleeping on me, stage: rapid eye movement
Its time to awake the dead, before its too late
My potential has no ceiling, or floor, I'm in space
There's nothing that I can't do, I could write a screenplay
I could be a congressman, or I could be a DJ
Theres too much leeway, lanes on the freeway
Fuck it, rapping is my passion, sorry for the de-lay
While you hit the brakes , we push the pedal instead
Thanks to X and V, the cyber terror level is red

Chorus (DX)
Time is running out and your watch is now tickin'
X out firefox, the entire plot's about to thicken
This is cyber terrorism, the desire of our mission
Is to isolate our targets, than fire with precision
-------------------------------------------------------------------
First degree murder, on everything we write now
Torpedo your server, we the reason that the sites down (2)
-------------------------------------------------------------------

[V]
..Things are not as they used to seem..
..Reality warps and twists into amusing dreams..
..Censorship isn't providing me with room to scream..
..You're the Escape Route, only reaching me thru the computer screen..
..Pondering why it be that I have need of violent greed..
..All u have in common with my reign is you're a silent G..
..Ive won the hip-hop scholarship..sailed thru the colleges..
..I succeed in the offices..u only suck seed out your father's dick..
..You're thinkin What the fuck..wishin u could summon guts..
..Like sex with Tahiry, yall need 2/to Jump-off nuts..
..Teeny bitches playin Truth or Dare..so how could u compare..
..yall on everyone's nuts..like tufts of pubic hair..
..My activity's severing heads..My agenda's for death..
..Wish is republican change..but they say an elephant never forgets..
..DX brings recurrent fear..others serve no purpose here..
..they just dissapoint..like albums in the current year..
..I make the city glow..My lines..spawn a million quotes..
..We make movies..call Virus' verse a Viral video..
..I've always been a cool kid..i set what the rule is..
..I'll make u leave your fuckin idols like Paula Abdul did..
..I'm the one making the fun..u whose ashamed of your tongue..
..Chat room meetings for streaming movies..how far internet dating has come..
..The best is comin'..the rest are bludgeoned..
..I'ma fuckin open ya chest..call u Vanessa Hudgeons..
..You'll meet the wrong fate..never in a calm state..
..you couldnt hit a punch-line @ a prom date..
..We the best at rap..DX can attest to that..
..Disagree? I stick by the Tommy like Will Smith in Men In Black..
..The 1 bitches fight 4 is back..I'm Michael Vick..
..I'm a source of skill, 5 mics'll drop when its time to quit..
..Nothing can compare to this..the rest can barely spit..
..ThA Virus brings bio-warfare to the board, a Cyber Terrorist..

Chorus (DX)
Time is running out and your watch is now tickin'
X out firefox, the entire plot's about to thicken
This is cyber terrorism, the desire of our mission
Is to isolate our targets, than fire with precision
-------------------------------------------------------------------
First degree murder, on everything we write now
Torpedo your server, we the reason that the sites down (2)
-------------------------------------------------------------------

Bunny_Rabbit · 08-13-2009, 10:55 PM

Shit was good; I liked that Tahiry line. But that punchline wordplay is played out. Anyway, you both did your thing so I'll give it a solid 7/10. Stay up.

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-14-2009, 03:12 AM

^ Thanks for the feedback..DX you killed this shit homie..any more thoughts??

ShawnDaDon · 08-14-2009, 03:15 AM

all i got to say dawg is straight fire
this is better than half of the signed rappers in the game

T O LEF2 · 08-14-2009, 06:32 AM

good collabo

Komplex · 08-14-2009, 09:26 AM

I have sinned, but I'm still worshiped like the sun god
Potential with the pencil, script verses like a young Nas
Here to reform the game, rap needs deliverance
Yet intelligence goes unnoticed in a sea of ignorance

..Pondering why it be that I have need of violent greed..
..All u have in common with my reign is you're a silent G..

..We the best at rap..DX can attest to that..
..Disagree? I stick by the Tommy like Will Smith in Men In Black..

Aww shit, yall niggas went in. The flow throught DX's verse was basically picture perfect, had much substance as usual along with a few zingers here and there. Line for line, Virus had a bunch of substance and crazy punchlines. For some reason while reading this, I could imagine yall rappin this on Slaughterhouse's "Woodstock" beat. That's how the flow came across. what else is there to say? this shit is dope.

Virus check ya PMs my dude.

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-14-2009, 11:55 AM

Thanks for taking the time to peep our shit..all of you..

DXavier23 · 08-14-2009, 01:52 PM

..DX brings recurrent fear..others serve no purpose here..
..they just dissapoint..like albums in the current year..

