Full Effect

YoungJ · 07-31-2009, 06:21 PM

Accompany nobody, call myself boss
My lessons pushed all my students 'til they fell off
In my own lane, smooth like corvette
More vets in the game, that mean you score less
I'm the point guard, all my points made
To get paid, I work hard like conjoined slaves
I'm gaining power back even if I lift less
Got em positive it's crack, no piss test
That's why accomplishments arise in my archive
Evil g-ness, got the mind of a hardrive
Ya need a nurse to care, hurt severe, I persevere
He in a bloodbath thinking that the worst is here
He wearing shells like fashion;turtle gear
Yeah I grow green but smoke purple hair
I don't go back n fourth, no duet piece
I rather shoot at beef, punches like UFC
Supply highlights, they broadcastin all it..
You break a bitch heart, I'm "broad castin" call it
I get deep like Baltic and I flow the same
My material is similar to novacaine...

YoungJ · 08-02-2009, 01:00 PM

upppin....

DXavier23 · 08-02-2009, 02:58 PM

I'm gaining power back even if I lift less
Got em positive it's crack, no piss test

Wattup Prov - definitely a bunch of hot bars in this drop. It flowed very well although you could add in more metaphors, punches, and multis to make your work even better. Good work and im glad to see u posting shit here again

07-31-2009, 06:21 PM	#1
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Full Effect Full Effect Accompany nobody, call myself boss My lessons pushed all my students 'til they fell off In my own lane, smooth like corvette More vets in the game, that mean you score less I'm the point guard, all my points made To get paid, I work hard like conjoined slaves I'm gaining power back even if I lift less Got em positive it's crack, no piss test That's why accomplishments arise in my archive Evil g-ness, got the mind of a hardrive Ya need a nurse to care, hurt severe, I persevere He in a bloodbath thinking that the worst is here He wearing shells like fashion;turtle gear Yeah I grow green but smoke purple hair I don't go back n fourth, no duet piece I rather shoot at beef, punches like UFC Supply highlights, they broadcastin all it.. You break a bitch heart, I'm "broad castin" call it I get deep like Baltic and I flow the same My material is similar to novacaine...

08-02-2009, 02:58 PM	#3
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	I'm gaining power back even if I lift less Got em positive it's crack, no piss test Wattup Prov - definitely a bunch of hot bars in this drop. It flowed very well although you could add in more metaphors, punches, and multis to make your work even better. Good work and im glad to see u posting shit here again __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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08-02-2009, 01:00 PM	#2
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	upppin....