Is getting cold man...let me warm up..KO!!!!

CriminalThoughtz · 07-19-2009, 08:45 PM

check 1 2...life is short but i ll make sure/ u die slow/
killing your soul/ breakin your skull/with a thunder of flow/
i ll step on your head/ stick a flag on your neck/den smoke a cigar/
use your hair to make my guitar/ then go to the bank and cash my reward/
crazy people dont think....well i dont think you r smart/
im like a elusive receiver that nobody can guard/ (santonio holmes).
i ll put a knife in your stomach all the way to your mouth/
ripping your large intestine.now u testin ur shit from inside N out/
im a fear factor/ for almst every raptor in this world of lizardz/
if u think i ll get capture/homie im a predactor like a white out blizzard/
im the type that ll walk with my handz and clap with my feet/
im a one man gang that ll rip your heart just to have some more beats/
so this is no the occasion/ neither the selection u would want to aim/
god gave me the creation/u can keep the frustation/the replys and the fame/
yeahhhh you can keep it like i keep your girlfriend's hips between my legz/
you can call me professor cuz i ll fuck her progression on top of my deck

crazy_mofo · 07-19-2009, 11:56 PM

this was basic but decent flow

CriminalThoughtz · 07-20-2009, 04:23 PM

i respect your opinion homie thanks for replyin

DXavier23 · 07-20-2009, 08:44 PM

This wasn't bad. You used a simple flow that could possibly work well on audio . Keep improving your craft and try adding some complexity into your work.

CriminalThoughtz · 07-20-2009, 11:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DXavier23

This wasn't bad. You used a simple flow that could possibly work well on audio . Keep improving your craft and try adding some complexity into your work.

thankz homie thats what is all about keep gettin better.

TheRealProtege · 07-21-2009, 01:54 AM

keep writing. only way ull get better. try writing to beats.

M. Daddy Dollars · 07-21-2009, 07:46 AM

Criminal thoughts? More like ponderin some petty crimes/
all i heard was some wack shit line after line/

CriminalThoughtz · 07-21-2009, 09:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheRealProtege

keep writing. only way ull get better. try writing to beats.

thankz for the advice homie i ll do by best.

M. Daddy Dollars · 07-22-2009, 12:09 AM

NiGGA UR TERRIBLE LIKE NOT EVEN CLOSE TO MY LEVEL

CriminalThoughtz · 07-22-2009, 09:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by M. Daddy Dollars

NiGGA UR TERRIBLE LIKE NOT EVEN CLOSE TO MY LEVEL

if u are not goin' to spit just, i rspect your opinion but keep it goin' son

M. Daddy Dollars · 07-22-2009, 11:14 AM

Let me end this shit before it even gets started/I'll rip you up with a syle thats uncharted/
This my special ed flow, go head, call it retarded/Trust me, this ain't for the fainthearted/
Don't worry, I'll take it easy on ya first go round/No heater now, no need for the fo' pound/
OK, duke, go head an fade into the background/Honestly, you try me, and thats dumfound/
Damn, I think I'm really gonna have to take you to class with the quickness/
Ryhmes take a minute to sit in, have you wakin up with mornin sickness/
Like a punch to the gut, you gon' feel this for a long time/
This just part one of this lyrical onslaught you gettin online/

CriminalThoughtz · 07-22-2009, 12:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by M. Daddy Dollars

Let me end this shit before it even gets started/I'll rip you up with a syle thats uncharted/
This my special ed flow, go head, call it retarded/Trust me, this ain't for the fainthearted/
Don't worry, I'll take it easy on ya first go round/No heater now, no need for the fo' pound/
OK, duke, go head an fade into the background/Honestly, you try me, and thats dumfound/
Damn, I think I'm really gonna have to take you to class with the quickness/
Ryhmes take a minute to sit in, have you wakin up with mornin sickness/
Like a punch to the gut, you gon' feel this for a long time/
This just part one of this lyrical onslaught you gettin online/

since u wrote thatt....well take some of this...

u musta have a circus mentality everytime u spit a rap/
cuz all those clown ass barz are making my ass laugh/
dick is for pussies..pussies belong to bitches (you)/
if i hit you with my balls you ll definetaly need so stiches/
electronic 'shocking' but i got 'lock in' all your prision barz in a small room
voltage is 'flowing' intensity is 'showing' just set up the time....boommm/
i ll kill your rhymez in a minute/im a menace so u can call me a felon/
bet u couldnt hit my super fastball even if i pitch you a melon/