.We the best at rap..DX can attest to that..
..Disagree? I stick by the Tommy like Will Smith in Men In Black..

-Overall hot verse Virus. Those lines were especially very good.

Appreciate the feed from everyone

TheMadWriter · 08-14-2009, 02:06 PM

Figured i'd return the criticism one your next verse. DX, with your verse the vocabulary you added was impressive. Making the drawn out words and the sylllables correlate was something that showed thought. The content was solid, the overall theme of the punchlines brought out a sort of wisdom-like portrayal so it was pretty interesting to read. My only problem is that when I was reading it small words would throw off the syllables, so if I had to say improve on something i'd just say a little more rhythm. Also like Rabbit said, some of the punches could've been more complex but it'd be contradictory for me to rant on that.

Virus, your verse was the more rhythmic/simplistic of the two. I'd say your punchlines were better but in terms of overall writing i'd say I was slightly more intrigued by DX's verse and the things he had to say. I liked the Venessa Hudgeons line and the Men In Black one, yours was definitely creative. The takeover-esque theme of this was completed by the way you approached it, specifically because I felt more aggression from your verse in terms of battling an imaginative opponent. So kudos to you on that one.

Overall you guys were pretty much equal and you're obviously still on a higher tier than most members of the forum, as you're hailed. The verse certainly compliments the 'legacy'. So, good job. Stay up.

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-14-2009, 02:51 PM

^^ Very in depth and well thought out feed, thank you. and props to you too DX =)

CriminalThoughtz · 08-15-2009, 02:15 AM

yo!!!! on the real somebody better call the fire department.....cuz that piece of work was fireeeee.....i wont get into details right now cuz im at work but this is straight geniuos.....virus man u killed that shit man....dx...im not really impressed cuz u always bring it!!!...fuck it what am i saying u fuckin murdered this shiit....

my opinion....the best collab i have ever seen..if i got grade this i would give it 11 out of fuckin 10 man!!..props to both of ya.

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-16-2009, 03:11 PM

Bump

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 08-17-2009, 09:03 PM

Both of you Killed it on Some Wordplay/Story-telling shit..

I have sinned, but I'm still worshiped like the sun god
Potential with the pencil, script verses like a young Nas
Here to reform the game, rap needs deliverance
Yet intelligence goes unnoticed in a sea of ignorance
Still I stay afloat, like the house in Up, the drought's robust
But you can't create rain, from clouds of dust
Can't you see it's obvious, the state of hip-hop is dichotomous
Some starve for food for thought while others demandin just the condiments

Crazy Flow DX..

Nothing can compare to this..the rest can barely spit..
..ThA Virus brings bio-warfare to the board, a Cyber Terrorist..

..My activity's severing heads..My agenda's for death..
..Wish is republican change..but they say an elephant never forgets..
..DX brings recurrent fear..others serve no purpose here..
..they just dissapoint..like albums in the current year..

Dope Wordplay

FacilDinero · 08-20-2009, 11:47 PM

Damn...Dope Drop....Both Came Dope As Fuck....I Lived Virus's Verse A Lil Better But That Dont Mean DX's Wasnt iLL....

DX...I Loved Ya Multies Cuz When Ever Yu Had Them They Werent Forced At All...Dope Shit...Great Lyrics...

Hook Was Okay

Yo I Really Need To Here This On Audio Lmao....Yall Verses Are Tooo Dope For Anything Of Yalls Not To Be On Audio

Virus...Your Imagery Was iLL....I Could Picture Your Verse....Mainly The First Quarter Of Your Verse....Great Lyrics....Wordplay Was Nice

