* - Warriors- Slaughterhouse (HHB) - [Plex] [PB] [DX] [V]

ThA ViiRu5 · 07-13-2009, 08:38 PM

[Komplex]

Riddle raps rapidly written in potent mixtures of ink and blood....
You faggots obsession with my existence nearly reaches the brink of love
Pseudo-pschyics predict my next attack, "What is he thinking of?"
I'm a dying breed,a true warrior in an endless ring of scrubs
In lyrical stampedes I rush and crush haters roadblocks
Your value's like Malone when he got traded to the Lakers, no stock
Face it, you're not as gifted son as the Apocalyptic one....
Verses is murderous without any mention of clips and guns

[PBMaSteRMiNdiN]

Barbarian Emcee.. Warrior with a Vicodin Dose ..
Can't Diagnose, Pop Pills like Questions but I ain't Trying to Propose..
I'm Stuck in this Cycle... still Carrying grams..
Of Pills that have me Off the Wall like Micheal buried with Vans..
.. I bring Bars of Agony.. with my Beast Alliance..
Combining Punches with Knowledge.. just Sweeter the Science.
Get Fathered with Pro-tools.. & Never come Conceited.
But I'm like Crooked how I Slaughter my Own Crew.. Forever Undefeated.

[DXavier23]

Not satisfied with rap, time to overthrow the regime
Your not suited for the game, you showed up in jeans
Nowadays, rappers pose like they're in photo machines
Fake houses, fake cars, yeah you know the routine
My flow is esteemed, no acting, you know its real
I cause damage to mics, like Joe Jackson and Holyfield
I dont let my beef mix with cheddar, like kosher meals
The verdict says Im better, so let up, they're no appeals

[ThA ViiRu5]

I'm monster of rhymes, noxious, toxic with mine..u cant ignore the obvious signs..
I 'Pass-words' like a pro, yall the 'Confirm box' always tryna 'copy my lines'
We cannot be compared slouch, we'll leave you speech impaired..o-o-ouch..
We the best..so 'dont sleep on us'..we Steve Mcnair's couch..
I give the whores the dick, hot to the core..& whats more I'm sick
..Ya'll surrounded by more 'boo's/booze' than alcoholics in horror flicks..
..Ya fawcett's leakin..farrah type, I share my life w/ apparent strife
It 'aint in the cards for you', today we shake ya 'pair-a-dice/paradise'..

[Komplex]

In silence capture the deadly essence of this lyrical violent rapture
I rise through disaster with the brilliance of a thriving master
Trickle-down effect, rhymes reverberate like spinal fractures
Lying bastards reach denial in the midst of their final chapters
Hip Hop's in critical lockdown and I'm tryna save it quick
Cause my flow is the "key to the locks/Lox" like Jadakiss
I must escape the darkside and tap into my heart's pride
And find the deepest inspiration to not let the art die

[PBMaSteRMiNdiN]

I'm having Murderous Dreams cus I Smoke like a Metric Ton..
I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son..
Keep these Smith & Wessons that'll Leave you No Choice..
Premier them to your Face.. BOOM! no Royce..
I'm God's Son.. Fist up.. slip the Clips in..
To the 2 Pieces/Peaces I hold in the AIR like Richard Nixon..
Venomous Rounds.. I'ma Flood the Streets After this,
On that John Lennon shit.. I'ma Piece Activist.. Blam!

[DXavier23]

If I see your crew mixed with people at a party
Ill put a hole in one, like an eagle on a par three
Slow is your breaths, and feeble is your heartbeat
To the grave from the cradle, to a wheel chair from a car seat
Rappers tryna start beef, why you circulating lies for
Making fake resumes, but an emcee is a job that you can't apply for
This is just a warning to the cheats, but soon I will apply force
You saw what happened to Steve McNair on July fourth

[ThA ViiRu5]

Since my inception I came wit the Cain, & I'll refrain from the names
but if you 'play me, you'll lose'..im the 'stuffed animal game wit the crane'
I hope u can afford a bible, I'm packin the sword and rifle
We'll hand u a death so brutal, they'll talk about it more than Michael's
Until heaven's gate, you got a 'crooked view'; i got a 'weapon waist'
U been led astray, set a 'date'..ive been in more 'holes-in-one' than the golf balls of Tiger..

IMPRESSIVE EH?

Death awaits..for all the talentless freaks, plan for defeat..
Those who can manage to speak w/ an advantage to me? BULLSHIT..

Like Lotus winning that battle wit me

BOOM!!...........