M. Daddy Dollars · 07-22-2009, 03:00 PM

I already got you with the jab, time to hit you with the hook/
Reckless, shit's crazy round here, we don't play by any book/
Bring them Florida jewels out west and you might get your shit took/
Just a word of advice, these wack lines you spit are not a good look/
Am I goin to hard to for you to follow, cupcake?/
Thinkin Criminal Thoughts just for your namesake/
Your rhymes so borin, I'm just tryna keep myself awake/
You make barely make tremors, I make the earth quake/
How you gon see me when I'm way above your level/
I'm like up in the clouds, you down chillin with the devil/
You're not a menace, nobody gon call you a felon/
Your records cleaner than that of that bitch Ellen's/
Since you talkin about hittin a pitch big as a melon/
I'mma hit you bitch when I find out you been tellin/
And guess what, your "super fastball" has been caught/
Bitch, you'll never ever act on your Criminal Thoughts/

ThA ViiRu5 · 07-22-2009, 05:00 PM

^^ and this wack bit of anal drippins was tryin to say MY shit was weak? the fuck outta here..that shit was fuckin laughable. Get ya skills up, wipe your tears and come back you fuckin leech.

M. Daddy Dollars · 07-22-2009, 10:58 PM

^ OK NiGGA THATS WHY IM SIGNED TO BELUGA HEIGHTS ENTERTAINMENT N UR A FUCKIN NOBODY ON THE INTERNET .

UR PROBABLY SOME WIGGER BITCH .

CriminalThoughtz · 07-22-2009, 11:01 PM

plis stick to your 8 cuz 16 is depressin'....here we go.

i just finished readin' your shit and is not bad..psych is u-gly/
you are just a lonely child in this jungle so ama call you mo-gly/
sof-tly..thats the meanin' of your raps/plus is off-beaT/
like you are rappin' eatin' crap/
and is ob-vious/that methaphors you lack/
im so conta-gious/like im givin you the crabs/....just popped into my head..

your style is adding and substractin' and for you homie thats that/
my domain is multiplyin' and dividin' so avoid fukin' with my math/
im a phycothic dude/ i ll put venom on your food/
im from an atomic hood/ that ll exterminate your rootz/
i have a picasso mentality yeah i ll paint and decorate your death/
drop u in a neighborhood where 'blue' rules and u dressin all 'red'/
you cant score me a touchdown im in the safety position/
plus all my d-linemen and LBs posses first class intuition/
i ll rip your clothes leavin you naked and expose/
close the door and you ll get raped by a ghost/
im a diabolic child with a crazy sound and you still don believe im a felon?
ok well probably on the next round i ll introduce you to the devil/
my flow is similar to a restaurant but i ll exterminate the leeches/
my punchlines give orders with a power gun yours just do the dishes/
if garbage could have been converted to 'dollarz' u couldnt be more richer/
ill give a satellite signal with 'derek' tv and i ll take the crown like 'fisher'

M. Daddy Dollars · 07-22-2009, 11:07 PM

WOW NiGGA I ETHERED U TWICE NIGGA.

CriminalThoughtz · 07-22-2009, 11:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by M. Daddy Dollars

WOW NiGGA I ETHERED U TWICE NIGGA.

u allucinatin' homie i killed u twice but i guess u cant hande the truth.

M. Daddy Dollars · 07-22-2009, 11:40 PM

WTF???? I GAURANTEE WE HAVE PEOPLE VOTE ON THESE N ILL WIN FOR SURE.

DEREK TV?? CROWN LIKE FISHER?? my flow is similar to a restaurant??

my punchlines give orders with a power gun??

u couldnt be more richer ?? (horrible grammer)

close the door and you ll get raped by a ghost ??

PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME WTF THOSE EVEN MEAN

CriminalThoughtz · 07-22-2009, 11:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by M. Daddy Dollars

WTF???? I GAURANTEE WE HAVE PEOPLE VOTE ON THESE N ILL WIN FOR SURE.

DEREK TV?? CROWN LIKE FISHER?? my flow is similar to a restaurant??

my punchlines give orders with a power gun??

u couldnt be more richer ?? (horrible grammer)

close the door and you ll get raped by a ghost ??

PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME WTF THOSE EVEN MEAN

it means you just got murder....but u still can handle the truth....let people vote and tell their opinioon..i can handle the truth..can u?

TheMadWriter · 07-22-2009, 11:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThA ViiRu5

^^ and this wack bit of anal drippins was tryin to say MY shit was weak? the fuck outta here..that shit was fuckin laughable. Get ya skills up, wipe your tears and come back you fuckin leech.

I see you muthafucka...

crazy_mofo · 07-23-2009, 12:08 AM

rofllmfaofroflmfoaolffmofofmfoaohahahahahahahaha @ this thread

CriminalThoughtz · 07-23-2009, 12:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by crazy_mofo

rofllmfaofroflmfoa
olffmofofmfoaohahahahahahahaha @ this thread

explain yourself homie. is that your opinion? lol

M. Daddy Dollars · 07-23-2009, 01:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CriminalThoughtz

it means you just got murder....but u still can handle the truth....let people vote and tell their opinioon..i can handle the truth..can u?

