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08-03-2009, 09:56 PM
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Young J
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Overtime
So vivid with the realness, no limits
In case ya dont get it, fake I prohibit They get smoked n burned, then a broken urn I got a grip on the game and I hold it firm I speak spoken word, I turn gold to plat Copped a zip on the block then sold it back Yep exchange, flip like X-games n my clique big like a T-rex gang My flow make it hard to breath like chestpain I'm the king you protect in this chess game Someone explain..when will change come I try n save em but they dont wanna change none I be looking up to heaven when I'm faced with hell Lord knows I tear it up like ACLs n then I crush it even more so I make it swell I'm the champion, you never gon take the belt My reign will end slow, I just fastened it I'm so fascinate I could go crash wit it Just admit it, you know my work ethic I don't work with it... 'til I perfect it Full fuel and my tanks like a ceptics Ranks are epic, Thanks for the credit I go get it, Standards..met But you can't pass the standards I set Im'a threat, I'm demanding affect I take a shot then it lands in the net You know the rest...overtime victory Success comes over time as a mystery In the mean time we deal with misery I realize 'cause I feel the epiphany |
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08-04-2009, 12:59 AM
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propz ......
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08-04-2009, 08:49 PM
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Young J
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Uppin.........
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08-06-2009, 05:46 PM
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Young J
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Where da feed at??
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08-08-2009, 10:16 AM
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Young J
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Im'a extend this verse sooner or later n throw it on my mixtape once I get shit situated...bumpin this one more time
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08-08-2009, 10:55 AM
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08-09-2009, 06:08 AM
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mixtape sounds appropriate, this quick cut choppy lines are audio based, no doubt...I mean other than frees everything starts written I guess, but you know wat i mean, it's hard to feel you 100% when reading rather than listening...but from the just of it I thought it was fairly dope...do you fam, lemme know when u get audio on this. 1
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08-14-2009, 01:49 PM
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definitely would sound hot on audio . You used many effective multis and a flow that was fluent and appropriate for the drop . Good work J
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