+++Free Association (Acid Trip to Euphoria)+++

Komplex · 07-29-2009, 07:22 AM

Inspired by Ghostface with the stream-of-consciousness rhymes. Making perfect sense is overrated.

Assasination tendencies, the battle scars of memories
Deadly venimous style, criminal mind of the Genovese
My regiment creates a thousand pounds of severe pressure
Maxine screamin from the rec room "Daddy, make it better!"
Now we sippin Don P while listening to Jon B
High science minus a flying fuck, bitch I'm Gahndi!
Super-insane yet kempt, from the pain I'm exempt
Electrostatic shock, I wish it would rain like the Temps
We cookin up blowfish, writing ransom notes and love poems
Enlist the help of Billy Bones, all the vicious thugs know em
Solid gold pinky rings, Moet bottles without the cork
Filet-mignon and grey poupon, we eat dinner without forks
Son you'z an ass kisser, when asked to serve yes is the answer
Assisting niggas with garbage rhymes, the rap Lamont Sanford
On my voyage to Alantis one of the Hoyas tried to supplant this
An epic failure was his desire, just call me Daddy Grant Wish
Heavy weights with hidden darts, poetic yet vicious hearts
Them contracts was lookin sheisty so we fuckin ripped em apart
To make any sense of this you got to be higher than Hendrix
Stanzas of beautiful nothings, Free-association with vengance

Bunny_Rabbit · 07-30-2009, 01:10 AM

I doubt you live a luxurious lifestyle; you're a fucking "text-cee."

Komplex · 07-30-2009, 04:14 AM

^Word fam. The possiblity that maybe I come from a rich family and can actually afford this shit is impossible. That never happened in all of history. *sarcasm*

Why is that a point of discussion anyway? Since when is every lyric taken in a literal context? I'm sure some of the "murders" that occured in your verses never happened either. This is rather petty on your part.

Uppin for feedback.

Komplex · 08-07-2009, 05:15 PM

bump like braille..

YoungJ · 08-07-2009, 09:35 PM

Good shit Plex...vocab and multies on point. Didnt go as hard as what you're capable of but still solid regardless

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-08-2009, 01:50 AM

dope. 10/10.

*Waits for Shogun to get mad*

looooooool but the thing is, it actually entertains me. i like it. even when the dude is dissin me. Back on point (like your rhymes

) i thought it was cool. It was something different, and I think thats what i liked about it. You could have done better, but who really gives a fuck? As writers we write mostly for ourselves anyway..why must every single piece exhaust our entire arsenal? It doesn't. Keep droppin.

Str8Shooter · 08-08-2009, 04:43 AM

Assasination tendencies, the battle scars of memories
Deadly venimous style, criminal mind of the Genovese

Assisting niggas with garbage rhymes, the rap Lamont Sanford

even though the topic was all over this place which u said was intentional this verse still had tight lines. I burst out laughin at the Gahndi part for some reason.

ReFleXiOn · 08-08-2009, 06:37 AM

I mean honestly there'd probly be a lot of hypocricy to my statement, but i enjoyed 100% of this piece. But aside from the fact that I almost enjoy all your pieces it's become hard to critigue, lol... I mean there's always that point that an artist or writer reaches where he exceeds his own expectation on a regular basis... ne way, point being, job well done and if u do want critigue, the only thing i could maybe say is extend the flow, but that's only based on a personal preference which would get u counter feed from others lol, stay up though fam...1

Komplex · 08-08-2009, 08:18 PM

As writers we write mostly for ourselves anyway

Word. it ain't always about tryna impress these lames with 20 metaphors and 30 multies in every verse.

much love on all feedback.

Komplex · 08-10-2009, 09:16 PM

bump.......

Komplex · 08-13-2009, 01:25 AM

last time..

DXavier23 · 08-14-2009, 01:41 PM

I remember reading this the day you dropped it -

definitely a hot piece - you and I seem to have a lot in common as far is how we construct our lyrics. Also I see the same pattern with both of us as we are both adopting a more audio-friendly style to our works. Good shit and anytime you wanna collab or anything , hit me up

Komplex · 08-16-2009, 08:30 PM

^thanx fam. appreciate that.

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-16-2009, 08:45 PM

^^ check ya pm's

Komplex · 08-17-2009, 08:12 PM

yessir......

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 08-17-2009, 08:21 PM

Real Talk at Virus.. I write for only Myself..

But this was ill..

The thing i like bout this piece is that it makes you zone out and picture it..