OK ILL ASK U AGAIN, WTF DO THOSE LINES EVEN MEAN . THEY DONT MAKE SENSE . SERiOUSLY, FLOW LIKE A RESTURAUNT????? THAT DOESNT EVEN MAKE SENSE . AND WHAT IS DEREK TV . OR CROWN LIKE FISCHER .

young_v1t0_ · 07-23-2009, 02:01 AM

he tried to say derek like direct tv.......

07-19-2009, 08:45 PM	#1
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: outside Posts: 315 Repped: 53 Repped 32 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	Is getting cold man...let me warm up..KO!!!! Is getting cold man...let me warm up..KO!!!! check 1 2...life is short but i ll make sure/ u die slow/ killing your soul/ breakin your skull/with a thunder of flow/ i ll step on your head/ stick a flag on your neck/den smoke a cigar/ use your hair to make my guitar/ then go to the bank and cash my reward/ crazy people dont think....well i dont think you r smart/ im like a elusive receiver that nobody can guard/ (santonio holmes). i ll put a knife in your stomach all the way to your mouth/ ripping your large intestine.now u testin ur shit from inside N out/ im a fear factor/ for almst every raptor in this world of lizardz/ if u think i ll get capture/homie im a predactor like a white out blizzard/ im the type that ll walk with my handz and clap with my feet/ im a one man gang that ll rip your heart just to have some more beats/ so this is no the occasion/ neither the selection u would want to aim/ god gave me the creation/u can keep the frustation/the replys and the fame/ yeahhhh you can keep it like i keep your girlfriend's hips between my legz/ you can call me professor cuz i ll fuck her progression on top of my deck

07-20-2009, 08:44 PM	#4
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,784 Repped: 193 Repped 1,685 Times in 146 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	This wasn't bad. You used a simple flow that could possibly work well on audio . Keep improving your craft and try adding some complexity into your work. __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

07-21-2009, 01:54 AM	#6
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,501 Repped: 362 Repped 666 Times in 220 Posts Neg Reps: 211 Neg Repped at 97 Times in 81 Posts	keep writing. only way ull get better. try writing to beats. __________________ myspace.com/therealprotege

07-21-2009, 07:46 AM	#7
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 2,014 Repped: 370 Repped 230 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 309 Neg Repped at 145 Times in 78 Posts	Criminal thoughts? More like ponderin some petty crimes/ all i heard was some wack shit line after line/ __________________ "I am sbrecords and I am fatter, uglier and smellier than you"

07-22-2009, 12:09 AM	#9
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 2,014 Repped: 370 Repped 230 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 309 Neg Repped at 145 Times in 78 Posts	NiGGA UR TERRIBLE LIKE NOT EVEN CLOSE TO MY LEVEL __________________ "I am sbrecords and I am fatter, uglier and smellier than you"

07-19-2009, 11:56 PM	#2
crazy_mofo Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 156 Repped: 1 Repped 4 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 6 Times in 5 Posts	this was basic but decent flow

07-20-2009, 04:23 PM	#3
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: outside Posts: 315 Repped: 53 Repped 32 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	i respect your opinion homie thanks for replyin

07-22-2009, 11:14 AM	#11
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 2,014 Repped: 370 Repped 230 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 309 Neg Repped at 145 Times in 78 Posts	Let me end this shit before it even gets started/I'll rip you up with a syle thats uncharted/ This my special ed flow, go head, call it retarded/Trust me, this ain't for the fainthearted/ Don't worry, I'll take it easy on ya first go round/No heater now, no need for the fo' pound/ OK, duke, go head an fade into the background/Honestly, you try me, and thats dumfound/ Damn, I think I'm really gonna have to take you to class with the quickness/ Ryhmes take a minute to sit in, have you wakin up with mornin sickness/ Like a punch to the gut, you gon' feel this for a long time/ This just part one of this lyrical onslaught you gettin online/ __________________ "I am sbrecords and I am fatter, uglier and smellier than you"