Fre3dom · 07-13-2009, 09:20 PM

hmmm...wouldnt classify some of you as eligable to be hhb's slaughterhouse...but whatever

most of this was good....but there was some flaws

Virus has lines that are ridiculously stretched which ruin his verse

some multies were incredibly forced and some punched were played out

and why are certain concepts/events almost recycled in ur verses....like that McNair shit and the MJ dying.........if one of you spits that concept the rest of you shouldnt mention a similar 1....just too samey and recycled

but....there were a lot of positives too....some punches were dope...like the McNairs chair one...and PB's verses were really good.....komplex had some sick lines too....

DX i felt was a little shown up here...just couldnt cut it with the rest of you....and virus was too stretched and i dunno just his verses wernt that dope to me

But all in all...a good drop...and better then most things posted in this section...so good shit guys

but I think you should only do 1 verse each next time and focus on a few things b4 u drop....thats real feedback

ThA ViiRu5 · 07-13-2009, 09:25 PM

Damn stretched bars..shit'll haunt me my entire life. Good looks on the feed. All verses were sent to me so nobody knew if each other had used similar bars..and I rly didnt feel like re-writing bars or getting others to rewrite bars so that they were different..would you beieve that the rough drafts of my verses were even more stretched?

. It's the truth. Can't escape the shit. Anyway everybody came correct, to my knowledge DX was kinda rushed..Komplex had the vocab and flow, PB came hard (pause) both verses yea and i could have came tougher (no homo)..not gonna say i was rushed or make excuses..cause i wasnt..i was just lazy..lol good looks on the feed, thanks for taking the time, and uppin for more

Fre3dom · 07-13-2009, 09:35 PM

^^^ that explains the similar concepts and stuff then, thanks for clearing that up

With the stretched bars thing...you gotta act like your writing to a beat...so if it takes too long to say on a beat its prob too long for a written too...hopefully that helps..coz if it wasnt so stretched it would be a lot more effective

propz for being 1 of the only ppl on here that can take constructive criticism tho...repped you

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-13-2009, 10:52 PM

Plex killllt it.. Virus killt it.. Dont sleep on my Wordplay

Dx seemed like he rushed his shit.. wasn't bad though

DXavier23 · 07-14-2009, 01:15 AM

I came pretty weak here, i can't even front. It was very rushed, and sometimes my creativity takes a little more time to come into effect. Anyway, I read everyones bars and it seemed cool. Pce out

Str8Shooter · 07-14-2009, 02:45 AM

Barbarian Emcee.. Warrior with a Vicodin Dose ..
Can't Diagnose, Pop Pills like Questions but I ain't Trying to Propose..

flow is esteemed, no acting, you know its real
I cause damage to mics, like Joe Jackson and Holyfield

Hip Hop's in critical lockdown and I'm tryna save it quick
Cause my flow is the "key to the locks/Lox" like Jadakiss

Since my inception I came wit the Cain, & I'll refrain from the names
but if you 'play me, you'll lose'..im the 'stuffed animal game wit the crane'

damn four of the best MCs on the site collabin. all of yall killed it but Komplex went the hardest followed by PB. DX and Viirus verses were dope too but there were a few flaws. Even still yall shit better than 98% of the board. Can't tell yall how ill this whole thing was.

FacilDinero · 07-14-2009, 10:48 AM

Type Dope....Woulda Loved To Hear This On Audio =/....I Think PB And Komplex Came The Best....But All Were Dope No Doubt

Blizzy · 07-14-2009, 11:16 AM

I'm Stuck in this Cycle... still Carrying grams..
Of Pills that have me Off the Wall like Micheal buried with Vans..

^DAMN!!!

PB had the best verses.....flow was off at times but great wordplay, Plex was next....came on some lyrical shit....multi's and flow were ridiculous and had some good meta's....Virus flow was poor but multi's and wordplay were dope but both verses seemed average for you....DX's verses were just easy, i mean they flowed well and had multi's but had no 'Whoa' factor....good collab tho y'all...

(lol @ me bein' dropped

)

ThA ViiRu5 · 07-14-2009, 02:09 PM

^^ Slaughterhouse (HHB) is a family. You're still on the team.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-14-2009, 02:43 PM

Thanks for the Feed Blizz, Facil & Str8.

Uppppppppp

Komplex · 07-29-2009, 07:06 AM

almost forgot about this. Everybody came through and killed this shit as I expected. IMO, DX was heavily slept on.

My flow is esteemed, no acting, you know its real
I cause damage to mics, like Joe Jackson and Holyfield
I dont let my beef mix with cheddar, like kosher meals
The verdict says Im better, so let up, they're no appeals

^ill shit.

But I'm like Crooked how I Slaughter my Own Crew.. Forever Undefeated.

^lmao, I'd like to know when this fictional event took place?

dope shit from everybody. stay up.