To make any sense of this you got to be higher than Hendrix
Stanzas of beautiful nothings, Free-association with vengance

^^

07-29-2009, 07:22 AM	#1
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	+++Free Association (Acid Trip to Euphoria)+++ +++Free Association (Acid Trip to Euphoria)+++ Inspired by Ghostface with the stream-of-consciousness rhymes. Making perfect sense is overrated. Assasination tendencies, the battle scars of memories Deadly venimous style, criminal mind of the Genovese My regiment creates a thousand pounds of severe pressure Maxine screamin from the rec room "Daddy, make it better!" Now we sippin Don P while listening to Jon B High science minus a flying fuck, bitch I'm Gahndi! Super-insane yet kempt, from the pain I'm exempt Electrostatic shock, I wish it would rain like the Temps We cookin up blowfish, writing ransom notes and love poems Enlist the help of Billy Bones, all the vicious thugs know em Solid gold pinky rings, Moet bottles without the cork Filet-mignon and grey poupon, we eat dinner without forks Son you'z an ass kisser, when asked to serve yes is the answer Assisting niggas with garbage rhymes, the rap Lamont Sanford On my voyage to Alantis one of the Hoyas tried to supplant this An epic failure was his desire, just call me Daddy Grant Wish Heavy weights with hidden darts, poetic yet vicious hearts Them contracts was lookin sheisty so we fuckin ripped em apart To make any sense of this you got to be higher than Hendrix Stanzas of beautiful nothings, Free-association with vengance __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-30-2009, 01:10 AM	#2
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 885 Repped: 44 Repped 117 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	I doubt you live a luxurious lifestyle; you're a fucking "text-cee." __________________

07-30-2009, 04:14 AM	#3
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	^Word fam. The possiblity that maybe I come from a rich family and can actually afford this shit is impossible. That never happened in all of history. sarcasm Why is that a point of discussion anyway? Since when is every lyric taken in a literal context? I'm sure some of the "murders" that occured in your verses never happened either. This is rather petty on your part. Uppin for feedback. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

08-07-2009, 05:15 PM	#4
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	bump like braille.. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

08-08-2009, 01:50 AM	#6
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,615 Repped: 523 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	dope. 10/10. Waits for Shogun to get mad looooooool but the thing is, it actually entertains me. i like it. even when the dude is dissin me. Back on point (like your rhymes ) i thought it was cool. It was something different, and I think thats what i liked about it. You could have done better, but who really gives a fuck? As writers we write mostly for ourselves anyway..why must every single piece exhaust our entire arsenal? It doesn't. Keep droppin. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-07-2009, 09:35 PM	#5
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Good shit Plex...vocab and multies on point. Didnt go as hard as what you're capable of but still solid regardless

08-08-2009, 04:43 AM	#7
Str8Shooter Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: In the Dungeons of Rap Posts: 38 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Assasination tendencies, the battle scars of memories Deadly venimous style, criminal mind of the Genovese Assisting niggas with garbage rhymes, the rap Lamont Sanford even though the topic was all over this place which u said was intentional this verse still had tight lines. I burst out laughin at the Gahndi part for some reason.

08-08-2009, 06:37 AM	#8
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	I mean honestly there'd probly be a lot of hypocricy to my statement, but i enjoyed 100% of this piece. But aside from the fact that I almost enjoy all your pieces it's become hard to critigue, lol... I mean there's always that point that an artist or writer reaches where he exceeds his own expectation on a regular basis... ne way, point being, job well done and if u do want critigue, the only thing i could maybe say is extend the flow, but that's only based on a personal preference which would get u counter feed from others lol, stay up though fam...1 __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

08-08-2009, 08:18 PM	#9
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	As writers we write mostly for ourselves anyway Word. it ain't always about tryna impress these lames with 20 metaphors and 30 multies in every verse. much love on all feedback. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

08-10-2009, 09:16 PM	#10
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	bump....... __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

08-13-2009, 01:25 AM	#11
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	last time.. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

08-14-2009, 01:41 PM	#12
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	I remember reading this the day you dropped it - definitely a hot piece - you and I seem to have a lot in common as far is how we construct our lyrics. Also I see the same pattern with both of us as we are both adopting a more audio-friendly style to our works. Good shit and anytime you wanna collab or anything , hit me up __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

08-16-2009, 08:30 PM	#13
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	^thanx fam. appreciate that. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

08-16-2009, 08:45 PM	#14
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,615 Repped: 523 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ check ya pm's __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-17-2009, 08:12 PM	#15
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	yessir...... __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

08-17-2009, 08:21 PM	#16
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,900 Repped: 79 Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Real Talk at Virus.. I write for only Myself.. But this was ill.. The thing i like bout this piece is that it makes you zone out and picture it.. To make any sense of this you got to be higher than Hendrix Stanzas of beautiful nothings, Free-association with vengance ^^ __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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