07-22-2009, 03:00 PM	#13
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 2,014 Repped: 370 Repped 230 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 309 Neg Repped at 145 Times in 78 Posts	I already got you with the jab, time to hit you with the hook/ Reckless, shit's crazy round here, we don't play by any book/ Bring them Florida jewels out west and you might get your shit took/ Just a word of advice, these wack lines you spit are not a good look/ Am I goin to hard to for you to follow, cupcake?/ Thinkin Criminal Thoughts just for your namesake/ Your rhymes so borin, I'm just tryna keep myself awake/ You make barely make tremors, I make the earth quake/ How you gon see me when I'm way above your level/ I'm like up in the clouds, you down chillin with the devil/ You're not a menace, nobody gon call you a felon/ Your records cleaner than that of that bitch Ellen's/ Since you talkin about hittin a pitch big as a melon/ I'mma hit you bitch when I find out you been tellin/ And guess what, your "super fastball" has been caught/ Bitch, you'll never ever act on your Criminal Thoughts/ __________________ "I am sbrecords and I am fatter, uglier and smellier than you"

07-22-2009, 05:00 PM	#14
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,746 Repped: 610 Repped 196 Times in 115 Posts Neg Reps: 89 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	^^ and this wack bit of anal drippins was tryin to say MY shit was weak? the fuck outta here..that shit was fuckin laughable. Get ya skills up, wipe your tears and come back you fuckin leech. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

07-22-2009, 10:58 PM	#15
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 2,014 Repped: 370 Repped 230 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 309 Neg Repped at 145 Times in 78 Posts	^ OK NiGGA THATS WHY IM SIGNED TO BELUGA HEIGHTS ENTERTAINMENT N UR A FUCKIN NOBODY ON THE INTERNET . UR PROBABLY SOME WIGGER BITCH . __________________ "I am sbrecords and I am fatter, uglier and smellier than you"

07-22-2009, 11:01 PM	#16
CriminalThoughtz Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: outside Posts: 315 Repped: 53 Repped 32 Times in 28 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 9 Posts	plis stick to your 8 cuz 16 is depressin'....here we go. i just finished readin' your shit and is not bad..psych is u-gly/ you are just a lonely child in this jungle so ama call you mo-gly/ sof-tly..thats the meanin' of your raps/plus is off-beaT/ like you are rappin' eatin' crap/ and is ob-vious/that methaphors you lack/ im so conta-gious/like im givin you the crabs/....just popped into my head.. your style is adding and substractin' and for you homie thats that/ my domain is multiplyin' and dividin' so avoid fukin' with my math/ im a phycothic dude/ i ll put venom on your food/ im from an atomic hood/ that ll exterminate your rootz/ i have a picasso mentality yeah i ll paint and decorate your death/ drop u in a neighborhood where 'blue' rules and u dressin all 'red'/ you cant score me a touchdown im in the safety position/ plus all my d-linemen and LBs posses first class intuition/ i ll rip your clothes leavin you naked and expose/ close the door and you ll get raped by a ghost/ im a diabolic child with a crazy sound and you still don believe im a felon? ok well probably on the next round i ll introduce you to the devil/ my flow is similar to a restaurant but i ll exterminate the leeches/ my punchlines give orders with a power gun yours just do the dishes/ if garbage could have been converted to 'dollarz' u couldnt be more richer/ ill give a satellite signal with 'derek' tv and i ll take the crown like 'fisher'

07-22-2009, 11:07 PM	#17
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 2,014 Repped: 370 Repped 230 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 309 Neg Repped at 145 Times in 78 Posts	WOW NiGGA I ETHERED U TWICE NIGGA. __________________ "I am sbrecords and I am fatter, uglier and smellier than you"

07-22-2009, 11:40 PM	#19
M. Daddy Dollars ***** I'm Me Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 2,014 Repped: 370 Repped 230 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 309 Neg Repped at 145 Times in 78 Posts	WTF???? I GAURANTEE WE HAVE PEOPLE VOTE ON THESE N ILL WIN FOR SURE. DEREK TV?? CROWN LIKE FISHER?? my flow is similar to a restaurant?? my punchlines give orders with a power gun?? u couldnt be more richer ?? (horrible grammer) close the door and you ll get raped by a ghost ?? PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME WTF THOSE EVEN MEAN __________________ "I am sbrecords and I am fatter, uglier and smellier than you"

07-23-2009, 12:08 AM	#22
crazy_mofo Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 156 Repped: 1 Repped 4 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 6 Times in 5 Posts	rofllmfaofroflmfoaolffmofofmfoaohahahahahahahaha @ this thread

07-23-2009, 02:01 AM	#25
young_v1t0_ [HiiGH VaRiieTy H.V] Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: N.Y.C Where I Can Kill Ya Beat & Beat The Murder Case [SouR D FiiEnD] Posts: 4,368 Repped: 1,090 Repped 1,770 Times in 635 Posts Neg Reps: 60 Neg Repped at 32 Times in 30 Posts	he tried to say derek like direct tv....... __________________ "Smoke So Much I Thought Soberness Was A New Drug, African Roots, So You Can Say "Kush" Is In Dude Blood"

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