Lyrical Reflections of ReFleXiOn

ReFleXiOn · 07-22-2009, 07:11 AM

Just a lil' sumtin sumtin...had that hood flow goin' tonight, hope y'all enjoy the raw edge.................CHYEA!!!

Sometimes I fly sololy, recognize that if ya really knowin' me,
Cats undestand before I even touch the mic it's pure poetry.
Potent seeds are rhymes I plant into ya minds "openly,"
If ya naked in the streets my gats in time "clothes" the scene.
I time my punches perfectly on heads so u best be watch-chin,
My minds electric like watts-son, on shirlocks holmes I'm knocking.
You walk-kin you first "bourne" straight to the chalk and,
His "identity" is my "ultimatum," the cross-heirs have been locked in.
Flex known to write obituaries, the ill advised preliminaries,
Give ya unwanted fortune cookies, the kind that fuckin' getcha burried.
Step to the future the mirror man will gladly be the visionary,
I "sea" what's in store and fags be drownin' like a dinted ferry.

TheMadWriter · 07-23-2009, 04:36 AM

This had a lot of potential. I like the way you used some wordplay in there like 'clothes' the scene (though it was a little corny), and some of the punches went in and out. The identity/ultimatum was nice, but i'm iffy on watch-chin thing. Overall it was very nice, I got a distinctive mixture between spoken word and rap from the way it flowed..so I think small things could use improvement. Your flow could use a little more consistency syllable-wise but overall this shit was dope.

A well earned 3.5/5

M. Daddy Dollars · 07-23-2009, 06:00 AM

Good shit. I didn't really like the dinted ferry line, IDK it just kinda seemed forced in there. But besides that it was real good.

ReFleXiOn · 07-24-2009, 03:27 AM

thanx for the feed, much obliged

ReFleXiOn · 07-29-2009, 04:39 AM

ne other thoughts? 1

Komplex · 07-29-2009, 07:11 AM

I time my punches perfectly on heads so u best be watch-chin,
My minds electric like watts-son, on shirlocks holmes I'm knocking.
You walk-kin you first "bourne" straight to the chalk and,
His "identity" is my "ultimatum," the cross-heirs have been locked in.

I think I've told you numerous times how much substance your rhymes have. always blending poetry with ill wordplay. Have yet to read a drop that wasn't enjoyable. stay up fam.

ReFleXiOn · 07-30-2009, 06:40 AM

thanx famo, always nice to see you showin love, repsect indeed. 1

Buddha · 07-31-2009, 10:06 AM

wow nigga i guess imma have to ether this dude
talkin up some poetry shit probably reciting shit in the nude
dont even need to see ur reflection to know u dont get pussy
u on ur period bitch well dont go and get all pushy
cuz the last thing i do is have patience with these bastards
second u get outta line ill reup ur shit like it was mastered
have you shitin in a cup for weeks straight
weak sauce ur career is nothin but a weed plate
im major dude ur bantin around on the internet
vyin for attention, well ill smack u with a dinner platee
see how u like me now my momma said knock u out
so thats wat imma do when i pull my walkman out
n just knock like 3 or 4 teeth up out your mouth
show u gay nniggas just what the mother fuck im about

ReFleXiOn · 08-06-2009, 07:41 PM

^lol, wtf??? are you actually serious...

YoungJ · 08-06-2009, 08:56 PM

Lol @ Buddha....

This shit was nice tho my man. Good shit

ReFleXiOn · 08-09-2009, 06:00 AM

thanx bro, much obliged

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-09-2009, 11:36 AM

Lmfao buddha..i had the mad writer do the same shit in my thread..anyway I'm glad i came in and read this, another enjoyable piece from reflexion, it felt like u were kickin either a ghostface or rae type flow..just me..cause i cant hear it, though i'd have liked to. Props my friend, keep dropping

Bunny_Rabbit · 08-09-2009, 02:38 PM

really nice shit, man. I really liked the multi's and how well it flowed all the way through. I thought the last bar was nice.........anyway, I'll give this a 7/10. stay up.

