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Old 07-28-2009, 06:08 AM   #1
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Pain In His Life Freestyle

Man FUCK Criminal Thoughts...I see you talkin wreckless...you want it? You bout to get it...i'm on some 'Pain In His Life' shit now...

It's a, verbal assault with homicide i'm at fault/
For callin Criminal Thoughts a bitch with criminal talk/
And listenin to him sqawk, his genitals make him walk/
Can't think for himself cuz of what genitals taught/
Don't you see though? You must be wonderin how it's legal/
I call him on his balls cuz he acts on his EGO (DAMN)/
Niggas don't see though, cuz niggas stay feeble/
I depress this faggot that's why he's grabbin his needle/
His bite is just a beatle's, his gangsta walk is a waltz/
Put a price on his head cuz the nigga's cheap now he's bought/
Niggas see how he's wrought, he's hidin behind walls/
Choose to act on his balls and he's gonna get 'caught'/
Whoa, he was only a hoe not friend but foe/
He's only gonna get swings for the shit he 'throws'/
And we know he sucks, a rappin distraught mistaught slut/
He's been actin on his ego so his 'mind goes nutz'/
And his freestyle is a me-style, disregard that i'm senile/
Make a fool of myself like a failure up on a retrial/
And that's how the line's met, that's this nigga's mindset/
Talk hard because his soul he can't find it/
Erratic, he's like a .1 on demographics/
The millionth whack rapper who's claimin his psychopathic/
What a rap tactic, step back outmatched kid/
Don't you know that your loss is gonna be graphic?/
Die hater, get to laughin now then lie down in craters/
So you can know your casket when you fuckin cry later/
Haaa, why you insisting you're shook up worse than Blizzy/
Busy? I don't reply because I think you must be kidding!/
Second rate verse, second rate beefs in this instance/
Second rate skills, second rate FUCKIN existence/
Grill em, not a JR Writer but I got a rhythm/
This is human selection like lyrical Darwinism/
It's me over you, you're still on the food chain/
Lower class untouchable because you still lose games/
This shit ain't your ruse mane, that shit we have ascertained/
And you have to figure that out when beefin with rappin LAMES/
Haa, you ain't shit till now you were an internet virgin/
I'm a warrior..Slaughterhouse not the shitty internet version...

Hop off my nuts son...I smack you if I fuckin want to...bitch...

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Old 07-28-2009, 06:38 AM   #2
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Angry DaughterGate!! (Heffernan Diss 2) ...............:ninja:

Look out for the new heff diss.

edit: is this a youngking diss?
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