08-13-2009, 10:39 PM	#1
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	DX Presents 'Cyber Terrorism' - (Ft. ThA ViiRu5) DX Presents 'Cyber Terrorism' - (Ft. ThA ViiRu5) -DX- Cue up the C4, explosives, yea I need more Life is a highway, Ill make you take a detour Chillin by the seashore, glasses, they are Dior In the latest fashions, my passion is now reborn When typin on my keyboard, I reach enlightenment I don't chase the throne, cause the crown lies within I have sinned, but I'm still worshiped like the sun god Potential with the pencil, script verses like a young Nas Here to reform the game, rap needs deliverance Yet intelligence goes unnoticed in a sea of ignorance Still I stay afloat, like the house in Up, the drought's robust But you can't create rain, from clouds of dust Can't you see it's obvious, the state of hip-hop is dichotomous Some starve for food for thought while others demandin just the condiments Rappin bout rock fantasies, like yawl plan to be geologists But you're putting us to sleep, like anesthesiologists It's hard to see through me, but transparent is my confidence I'm from a place, where most parents are anonymous We were on a freight train, but the conductor was absent But enough of what happened, I no longer fuck with the past tense The fact is, my bars formed Oz, housed N Mandela I'm stellar, when I create magic with a pen, like Teller On each new page, my raps show improvement But yawl sleeping on me, stage: rapid eye movement Its time to awake the dead, before its too late My potential has no ceiling, or floor, I'm in space There's nothing that I can't do, I could write a screenplay I could be a congressman, or I could be a DJ Theres too much leeway, lanes on the freeway Fuck it, rapping is my passion, sorry for the de-lay While you hit the brakes , we push the pedal instead Thanks to X and V, the cyber terror level is red Chorus (DX) Time is running out and your watch is now tickin' X out firefox, the entire plot's about to thicken This is cyber terrorism, the desire of our mission Is to isolate our targets, than fire with precision ------------------------------------------------------------------- First degree murder, on everything we write now Torpedo your server, we the reason that the sites down (2) ------------------------------------------------------------------- [V] ..Things are not as they used to seem.. ..Reality warps and twists into amusing dreams.. ..Censorship isn't providing me with room to scream.. ..You're the Escape Route, only reaching me thru the computer screen.. ..Pondering why it be that I have need of violent greed.. ..All u have in common with my reign is you're a silent G.. ..Ive won the hip-hop scholarship..sailed thru the colleges.. ..I succeed in the offices..u only suck seed out your father's dick.. ..You're thinkin What the fuck..wishin u could summon guts.. ..Like sex with Tahiry, yall need 2/to Jump-off nuts.. ..Teeny bitches playin Truth or Dare..so how could u compare.. ..yall on everyone's nuts..like tufts of pubic hair.. ..My activity's severing heads..My agenda's for death.. ..Wish is republican change..but they say an elephant never forgets.. ..DX brings recurrent fear..others serve no purpose here.. ..they just dissapoint..like albums in the current year.. ..I make the city glow..My lines..spawn a million quotes.. ..We make movies..call Virus' verse a Viral video.. ..I've always been a cool kid..i set what the rule is.. ..I'll make u leave your fuckin idols like Paula Abdul did.. ..I'm the one making the fun..u whose ashamed of your tongue.. ..Chat room meetings for streaming movies..how far internet dating has come.. ..The best is comin'..the rest are bludgeoned.. ..I'ma fuckin open ya chest..call u Vanessa Hudgeons.. ..You'll meet the wrong fate..never in a calm state.. ..you couldnt hit a punch-line @ a prom date.. ..We the best at rap..DX can attest to that.. ..Disagree? I stick by the Tommy like Will Smith in Men In Black.. ..The 1 bitches fight 4 is back..I'm Michael Vick.. ..I'm a source of skill, 5 mics'll drop when its time to quit.. ..Nothing can compare to this..the rest can barely spit.. ..ThA Virus brings bio-warfare to the board, a Cyber Terrorist.. Chorus (DX) Time is running out and your watch is now tickin' X out firefox, the entire plot's about to thicken This is cyber terrorism, the desire of our mission Is to isolate our targets, than fire with precision ------------------------------------------------------------------- First degree murder, on everything we write now Torpedo your server, we the reason that the sites down (2) ------------------------------------------------------------------- __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in Last edited by DXavier23; 08-14-2009 at 12:07 PM.

08-13-2009, 10:55 PM	#2
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 117 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	Shit was good; I liked that Tahiry line. But that punchline wordplay is played out. Anyway, you both did your thing so I'll give it a solid 7/10. Stay up. __________________ Last edited by Bunny_Rabbit; 08-14-2009 at 12:16 AM.

08-14-2009, 03:12 AM	#3
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^ Thanks for the feedback..DX you killed this shit homie..any more thoughts?? __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-14-2009, 03:15 AM	#4
ShawnDaDon Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Houston Tx Posts: 560 Repped: 78 Repped 87 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 9 Posts	all i got to say dawg is straight fire this is better than half of the signed rappers in the game __________________ only time when you put ice on ya wrist is when it gets sprained/only time you get ya dick wet is when you piss in the rain/this a tragedy/you get burnt quicker than a calorie/aint this the same shit you pulled with cassidy Serius Jones

08-14-2009, 09:26 AM	#6
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	I have sinned, but I'm still worshiped like the sun god Potential with the pencil, script verses like a young Nas Here to reform the game, rap needs deliverance Yet intelligence goes unnoticed in a sea of ignorance ..Pondering why it be that I have need of violent greed.. ..All u have in common with my reign is you're a silent G.. ..We the best at rap..DX can attest to that.. ..Disagree? I stick by the Tommy like Will Smith in Men In Black.. Aww shit, yall niggas went in. The flow throught DX's verse was basically picture perfect, had much substance as usual along with a few zingers here and there. Line for line, Virus had a bunch of substance and crazy punchlines. For some reason while reading this, I could imagine yall rappin this on Slaughterhouse's "Woodstock" beat. That's how the flow came across. what else is there to say? this shit is dope. Virus check ya PMs my dude. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