ReFleXiOn · 08-11-2009, 07:15 AM

thanx playa, bumpity bump. 1

07-22-2009, 07:11 AM	#1
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	Lyrical Reflections of ReFleXiOn Lyrical Reflections of ReFleXiOn Just a lil' sumtin sumtin...had that hood flow goin' tonight, hope y'all enjoy the raw edge.................CHYEA!!! Sometimes I fly sololy, recognize that if ya really knowin' me, Cats undestand before I even touch the mic it's pure poetry. Potent seeds are rhymes I plant into ya minds "openly," If ya naked in the streets my gats in time "clothes" the scene. I time my punches perfectly on heads so u best be watch-chin, My minds electric like watts-son, on shirlocks holmes I'm knocking. You walk-kin you first "bourne" straight to the chalk and, His "identity" is my "ultimatum," the cross-heirs have been locked in. Flex known to write obituaries, the ill advised preliminaries, Give ya unwanted fortune cookies, the kind that fuckin' getcha burried. Step to the future the mirror man will gladly be the visionary, I "sea" what's in store and fags be drownin' like a dinted ferry. __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

07-24-2009, 03:27 AM	#4
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	thanx for the feed, much obliged __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

07-29-2009, 04:39 AM	#5
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	ne other thoughts? 1 __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

07-29-2009, 07:11 AM	#6
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	I time my punches perfectly on heads so u best be watch-chin, My minds electric like watts-son, on shirlocks holmes I'm knocking. You walk-kin you first "bourne" straight to the chalk and, His "identity" is my "ultimatum," the cross-heirs have been locked in. I think I've told you numerous times how much substance your rhymes have. always blending poetry with ill wordplay. Have yet to read a drop that wasn't enjoyable. stay up fam. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-30-2009, 06:40 AM	#7
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	thanx famo, always nice to see you showin love, repsect indeed. 1 __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

07-23-2009, 04:36 AM	#2
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,379 Repped: 149 Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 154 Times in 98 Posts	This had a lot of potential. I like the way you used some wordplay in there like 'clothes' the scene (though it was a little corny), and some of the punches went in and out. The identity/ultimatum was nice, but i'm iffy on watch-chin thing. Overall it was very nice, I got a distinctive mixture between spoken word and rap from the way it flowed..so I think small things could use improvement. Your flow could use a little more consistency syllable-wise but overall this shit was dope. A well earned 3.5/5

07-23-2009, 06:00 AM	#3
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 1,871 Repped: 317 Repped 203 Times in 93 Posts Neg Reps: 265 Neg Repped at 120 Times in 67 Posts	Good shit. I didn't really like the dinted ferry line, IDK it just kinda seemed forced in there. But besides that it was real good.

07-31-2009, 10:06 AM	#8
Buddha Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 37 Repped: 9 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	wow nigga i guess imma have to ether this dude talkin up some poetry shit probably reciting shit in the nude dont even need to see ur reflection to know u dont get pussy u on ur period bitch well dont go and get all pushy cuz the last thing i do is have patience with these bastards second u get outta line ill reup ur shit like it was mastered have you shitin in a cup for weeks straight weak sauce ur career is nothin but a weed plate im major dude ur bantin around on the internet vyin for attention, well ill smack u with a dinner platee see how u like me now my momma said knock u out so thats wat imma do when i pull my walkman out n just knock like 3 or 4 teeth up out your mouth show u gay nniggas just what the mother fuck im about

08-06-2009, 07:41 PM	#9
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	^lol, wtf??? are you actually serious... __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

08-06-2009, 08:56 PM	#10
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Lol @ Buddha.... This shit was nice tho my man. Good shit

08-09-2009, 06:00 AM	#11
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	thanx bro, much obliged __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

08-09-2009, 11:36 AM	#12
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	Lmfao buddha..i had the mad writer do the same shit in my thread..anyway I'm glad i came in and read this, another enjoyable piece from reflexion, it felt like u were kickin either a ghostface or rae type flow..just me..cause i cant hear it, though i'd have liked to. Props my friend, keep dropping __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-09-2009, 02:38 PM	#13
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 117 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	really nice shit, man. I really liked the multi's and how well it flowed all the way through. I thought the last bar was nice.........anyway, I'll give this a 7/10. stay up. __________________

08-11-2009, 07:15 AM	#14
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	thanx playa, bumpity bump. 1 __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

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