07-13-2009, 08:38 PM	#1
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	* - Warriors- Slaughterhouse (HHB) - [Plex] [PB] [DX] [V] * - Warriors- Slaughterhouse (HHB) - [Plex] [PB] [DX] [V] [Komplex] Riddle raps rapidly written in potent mixtures of ink and blood.... You faggots obsession with my existence nearly reaches the brink of love Pseudo-pschyics predict my next attack, "What is he thinking of?" I'm a dying breed,a true warrior in an endless ring of scrubs In lyrical stampedes I rush and crush haters roadblocks Your value's like Malone when he got traded to the Lakers, no stock Face it, you're not as gifted son as the Apocalyptic one.... Verses is murderous without any mention of clips and guns [PBMaSteRMiNdiN] Barbarian Emcee.. Warrior with a Vicodin Dose .. Can't Diagnose, Pop Pills like Questions but I ain't Trying to Propose.. I'm Stuck in this Cycle... still Carrying grams.. Of Pills that have me Off the Wall like Micheal buried with Vans.. .. I bring Bars of Agony.. with my Beast Alliance.. Combining Punches with Knowledge.. just Sweeter the Science. Get Fathered with Pro-tools.. & Never come Conceited. But I'm like Crooked how I Slaughter my Own Crew.. Forever Undefeated. [DXavier23] Not satisfied with rap, time to overthrow the regime Your not suited for the game, you showed up in jeans Nowadays, rappers pose like they're in photo machines Fake houses, fake cars, yeah you know the routine My flow is esteemed, no acting, you know its real I cause damage to mics, like Joe Jackson and Holyfield I dont let my beef mix with cheddar, like kosher meals The verdict says Im better, so let up, they're no appeals [ThA ViiRu5] I'm monster of rhymes, noxious, toxic with mine..u cant ignore the obvious signs.. I 'Pass-words' like a pro, yall the 'Confirm box' always tryna 'copy my lines' We cannot be compared slouch, we'll leave you speech impaired..o-o-ouch.. We the best..so 'dont sleep on us'..we Steve Mcnair's couch.. I give the whores the dick, hot to the core..& whats more I'm sick ..Ya'll surrounded by more 'boo's/booze' than alcoholics in horror flicks.. ..Ya fawcett's leakin..farrah type, I share my life w/ apparent strife It 'aint in the cards for you', today we shake ya 'pair-a-dice/paradise'.. [Komplex] In silence capture the deadly essence of this lyrical violent rapture I rise through disaster with the brilliance of a thriving master Trickle-down effect, rhymes reverberate like spinal fractures Lying bastards reach denial in the midst of their final chapters Hip Hop's in critical lockdown and I'm tryna save it quick Cause my flow is the "key to the locks/Lox" like Jadakiss I must escape the darkside and tap into my heart's pride And find the deepest inspiration to not let the art die [PBMaSteRMiNdiN] I'm having Murderous Dreams cus I Smoke like a Metric Ton.. I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son.. Keep these Smith & Wessons that'll Leave you No Choice.. Premier them to your Face.. BOOM! no Royce.. I'm God's Son.. Fist up.. slip the Clips in.. To the 2 Pieces/Peaces I hold in the AIR like Richard Nixon.. Venomous Rounds.. I'ma Flood the Streets After this, On that John Lennon shit.. I'ma Piece Activist.. Blam! [DXavier23] If I see your crew mixed with people at a party Ill put a hole in one, like an eagle on a par three Slow is your breaths, and feeble is your heartbeat To the grave from the cradle, to a wheel chair from a car seat Rappers tryna start beef, why you circulating lies for Making fake resumes, but an emcee is a job that you can't apply for This is just a warning to the cheats, but soon I will apply force You saw what happened to Steve McNair on July fourth [ThA ViiRu5] Since my inception I came wit the Cain, & I'll refrain from the names but if you 'play me, you'll lose'..im the 'stuffed animal game wit the crane' I hope u can afford a bible, I'm packin the sword and rifle We'll hand u a death so brutal, they'll talk about it more than Michael's Until heaven's gate, you got a 'crooked view'; i got a 'weapon waist' U been led astray, set a 'date'..ive been in more 'holes-in-one' than the golf balls of Tiger.. IMPRESSIVE EH? Death awaits..for all the talentless freaks, plan for defeat.. Those who can manage to speak w/ an advantage to me? BULLSHIT.. Like Lotus winning that battle wit me BOOM!!........... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

07-13-2009, 09:25 PM	#3
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	Damn stretched bars..shit'll haunt me my entire life. Good looks on the feed. All verses were sent to me so nobody knew if each other had used similar bars..and I rly didnt feel like re-writing bars or getting others to rewrite bars so that they were different..would you beieve that the rough drafts of my verses were even more stretched? . It's the truth. Can't escape the shit. Anyway everybody came correct, to my knowledge DX was kinda rushed..Komplex had the vocab and flow, PB came hard (pause) both verses yea and i could have came tougher (no homo)..not gonna say i was rushed or make excuses..cause i wasnt..i was just lazy..lol good looks on the feed, thanks for taking the time, and uppin for more __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