08-14-2009, 06:32 AM	#5
T O LEF2 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: SOMEWHERE Posts: 67 Repped: 54 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good collabo

08-14-2009, 11:55 AM	#7
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	Thanks for taking the time to peep our shit..all of you.. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-14-2009, 01:52 PM	#8
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	..DX brings recurrent fear..others serve no purpose here.. ..they just dissapoint..like albums in the current year.. .We the best at rap..DX can attest to that.. ..Disagree? I stick by the Tommy like Will Smith in Men In Black.. -Overall hot verse Virus. Those lines were especially very good. Appreciate the feed from everyone __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

08-14-2009, 02:06 PM	#9
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,379 Repped: 149 Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 154 Times in 98 Posts	Figured i'd return the criticism one your next verse. DX, with your verse the vocabulary you added was impressive. Making the drawn out words and the sylllables correlate was something that showed thought. The content was solid, the overall theme of the punchlines brought out a sort of wisdom-like portrayal so it was pretty interesting to read. My only problem is that when I was reading it small words would throw off the syllables, so if I had to say improve on something i'd just say a little more rhythm. Also like Rabbit said, some of the punches could've been more complex but it'd be contradictory for me to rant on that. Virus, your verse was the more rhythmic/simplistic of the two. I'd say your punchlines were better but in terms of overall writing i'd say I was slightly more intrigued by DX's verse and the things he had to say. I liked the Venessa Hudgeons line and the Men In Black one, yours was definitely creative. The takeover-esque theme of this was completed by the way you approached it, specifically because I felt more aggression from your verse in terms of battling an imaginative opponent. So kudos to you on that one. Overall you guys were pretty much equal and you're obviously still on a higher tier than most members of the forum, as you're hailed. The verse certainly compliments the 'legacy'. So, good job. Stay up.

08-14-2009, 02:51 PM	#10
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ Very in depth and well thought out feed, thank you. and props to you too DX =) __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-15-2009, 02:15 AM	#11
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: miami florida Posts: 294 Repped: 51 Repped 31 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	yo!!!! on the real somebody better call the fire department.....cuz that piece of work was fireeeee.....i wont get into details right now cuz im at work but this is straight geniuos.....virus man u killed that shit man....dx...im not really impressed cuz u always bring it!!!...fuck it what am i saying u fuckin murdered this shiit.... my opinion....the best collab i have ever seen..if i got grade this i would give it 11 out of fuckin 10 man!!..props to both of ya.

08-16-2009, 03:11 PM	#12
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	Bump __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-17-2009, 09:03 PM	#13
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Both of you Killed it on Some Wordplay/Story-telling shit.. I have sinned, but I'm still worshiped like the sun god Potential with the pencil, script verses like a young Nas Here to reform the game, rap needs deliverance Yet intelligence goes unnoticed in a sea of ignorance Still I stay afloat, like the house in Up, the drought's robust But you can't create rain, from clouds of dust Can't you see it's obvious, the state of hip-hop is dichotomous Some starve for food for thought while others demandin just the condiments Crazy Flow DX.. Nothing can compare to this..the rest can barely spit.. ..ThA Virus brings bio-warfare to the board, a Cyber Terrorist.. ..My activity's severing heads..My agenda's for death.. ..Wish is republican change..but they say an elephant never forgets.. ..DX brings recurrent fear..others serve no purpose here.. ..they just dissapoint..like albums in the current year.. Dope Wordplay __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

08-20-2009, 11:47 PM	#14
FacilDinero EasyMoney™ Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Queens Posts: 3,928 Repped: 960 Repped 744 Times in 453 Posts Neg Reps: 260 Neg Repped at 231 Times in 158 Posts	Damn...Dope Drop....Both Came Dope As Fuck....I Lived Virus's Verse A Lil Better But That Dont Mean DX's Wasnt iLL.... DX...I Loved Ya Multies Cuz When Ever Yu Had Them They Werent Forced At All...Dope Shit...Great Lyrics... Hook Was Okay Yo I Really Need To Here This On Audio Lmao....Yall Verses Are Tooo Dope For Anything Of Yalls Not To Be On Audio Virus...Your Imagery Was iLL....I Could Picture Your Verse....Mainly The First Quarter Of Your Verse....Great Lyrics....Wordplay Was Nice __________________ Hawks: 11-2

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