07-13-2009, 10:52 PM	#5
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,907 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Plex killllt it.. Virus killt it.. Dont sleep on my Wordplay Dx seemed like he rushed his shit.. wasn't bad though __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-14-2009, 01:15 AM	#6
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,766 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	I came pretty weak here, i can't even front. It was very rushed, and sometimes my creativity takes a little more time to come into effect. Anyway, I read everyones bars and it seemed cool. Pce out __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

07-14-2009, 10:48 AM	#8
FacilDinero EasyMoney™ Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Queens Posts: 3,943 Repped: 973 Repped 746 Times in 455 Posts Neg Reps: 262 Neg Repped at 231 Times in 158 Posts	Type Dope....Woulda Loved To Hear This On Audio =/....I Think PB And Komplex Came The Best....But All Were Dope No Doubt __________________ Hawks: 11-3

07-13-2009, 09:20 PM	#2
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	hmmm...wouldnt classify some of you as eligable to be hhb's slaughterhouse...but whatever most of this was good....but there was some flaws Virus has lines that are ridiculously stretched which ruin his verse some multies were incredibly forced and some punched were played out and why are certain concepts/events almost recycled in ur verses....like that McNair shit and the MJ dying.........if one of you spits that concept the rest of you shouldnt mention a similar 1....just too samey and recycled but....there were a lot of positives too....some punches were dope...like the McNairs chair one...and PB's verses were really good.....komplex had some sick lines too.... DX i felt was a little shown up here...just couldnt cut it with the rest of you....and virus was too stretched and i dunno just his verses wernt that dope to me But all in all...a good drop...and better then most things posted in this section...so good shit guys but I think you should only do 1 verse each next time and focus on a few things b4 u drop....thats real feedback

07-13-2009, 09:35 PM	#4
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	^^^ that explains the similar concepts and stuff then, thanks for clearing that up With the stretched bars thing...you gotta act like your writing to a beat...so if it takes too long to say on a beat its prob too long for a written too...hopefully that helps..coz if it wasnt so stretched it would be a lot more effective propz for being 1 of the only ppl on here that can take constructive criticism tho...repped you

07-14-2009, 02:45 AM	#7
Str8Shooter Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: In the Dungeons of Rap Posts: 38 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Barbarian Emcee.. Warrior with a Vicodin Dose .. Can't Diagnose, Pop Pills like Questions but I ain't Trying to Propose.. flow is esteemed, no acting, you know its real I cause damage to mics, like Joe Jackson and Holyfield Hip Hop's in critical lockdown and I'm tryna save it quick Cause my flow is the "key to the locks/Lox" like Jadakiss Since my inception I came wit the Cain, & I'll refrain from the names but if you 'play me, you'll lose'..im the 'stuffed animal game wit the crane' damn four of the best MCs on the site collabin. all of yall killed it but Komplex went the hardest followed by PB. DX and Viirus verses were dope too but there were a few flaws. Even still yall shit better than 98% of the board. Can't tell yall how ill this whole thing was.

07-14-2009, 11:16 AM	#9
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,369 Repped: 691 Repped 347 Times in 160 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 26 Posts	I'm Stuck in this Cycle... still Carrying grams.. Of Pills that have me Off the Wall like Micheal buried with Vans.. ^DAMN!!! PB had the best verses.....flow was off at times but great wordplay, Plex was next....came on some lyrical shit....multi's and flow were ridiculous and had some good meta's....Virus flow was poor but multi's and wordplay were dope but both verses seemed average for you....DX's verses were just easy, i mean they flowed well and had multi's but had no 'Whoa' factor....good collab tho y'all... (lol @ me bein' dropped ) __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

07-14-2009, 02:09 PM	#10
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ Slaughterhouse (HHB) is a family. You're still on the team. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

07-14-2009, 02:43 PM	#11
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,907 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Thanks for the Feed Blizz, Facil & Str8. Uppppppppp __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-29-2009, 07:06 AM	#12
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	almost forgot about this. Everybody came through and killed this shit as I expected. IMO, DX was heavily slept on. My flow is esteemed, no acting, you know its real I cause damage to mics, like Joe Jackson and Holyfield I dont let my beef mix with cheddar, like kosher meals The verdict says Im better, so let up, they're no appeals ^ill shit. But I'm like Crooked how I Slaughter my Own Crew.. Forever Undefeated. ^lmao, I'd like to know when this fictional event took place? dope shit from everybody. stay up. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

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